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Reviews for The Wedding - COMPLETE

By : LaBibliographe
  • From LustBlood on May 09, 2007
    LoL. Never a middle ground for Luscius, eh? Always all the way, or no way. Very nice characterization, and the story is flowing wonderfully. Are the Snapes going to make an appearance? I like their pairing a lot too! :D
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  • From lilbitbord on May 09, 2007
    Wow Lucius really was trying to control every aspect of this pregnancy, I glad Hermione put her foot down. You have enough to worry about when your pregnant, without your husband controling your every move. I hope now Lucius will be able to lay his past to rest and focus in the present where is a fiesty little witch who is falling in love with him. Can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - BuffyXO on May 09, 2007
    Oh dear, what wonderful new chapters you have added to your story since I have been away on vacation. I love that she is expecting and that Lucius went into hyperprotective mode with her. For some people, you can only look at their actions to know that they care and care deeply. I am glad that she said something about the hold that Narcissa has on him and their potential for future happiness. It was about time he got a kick in the head and let him know how she really feels and that they are not the same women in every aspect. On a personal note, I adore reading your writing, because it is so descriptive and clean. I usually am not distracted from grammatical errors and can lose myself in your plot and manipulation of JKR's characters. Thanks for doing such a great job -- you set the bar for excellence quite high for other authors to aspire to acheieve. :) Heather
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  • From ShilohDarke on May 09, 2007
    Another chapter! Yippie!!! I am so disappointed in myself right now, cause I have too many ideas coursing through my brain to focus and write. (I think it is since I'm on vacation) so anyway, I found ch 31 today and I'm just so happy. You are one of the writers I always look to when my own writing is out of focus... Reading through one or two of your chapters always help me give more to my own imagination.

    I so loved this chapter, because she laid all her emotions out for him to see. He couldn't possibly question her honesty, and in turn, it forced him to be honest as well. Not only with her, but with himself. Maybe now, he will be able to put Cissy in the past where she belongs and dedicate himself to the woman who loves him!

    Lovely chappie. Looking forward to more! SD
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  • From AnasellaEmm on May 09, 2007
    i was waiting to catch up with the whole fic to review...I LOVE IT! hehe my obsession for the entire malfoy family is reinforced with this story. you write so well and aren't afraid to sex them up a lot, which so many authors forget to do. i'm like, people, JKR doesn't do the sexy stuff, so its up to us!!
    i really am looking forward to reading your other fics, but tomorrow is my last final exam and then i get to treat myself by reading your other ficcies. so study tonight, then exam tomorrow, then ficcy extravaganza after. yay im excited now....ok love the story, love the characterizations, love the way lucius is in charge (becuase i hate it when the men are whipped), and i love the way you display their emotions. you don't make it superficial or lacking depth and i just love it. tres magnifique!
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  • From ANON - anonomous on May 09, 2007
    i really like your story.
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  • From ANON - moxie on May 09, 2007
    You're doing a great job with this fic! I look forward to all your updates!
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  • From ANON - freckles on May 09, 2007
    Hi! I love this story, and even though I don't review at all, I want you to know I anticipate every chapter. :]
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  • From ANON - Sarah on May 09, 2007
    Hi
    Just to say Ive read this story all the way through and Im really enjoying it - uve converted me to L/Her!!
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  • From nonentity on May 09, 2007
    Mmmm, nice sex scene in Chap 30. I like the pearls and the tie. The ultra-frilly waiting room at the doctor's office was great too.

    Chap 31 is absolutely hysterical. Poor Hermione eating cardboard for a month! And being trotted out through the garden twice a day! All those supplements can't possibly be healthy. I like Hermione's thoughts on calling the room a "Cattery." :-)
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  • From Jan on May 09, 2007
    I luv this story! ^_^

    Finally Lucius is...how should I say it?...becoming more human? putting his old 'skeleton in the closet' to rest? Which ever it is I am happy that he is willing to open up, even if it's just a bit, to Hermione. Please update soon. :D


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  • From willowgirl on May 09, 2007
    Yes, Hermione take another nap. With pregnancy and Lucius to deal with you'll need to take a lot of them. I think I was asleep for most of the first trimester with my first pregnancy.
    Your story is so sweet. I love the way Lucius is so into the pregnancy. He has come a long way from man who took Hermione over his knee just a couple of months ago.
    I can't wait for the day that Lucius tells Hermione that he loves her. I think Hermione will have to let him say it first. I think Lucius needs to be the one to say it first, and in his own way. It's a pureblood male control thing.lol
    Thanks so much for another great chapter!
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  • From catysmom1028 on May 09, 2007
    I like it. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Amethystique on May 09, 2007
    I love this fic! It truly is a work of art.
    I adore how the relationship is gradually developing between the two, and even how Narcissa keeps rearing her nasty head to throw the odd spanner in the proverbial works so to speak.
    My only negative comment about this is ..... I need updates at least 4 times a day!

    Blessings to you and Chocolate for your muse
    Amethystique xx
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  • From Rumpelyssa on May 09, 2007
    She is making progress I think.

    I like that she can tell her cat that she loves him but she can't tell him. I love this story, but now that Hermione is pregnant - will Ginny be pregnant also?

    And as for the sweet overdrive, well, my mothers craving for all five of her children were chips from an English chippie, and peppermint aeros, it could be that, that is the reason why I have such a sweet tooth. We turned sort of okay.

    How are you by the way?
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