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Reviews for The Wedding - COMPLETE

By : LaBibliographe
  • From ANON - alyson on March 05, 2007
    please update
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  • From Sampdoria on March 05, 2007
    Another great chapter:-) Anal sex has never been my fort
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  • From Pumkin on March 05, 2007
    more,more i need more. very interesting chapter. can't wait to see how hermione handles it in the morning. keep up the good work. update soon please.
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  • From crinna on March 05, 2007
    don't get me wrong i love this story and i am eager to read more, if you are easily discouraged please do not read my comments.
    !!!! this is not a flame!!!!!!!

    i agree with lemonade. i have no prob with the anal, but the way it was enacted was a little on the alarming side. over and over Lucius is lamenting his loss of freedom, even though he is getting the softest punishment i have ever seen (considering his crimes.) i cant feel sorry for him.

    (bohoo hoo I committed unspeakable crimes by following an genocidal maniac and now i am imprisoned in a cushy palatial manor with conjugal visits that I get to control.)

    Hermine is the one i feel sorry for as she has lost far more freedoms and gained little in return, and she has committed no crime. sure she has access to all the money but it seems she cares little for wealth beyond what wold provide for a modest life. not only has she lost the power of self determination by being marred for political reasons, she is being guilt-ed in to giving of her free will in the bedroom to save his ego. not only that she can't even expect to be treated without disdain outside of the bedroom.
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  • From ANON - lemonade on March 05, 2007
    Hmmm... I was a little distressed that he didn't care that she didn't want him to do that. Whether she ended up enjoying it a little or not, he seemed pretty dismissive of anything she might object to. That's pretty in line with his selfish nature, but I'm just wondering how far she will let him dismiss her feelings before she starts to really reconsider. Great sex is wonderful, but I can't see it overriding the emptiness she would probably feel about this marriage if she actually sat down and thought about it. He dictates when she goes to him, she's pretty much relegated to call girl status. I can see her trying to avoid thinking about it, but it would have to catch up to her sooner or later.

    You've got me interested in finding out what Hermione will do and what she thinks of all this. I know that I might have more sympathy for Lucius, but I'm having a hard time doing so. As much as Lucius lost, he is the one who decided to take that gamble when he signed up for the dark mark. His consequences seem very mild considering Azkaban and dementors would be the alternative. That Hermione is being considerate of Lucius at all is more of a luxury than he should expect, all things considered. The only thing hurting on him is his pride. I'm sure Hermione's fate would have been quite horrific if HIS side had won, so my sympathy for his ego is pretty limited. He wants to have everything back, and is going about it in a very slytherin way. He knows how to play that guilt card to get what he wants. His growth could be very interesting. I'll be checking back.
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  • From catysmom1028 on March 05, 2007
    Please update soon.

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  • From Rumpelyssa on March 05, 2007
    Hmm, that was not my cup of tea, and if he treated me like that I'd slap him one! (But then he'd probably like that... yep, Lucimuse is smirking now! He's tilting his head sideways but I am shaking my head at him.)

    Thanks for the information on what Condo is...

    Flat - Is what you call Apartment - Friends in England they'd live in a Block of Flats.

    Detached House - Is a house standing in a street on its own. I live in one.

    Semi Detached House - Two houses joined together.

    Terraced Houses - A whole street full of houses that are joined together.

    Bungalow - One story house with all the rooms... generally they are separated ala Detached House.

    Dorma Bungalow - Two storie Bungalow with perhaps only three to five stairs separating the floors...

    That's what properties are called in England.

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  • From lilbitbord on March 04, 2007
    Very hot! I'm glad he didn't send her back to her room afterwards.
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  • From ShilohDarke on March 04, 2007
    Well, that was another good chapter, of course! No surprise there. Although I am a little unsettled by the anal... But, I could overlook it. (lol) Looking forward to the next chapter!
    SD
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  • From on March 04, 2007
    Hey there!

    I loved this chapter with its sour lemons, and I absolutely love it when Lucius is the domineering lover. In fact, the more dangerous he appears, the more powerful his character becomes which makes him even more damm sexy than he is already. Hermione should not be too surprised with her forceful lover. I mean after all, he was a Death Eater and he was sent to Azkaban. So it's only natural that he should have a bit of a cruel streak. She must have known she was marrying the big bad wolf and that she could get bit, didn
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  • From angelnomiko on March 04, 2007
    wow .. what will happen next .. please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

    angel
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  • From scotsgirl on March 04, 2007
    Once again a great chapter i enjoy reading this very much looking forward to next update
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  • From ANON - Faye on March 04, 2007
    Another delicious chapter =) And since I didn't get to review for the last chapter, let me just say that hermione's reactions were priceless as was Lucius' reaction to dragon girl....haha
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  • From SweetGinnyWeasley on March 04, 2007
    I loved this chapter and can't wait for the next one.
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  • From ancientgirl on March 04, 2007
    Oh no, I did not like what Lucius did. Up to now I've been on Lucius' side, but no amount of warning can exactly say "I'm going to tie you up and have anal sex with you whether you like it or not." That crossed the line. And then to have her enjoy her husband doing what he did without her consent, bothered me as well.

    Don't get me wrong, it was a very well written chapter, and I would normally have enjoyed the chains had he not done it without giving a crap about what she wanted.

    I know that in the bedroom its all about him being in control, but he felt more like a rapist in here.

    I'm looking forward to reading what Hermione does in the next chapter. I hope she doesn't let him get away with this.
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