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Reviews for The Wedding - COMPLETE

By : LaBibliographe
  • From ancientgirl on April 05, 2007
    Great chapter. I do see the differences between the couples. When I do my own writing, I pair Ginny with Lucius, and Hermione with Severus. I can understand what you say about it feeling different when writing them. When you as the writer feel it, then you know its the only way the reader will.
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  • From Rumpelyssa on April 05, 2007
    Well you know my thoughts on anal...

    But the rest of it was hot!!! Strapping her to hoops... how domineering. And you're right the way you write them it is a different dynamic.

    So, I guess we're onto the main couple next. Yeah?

    And are either of them pregnant yet?
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  • From DB1 on April 05, 2007
    @21, awesome, glad you updated, can't wait for more!!! Update soon

    *DB*
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  • From ANON - Dylan on April 04, 2007
    Is it wrong of me to want Hermione to receive some rough anal? Maybe a bit of dp with her own vibrator? Seriously, one chapter was not enough!!!!
    Great story by the way.
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  • From BUCKYKATTGIRL on April 04, 2007
    LoveitLoveitLoveit! Although you can skip Ginny and Severus as far as I'm concerned! Just get back to Luscious Lucius!
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  • From ANON - zairaphel on April 03, 2007
    Absolutely splendid. I loved seeing Lucius and Hermione in a more intimate position like that. The lemons were wonderful, and I'm also very happy that we're slowly seeing more layers of Lucius. Can't wait for the next update!
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  • From ANON - Dee on April 03, 2007
    I just wanted to say I have been loving the story. I have enjoyed watching this fun, kinky couple fall for each other. I was reading the plague story last night. I couldn't go to the next chapter because of the 3 a.m. downtime and when I went back the story was gone.
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  • From Rumpelyssa on April 03, 2007
    Goody goody yum yum!!!!

    (The above was the start of a tune to a family friendly show in the Seventies, very British but hey applied to this rather naughty but sweet and extremely HOT scene!)

    I loved it. There was the air of domesticity about it. Lucius in the garden trying to work out his plumbing was very good - the innuendo about that fitted well with what was to come. Oh, and please, yes Black jeans and dark green tshirt I think.

    Oh, and Labib.. have you SEEN the latest piccie of Luscious? YOUCH TIME!

    And Severus and Ginny up next eh? Oh, can't wait. PLEASE.... SOON!
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  • From ANON - 999 on April 03, 2007
    Damn! I want a Calgon moment just like that one...to take me away! Of course, now that I've said that, I will probably never look at Calgon the same way again. lol. In fact, do they even sell Calgon in England? Probably not.

    But anyway, that was another wonderful chapter! I loved the bath smut, and I'm really looking forward to their little Shindig on the library table. I suppose that would be a dream come true for Hermione. After all, the library is one of her favorite places. I could just imagine her breathing in the scent of all those rare and valuable volumes, with Lucius doing delectable things to her body. Ahhhh! It would be Nirvana. lol

    So please update soon!!!

    And by the way, I'm sorry I pulled my story. Please forgive me. I'll probably put it back up because I'm addicted. You know how it is when you love writing. You can't stop. My boyfriend feels sort of bad now anyway. He says he didn
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  • From ANON - BuffyXO on April 02, 2007
    I really enjoyed this chapter and their bath together. I think that you summed it best in your author's note about their bathing together being a sign of intimacy as was their sleeping the same bed. I liked how tender he is with her and that he took pride in her intellect and desire to have his children. I cannot believe that I am reading about the same couple that was in chapter one. Now the real question is will he really be happy once she becomes pregnant or will her fear his linage is ruined forever by the mudblood Keep up the great work!
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  • From angelnomiko on April 02, 2007
    wow that was awsome and i hope it does not very diffcult for mione to get pregnant.. please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

    angel
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  • From lilbitbord on April 02, 2007
    I want a tub like that. That chapter was really hot!!
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  • From ANON - liquidvamp on April 02, 2007
    I think I love this chapter more than any one so far. I love it when Lucius seems so much more honest with both Hermione and himself. Less an arrogant jackass I guess.
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  • From on April 02, 2007
    Loving it! More soon please!
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  • From ancientgirl on April 02, 2007
    Very nice chapter. It's so nice to see how long they've come. I'm looking forward to reading more on Severus and Ginny.
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