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Reviews for The Wedding - COMPLETE

By : LaBibliographe
  • From ladyravenna on May 23, 2007
    "With a mighty shudder, Lucius let go and his magnificent rod gushed hot cum like a flamethrower all over his torso, his face, and the sheets in accompaniment to his litany of appreciative pornographic curses."

    lol. I just love that sentence and that last part about a litany of appreciative pornographic curses. It made my day to read that.
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  • From Drkstdwn262 on May 23, 2007
    excellent as usual.
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  • From nonentity on May 23, 2007
    I love the story and all, but one little quibble in chap 35--her eyes are "pansy brown"? I guess you're talking about the coloring inside yellow pansies? The phrase threw me off a bit.
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  • From ANON - Michelle on May 23, 2007
    Blimey, that's one way to shut him the heck up! Sounds like fun :D

    I haven't reviewed before - sorry - just found this a couple of days ago and have been getting all caught up. I'm enjoying your story tremendously! You have a very interesting and original premise, and I find your characterizations quite believable. Thanks for sharing!
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  • From on May 23, 2007
    There's not much I wouldn't give to be in Hermione's shoes right now! If Lucius could just get over his emotional block, he'd be perfect! (We can't have that though, can we?) If he was perfect, she wouldn't get to chain him to the bed, and that would just ruin my evening!
    Can't wait for more!
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  • From on May 23, 2007
    Wonderful chapter, as usual!
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  • From DB1 on May 23, 2007
    @34. lucius is sweet with the caring and being overprotective thing. update soon

    *DB*
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  • From lilbitbord on May 21, 2007
    Lol, oh Lucius still has a lot to learn about trusting his wife, he should have inspected the package more carefully before he accused her. I still think Hermione probably should have told him that they were sugarless and not hid them from him. Of course he probably wouldn't have liked it anyway. I use to hide food too when I was preganant, but for me it wasn't about hiding it from my husband because he would have been upset. It was more about the fact that I had a secret stash that nobody knew about and I didn't have to share them, they were Milano cookies from Pepperidge Farm :)


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  • From LustBlood on May 21, 2007
    LoL.... oh my goodness... I would hex him into next week! Has Luscius ever even heard of the word 'grovel'? I doubt it... but it does seem he needs to get a little familiar with it, eh? Lovely chapter. About time he got a wake-up call, although he needs plenty more. Can't wait to see how he's going to work through the apology.
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  • From willowgirl on May 21, 2007
    I think Lucius needs to let Hermione go to a muggle mall and buy one of those BIG cookies they have there. I think that would help make up for his mistake.
    Wow, Hermione is a better pregnant woman than I ever was. I lived on cherry kool aid(I didn't hold back on the sugar when I made it) and pizza. Then I would wash it all down with a candy bar. Yeah I was a sad case. Don't worry the baby turned out fine. I was better behaved with my other pregnancies. Maybe it's a first pregnancy thing?
    Looks like we are moving right a long with the pregnancy. I can't wait to see how Lucius acts when Hermione is in labor.
    I can't wait for Lucius apology. Don't be to hard on him Hermione. Then again, she should really milk this apology. I don't think she will be hearing to many of them come from his pureblooded mouth.
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  • From Hollypopuk on May 21, 2007
    Lol, loving it - as I'm currently also in Hermione's 'state' I can relate totally :) Looking forward to Lucius talking his way out of this...hehehe. *give you some sugar-loaded cookies*
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  • From LVanna on May 21, 2007
    Ahhh found the site I read it on...it's http://wwwdoteffingpotdotcom/ has list of British slang/words and what we here in the States would call it.
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  • From LVanna on May 21, 2007
    LOL Great chapter!

    As for the underwear question, I believe it's knickers for women and pants for men ( can't remember where I read that though.)
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  • From angelnomiko on May 21, 2007
    man .. he should have look at the bag first before talking to mione like that ..... please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

    angel
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  • From ccrawley on May 21, 2007
    Wouldn't you think he would me more anal. Love the story.
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