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Reviews for The Wedding - COMPLETE

By : LaBibliographe

From ANON - kristi on May 20, 2007
Ok, I'm appeased at the thought of a future story in the works. It gives me something to look forward to. Cute chapter despite Lucius' blunder. I'm sure he'll find a way to apologize without actually saying "I'm Sorry." He's a Slyth, he'll think of something. Hermione is absolutely awesome. That's my favorite line in this whole story, "I'll be accepting apologies all afternoon." Pure classic! I love it!
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From wicraven on May 20, 2007
Great post, love the story, can't wait until you post again, so please post again soon. Thanks
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From ShilohDarke on May 20, 2007
Ch 33 -- I really wondered when you gave me the review on G.C. and asked what had prompted me to write in the beach in Hermione's dream. After reading the chapter, I definitely had a smile on my face.I certainly could understand Hermione's spurts of energy. My energy spurts with my first pregnancy always came in the middle of the night! Wonder if that has anything to do with my being a nocturnal creature at heart??? Anyway, That chapter made me smile and I could just imagine Lucius' frustration at Hermione being so dern horny. And at some of the most unfortunate times... Too bad though, cause it comes with the teritory.

Ch 34 -- OUCH! He really stuck the foot down his throat that time, huh? I again understand his concern, but he really should have paid more attention to the bag before he censored her so deeply. It probably made her feel reminded that he still has some issues about trying to trust her. A reminder she really doesn't need to have to deal with during her pregnany.

I love both of these chapters and I am sorry it took me til now to get them reviewed for you. I just finally got my wish this past week and started working nights,instead of having to try to deal with getting up in the god-awful still dark morning... which opens up a new window to my writing, since I can take my laptop to work and use it to write between my rounds... YAH!!! Unfortunately, There is no wireless internet on the job, so I have to wait till I get home to be able to read and review... Anyway, I waited til my first night off so I would be able to give you a review that would do your story justice!!!

I look forward to more!

Shiloh
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From on May 20, 2007
Hmm..... Looks like Lucius is going to have to swallow his pride and apologize to Hermione. Will he do it? CAN he do it? I guess we'll see in the next chapter.
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From ANON - Wilson on May 20, 2007
Nice chapter!! Although it does make me wonder what the point of being a wizard is, if you can't make double fudge brownies sugar free, calorie free and fat free with a wave of the wand. I'd take that over flying any day!
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From ladyravenna on May 20, 2007
Short, but very sweet. I sort of liked reading Lucius having his foot stuck in his mouth. He deserved it, and I think so did Hermione.
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From misslala on May 20, 2007
hahaha SUGARLESS!!! That's great! ;) Poor Hermione, trying so hard to deal with Lucius' madness through this pregnancy! It's great, and I love it! I can't wait for an update!
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From ANON - kittycat30 on May 20, 2007
Where to start? This update trollop *smirk* wanted a longer update!!! OK, I really don't care about that... this chapter was so great! I love it when Hermione is right and I cannot wait to see how Lucius sucks up to her :) I can't wait for his very steamy bathroom apology :)
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From LeahLove08 on May 20, 2007
How dare you end it there!!! He follows her into the bathroom and then....WHAT?! MORE! I love this! More! And, I am perfectly okay with no Draco. :D
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From ANON - L>I
i liked that chapter, its about time he learnt that he'd have to trust her! Update soon!
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From catysmom1028 on May 20, 2007
I like it. Please update soon.

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From ANON - Jessika-chan on May 20, 2007
I LOVE!!! this story...It has some of the best characterization of Lucius that I've seen in a story, especially a Lucius dealing with the light winning. So many people see him as purely evil, but I agree with your assessment. He's not evil at all, just misguided by family ideas and a bit guarded.

Please update soon! I am devouring this story like crazy!
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From ANON - lila pause on May 20, 2007
i just read the whole story so far... you did a great job...can't wait for another update....
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From ANON - Jenn on May 20, 2007
I just thought I'd tell you again that I LOVE THIS STORY!

As I mentioned in my last review I am doing my leaving exams at the moment and this story takes my mind away of all the stuff I have to study.

This chapter is great and as I have my first written exam (German) tomorrow I am particularly happy that you updated today! GREAT!

One question though: What do you call knickers then???

xox,
Jenn
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From sheherazade on May 20, 2007
Yes, another chapter so soon. With these updates you are really spoiling us!

Ha ha, Lucius got his just (sugar-free) desserts for jumping to conclusions there, didn't he? And he's been keeping up the cotton-wool wrapping for six months now! He really is dedicated to this enterprise. Oh, and fab word of the day - bellicosity. Got to work that one in somewhere.

On the knicker front, it's generally only used for women's underwear. Oh, and I went to school with a Lucius, and he pronounced it 'Lucy-us' (I think you posed this question a while back?) Malfoy does seem more of a Looshus, though, for some reason. More like 'luscious', I suppose...
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