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Reviews for The Wedding - COMPLETE

By : LaBibliographe
  • From DB1 on March 19, 2007
    @17. More more more!!!! Awesome chapter, update soon!!

    *DB*
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  • From Apryl on March 19, 2007
    Yep, that was definitly the "vulture snoopy". Sorry I've been gone so long, had gall bladder surgery. And YOU getting me all hot and bothered isn't fitting in with the Doc's idea of me taking it easy during my recoop time! **smirk** He-He! Besides the hot lemons, I really like how the plot is progresssing.
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  • From angelnomiko on March 18, 2007
    wow that was hot and they didnt do any thing ... please update soon .. later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - firewall on March 18, 2007
    I'm enjoying this story tremendously; the smut goes without saying but also your sly humour. The dance was fun with them teasing each other.

    One other thing. I felt you were totally bang on with Lucius' sexual proclivities. I just can't imagine him being being satisfied with missionary sex other than as a gift to Hermione who I think will now be bored wit it. As the author, you have to write your story the way you visualize it and as your readers, we can select what we read. I think you have nailed him...both the raunchy side and the more sensitive side. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From sentineljandb2 on March 18, 2007
    I love the insecure Lucius, because this one is about his wife
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  • From scotsgirl on March 18, 2007
    This was a fun chapter a enjoyable read. Keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - BuffyXO on March 18, 2007
    I cracked up when I read that she called him, "Blondbear." I really liked this chapter because it was high on UST without being heavy on the angst. I also think that this couple has deserved a nice out on the town when they are not running into his former conquests or having her one-up him. I do think that Lucius is going to need a bend a little to let Hermione have some reins over their sexual relationship as she may surprise him again and he will enjoy that. I think she is toeing that balance now quite well. Thanks for a great new chapter!
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  • From Amethystique on March 18, 2007
    MMMMmmmmmmmmmm...*drool*...Lucius...mmm...tight trousers...mmm...high boots...mmm...tight arse...mmm....bare chest...mmm...no underwear...MMM!..sounds like the perfect date to me! Is he free next Saturday? HeeHee!
    Love it. More please?
    Blessings
    Amethystique x
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  • From on March 18, 2007
    Oh Wow! I can't wait to see how Lucius teaches Hermione a lesson! It's just too much fun! You must update right away!

    You know every time Hermione goes in and has one of her
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  • From lilbitbord on March 18, 2007
    Ok I haven't reviewed for the last couple of chapters, not that I didn't want to, I just haven't had time to sit down and read a whole lot anything lately. Now that I've had a chance, I'm glad that they are working out their differences, and getting a little daring in the bedroom. Mmmmmmm...pirate Lucius lol Hermione should have known to check his clothes before they left, but in the end I don't think she mined. Can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - snapeslave on March 18, 2007
    what a wonderful chapter....oh god i hope all that nastieness is over and done with between these two...i love pirate lucius...hot hot hot...omg...please hurry with the next chapter...
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  • From InfernalParadise on March 18, 2007
    Alright, alright, alright, Mrs. Dominating! I actually DID sit down for
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  • From Sampdoria on March 18, 2007
    Thank you for the update, I loved this chapter (and your story as a whole:-))! Your description of Lucius outfit at the danceclub made me drooling:-) You have quite the gift for making a chapter steamingly hot, I can't wait for your next update, please hurry:-))
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  • From catysmom1028 on March 18, 2007
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From Rumpelyssa on March 18, 2007
    Do you even have to ask? That was hot! Sex without sex if you know what I mean?

    I loved it...

    That poor checkout girl! I bet that's me?
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