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By : LaBibliographe
  • From LustBlood on March 16, 2007
    LaBibliographe... MORE!!! MORE!! MORE!!!
    You story is divine. I think Luscius got his just desserts... and anything leaning towards vindictive would be overmuch. They're trying to fall in love here, not scratch each other's eyes out.. although in this case scratching is good, in oh so many ways. Please update soon!
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  • From on March 15, 2007
    Actually, I'm not very bloodthirsty. I really rather like it when Lucius behaves badly, but then you probably already guessed that from reading my reviews. lol I also like it when Hermione is a bad girl too. Consequently I really enjoyed your chapter. You did a real nice job of smoothing things out between them. Great Job!! Please update soon. 999

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  • From ANON - J on March 14, 2007
    I really like it so far. I hope you update soon.
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  • From ANON - JW on March 13, 2007
    Ch 16 - whoa!! That's a surprise - all that money, and she didn't tell him why. What about babies - do babies inherit from Lucius' half and separately from Hermione's half? I think they need a talk. Thanks for the new chapter!
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  • From dragon37 on March 13, 2007
    OMG's that was too damn Hot!!!!!!!!!! I would so love to do that to Lucius. I do believe sex with him would be so delicious, no matter how it was done.

    Great job with the story, can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - lemonade on March 12, 2007
    Well, they both seem to be happy about the situation now.
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  • From catysmom1028 on March 12, 2007
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From DB1 on March 12, 2007
    @16, great chapter, update soon

    *DB*
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  • From Pumkin on March 12, 2007
    thank you thank you thank you. it was a good chapter. it was put together well and it was done tastefully. keep up the good work and update soon please.
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  • From angelnomiko on March 11, 2007
    no he got what was coming to him .. and i hope she is not distacing herself from him ... please update soon ... later for now

    angel
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  • From ancientgirl on March 11, 2007
    I'm a bit more bloodthirsty than Hermione, but he did understand what he did to her was wrong and he did promise not to do it again. For Lucius, that was a big step.
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  • From crinna on March 11, 2007

    oh i Am more bloodthirsty than Hermione, but i think her retribution in this chapter was wonderful and in line with the way you are telling your story.

    I love the fact that she was able to show him a thing or two. and the little discussion after fear, was wonderful. an ounce of understanding from Lucius is worth a hundred times more that repentance taken out of his flesh. repentance wold be out of charter, however the little bit of self awareness gained by their discussion shows a deeper sense of his humanity.
    Lucius knows he has a personal power about himself, but we can see he has some doubts about him self in his constant battle with his delicate ego. his surprise at scaring Hermione is testament to the fact that he can underestimate himself, especially when it comes to the connection he is developing with his wife.... this story is wonderful!


    I could wright a thesis paper analyzing this fic


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  • From Rumpelyssa on March 11, 2007
    I think so... those scenes did squick me rather!

    Please make the next lemon something a bit less sour?

    I liked the second half though when he was trying to apologise; and I especially loved Hermione's gesture of giving him back his fortune.

    And a bit more Snape/Ginny, please?
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  • From ccrawley on March 11, 2007
    Great story. Thanks. Love he finally got it in the end. Hm, Lucius wandering about Hermione distancing herself.
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  • From DB1 on March 10, 2007
    @15. awesome chapter, lol lucius using a black vibrator, can't wait for an update!! Your evil for leaving it as a cliff hanger!!!!!

    *DB*
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