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Reviews for The Wedding - COMPLETE

By : LaBibliographe
  • From sheherazade on May 09, 2007
    Hang on a cotton-picking minute; how did I miss chapter 30? (scratches head). Anyway, I'm glad Lucius has been given the appropriate medical dispensations and will not be subjecting Hermione to an eight month dry spell.

    I should think Hermione did stay in bed rather than doing a strenuous workout first thing in the morning - has Lucius not heard of morning sickness? Or first trimester fatigue? What's in these books he's reading?

    He's lucky she seems to be only minimally hormonal...I'd have clubbed him over the head by now. Ah, but she really, really lurves him now, doesn't she? He is indispensible indeed, and finally beginning to let go of all the troubles of the past. It will be weird for Lucius not to have to play mind games with his partner.

    I hope she isn't going near Crookshanks' litter tray, btw. Lol, I'm as bad as Malfoy.

    When are they going to discuss their childrearing philosophies? I can imagine a few clashes on that.


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  • From ANON - kuckuck on May 09, 2007
    sweet... i can't wait for an update... great job!
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  • From ANON - TRISTA on May 09, 2007
    This is one of the best fanfiction I have ever read.Wonderfull job! Trista from Poland
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  • From angelnomiko on May 09, 2007
    wow .. i hope he does back off a bit.. i love it .. please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

    angel
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  • From Alabaster on May 09, 2007
    I love this story labibliographe! It's amazing, and I am always looking for a new update (Sad to say i've missed a bloody few) I'm still stumped on my fiction, so I'm just kinda sitting here waiting for inspiration to strike...and hopefully the viper will bite soon. :D

    Can't wait for the next chap!
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  • From ANON - SAA on May 09, 2007
    I absolutely love this story. It has the just the right combination of what is needed to hold me captive. I'm one of those terrible people who never review. I feel that I have nothing constructive or of value to YOU to say. I don't want to waste your time, when you have given me so much by sharing with me you time and talents. I work a minimun of 16 hour days, 7 days a week, 365 days a year, (I must admit I recieved four days off when I got married, and three days off when I had my children, of which my youngest is now 18), but your creative plea has me writing this review. It is a bright spot in my day when I see you have updated. I have myself a mini party. Which means I take a break, grab a cuppa and something I really shouldn't indulgle in and revel in the opportunity to read for the sake of pleasure. I so enjoy Malfoy's struggle with his sense of self-preservation, dignity and his (horror of horrors) love of Hermione. His desire to have control over his feelings and emotions makes me grin and then, I can't help myself LOL. Hermione's struggle is also so...real. It brings the story home for me. Trying to find that place that has one content and energized, wanting security, but enjoying the continuing hunt for that elusive balance. You are masterful at achieving the "AAHHHH" of satisfaction in these moments. Once these hurdles are overcome, I rarely see authors (and I bet you would have a hard time to find a ?/Hermione story I haven't read) continue to take on the challenges of "the same old, same old" in a relationship. I believe you have the talent to accomplish that in something other than a non-condesending post blurb.

    Oh dear, as I skim over my missive, perhaps I SHOULD have remained a silent fan. Thank you all the same. Blessings, SAA
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  • From ANON - Janeplay on May 09, 2007
    I love it!!! Lucius learning to let go, and be human!! What fun! I am so sorry i stuffed my last review by muddling your storylines up! I feel so embarassed that I did that! But they're wonderful stories. Really. I am enjoying your writing a lot and I can't wait for the next installment! :)
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  • From ladyravenna on May 08, 2007
    Absolutely delightful. All of Lucius antics were just so amusing to read thats it's so hard to imagine. But I guess you can sort of expect it from him and preserving his family lineage mindset.
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  • From ffpoisongirl on May 08, 2007
    Not really a review, since I've said pretty much everything I wanted to say before. Just a question: Are you on vacation, or have your creative juices just started flowing? Your updates seem to be a bit more regular now.
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  • From ANON - crissy on May 08, 2007
    i loved the bit about "resting part 2." sometimes you just need to go back to bed for a another catnap.
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  • From misslala on May 08, 2007
    Yay!!!! Their characteristics are developing nicely! I can't wait to read more!!!! :) This is brilliant!
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  • From on May 08, 2007
    Still loving this story!
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  • From ShilohDarke on May 08, 2007
    NICE!!!! I am glad his fears have been set aside. I can imagine he was probably quite stunned to realize that Narcissa had been such a liar to him. I feel for the betrayal he must feel from that, but I also know that he is beginning to understand that Hermione is not, and never will be that creature! Oh, they're gonna be so happy! (giddy smile)

    glad you felt the same as I did about the drinking!

    write more soon!

    Shiloh
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  • From Rumpelyssa on May 08, 2007
    Me still loves!

    I have been ill the past two weeks with a really bad cold, and other things, so I had to play catch up!

    Great chappies by the way. Glad she's pregnant and that Lucius seems to be pleased. I hope Lucius does get to meet with Narcissa again and completely revenge himself with that slut!

    Anyway, great to have those three chapters to look at. As for any ideas to make it slightly sticky?

    I still think an old flame like Viktor should come and throw a spanner in the works. I'd like Lucius to see that he's not the only one with a past!
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  • From lilbitbord on May 08, 2007
    Oh yes I remember those pesky pregnancy hormones all too well. It will be fun to read all about Hermiones experiences. Lucius better watch for the mood swings, those were terrible for me. I was snapping at everyone, I'm surprised I still had friends left.
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