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Reviews for The Wedding - COMPLETE

By : LaBibliographe

From ANON - SlytherinIcePrincess on May 02, 2007
Sorry, forgot to log in......anyway good story. please have your next update soon. Hopefully Hermione's pregnancy will not be to hard on her, but will increase her sexualtiy. Childbirth books normally talk how a woman's sexual feelings increase during pregnancy.
SIP
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From Alabaster on May 02, 2007
hear, hear! I now call this meeting of the "we hate Narcissa club" to order. The first order of business, is to find out what exactly was WRONG with that abysmal woman. NOt wanting the hottest man in the history of the wizarding world?! Poppycock!

Now on to the review, Love it. I'm so glad they are expecting please allow the child to look like hermione a bit, but have the over all flair of a wonderful Malfoy. Blonde hair, grey eyes, smart as the dickens... SOunds like a winner to me. OH and let it be a girl! lol

Write more...

Ps- Tell lucius my bed is cold, and he can warm me up any day of the week, at least til the baby is born.. since he's being all prudish.
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From misslala on May 02, 2007
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KAyzxQ5rZ8s&mode=related&search= Here is a better clip of the aformentioned scene from "The Last Minute"

OMG CHpater 27 was so bitter-sweet! Lucius' cold walls, deflecting Hermiopne's sweer advances...It almost made me want to cry for her to understand her disappointment and just...I don't know, that was so horrible...I mean what Luc did, not your writing. haha on the contrary, you are such a wonderful writer and I can't wait to read more chaps to this and look into your others works afterward.

After reading the last chapter I couldn't help but feel sorry for Luc. He's trying so hard to understand everything going on around him iwth Hermione and what being with Hermione means...so sad...but so beautiful at the same time! I can't wait to read a new chap from you!!! :)
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From misslala on May 02, 2007
I just finsihed Chapter 24 and I am continuing but I HAD to point out this scene and explain its hilarity to me!!! OMG

He backed his face away and looked at his sprite of a wife, trying to understand her.
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From LazyDaze on May 02, 2007
Will a foursome with Ginny, Severus, Hermione, and Lucius show up in your story?
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From LustBlood on May 01, 2007
Awww... Hermoine and Luscius are at an interesting juncture. Wonder how Hermoine will tip him over the right edge? Doesn't absence make the heart grow fonder? Maybe he could use some. :D Heheheee... just picturing a very cranky Luscius suffering through a few days without Hermoine. You should see how it would sit on him, if you ever get the urge.

LOVING this story, and can't wait to read more! Always looking forward to updates, so update soooooon!!!!!!!! :D
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From ANON - pyegirl on May 01, 2007
*rambling on as ideas occur because she isn't smart enough to keep a window open* And, for some reason, I think that the house elves would like to see Lucius "tamed." They might like to assist Hermione in her endeavors. Hmm. . . .
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From ANON - pyegirl on May 01, 2007
*continuing the last review from the currently last chapter, but while reading "the kitchen"* Although, for some strange reason, I find myself hoping that Hermione gives a little on the house elf not-working-after-ten-plan. I mean, house elves like to serve, so I would think that some of them might like to work the late shift. It would make Lucus happy, and would be a grand gesture coming from someone like Hermione, who is rigid on the issue. I'm just saying. Plus, I like house elves. They can be funny.
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From DB1 on April 29, 2007
@28. loved the chapter, lucius is so confused, its cute. update soon.

*DB*
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From catysmom1028 on April 29, 2007
I like it. Please update soon.
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From ANON - firewall on April 29, 2007
What a brilliant idea! I always find that I forget half of what I'm going to say when I finally get down to the review. Then I'll start writing something and think, heck was that this chapter or the last one because I always go back and speed read the previous chapter before reading the current one...it prolongs the enjoyment.

That silly man is certainly fighting the inevitable. I think something is going to have to happen that causes Hermione to storm off or take a nice long stay at Harry's, Hogwarts or something similar so Luius can realize that he needs her although he may not want to. Or a little jealousy might be the catalyst. Or she may get an offer from someone that would entail her working closely with another wizard on a problem...I need her to stop shopping and lunching and do something constructive with that formidable brain. Oh the possibilities are wonderful. Whatever you decide will be perfect as usual, I'm looking forward to your decision.
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From Alabaster on April 29, 2007
this story is beyond great! :D please update again :D
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From willowgirl on April 29, 2007
Hermione doodles Lucius name to past the time? What a coincidence, I do that too! Ha,ha. AWHHhh, the girl must really be in love. I bet if Hermione went to her own bedroom to sleep at night. Lucius would be asking her back into his bed before her head hit the pillow. I think he would miss her warm body tucked under him at night.
There is nothing I like better than turning on my computer in the morning and finding out you have added a new chapter. Thanks so much!
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From ANON - sirsevchick on April 29, 2007
I have been following your story closely and I have read all of your other stories. You have a real talent for making the reader visualise what is happening. I really like that Lucius and Hermione work at their relationship and everything is not sunshine and daisies.
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From ShilohDarke on April 29, 2007
IPOD! I got this image in my mind of Lucius sneaking a listen to her ipod when she's supposed to be away, and ending up dancing through the house until she arrives home and catches him... What would he say at that point? ahem... I just wanted to make sure you don't have any songs that could be deemed inapropriate in that contraption... clearing throat, hands her device, and walks away acting oh so savvy!!! ROFLMAO!!! Too cute!!! Just too cute!

Shiloh
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