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Reviews for The Wedding - COMPLETE

By : LaBibliographe
  • From InfernalParadise on February 11, 2007
    No need to excuse yourself or the spanking sequence, hon
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on February 10, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From on February 10, 2007
    So he wants her to be submissive, but he is not going to teach her, but show her? That can be some very dangerous (and entertaining) coming chapters, I just hope that Hermione can keep up with it. I also hope that Lucuis can learn that it does not make him a lesser man to let his lover have the upper hand every now and then. Well, I feel we will have a long way to go on that one. Keep up the awesome work as you ALWAYS do!
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  • From Lyndie578 on February 10, 2007
    So...Lucius believes that he's set Hermione up for failure. I guess he is Really Angry, or just vendictive. I suppose that's what Lucius is really like. Great job!
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  • From on February 10, 2007
    Lol, I have to laugh. Hermione doesn't seem to be naturally very submissive so I can't help but wonder how long she will put up with Lucius before she hits him over the head with a frying pan. This little power struggle is a lot of fun! Great Chapter!!! Please update soon!!
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  • From Pumkin on February 09, 2007
    thanks for the update. can't wait to see how this turns out. keep up the good work and update soon please.
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  • From wicraven on February 09, 2007
    Great post, love the story, can't wait until you post again, so please post again soon. Thanks
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  • From angelnomiko on February 09, 2007
    man .. how long will she last ... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

    angel
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  • From Rumpelyssa on February 09, 2007
    That was sweet. The rules are given... he has a nasty sense of humour doesn't he?


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  • From tootie on February 07, 2007
    You inspire me to write, although I am much better at reading authors such as yourself. My mind has such naughty and fun verbal baiting between an OCC and the blond Slytherin but sadly somewhere between my grey matter and the fingers it gets lost in translation,so to speak. Alas, I will continue to attempt this feat of entertainment and perhaps with practice and patience I will produce something worth reading. Please continue to update as I need all the Lucius I can get! I tend to go through withdrawls if I don't get my fix.
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  • From Lyndie578 on February 05, 2007
    I'm glad there is some give and take. Perhaps Lucius and Hermione can now work forward towards their future. Thanks for the great chapter!
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  • From ShilohDarke on February 04, 2007
    Love these last two chapters! They are really good (as always) and I of course am looking forward to more!The small torment she inflicted on him in the shower was just enough where I can understand his frustration. The spanking scene kind of seems to me to be the beginning of a turning point in their relationship!

    Loved it, and can't wait for more!

    SD
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  • From Sampdoria on February 04, 2007
    Loved your chapter and I totally agree with you, leaving the story here with a "happily ever after" would not do the story any justice. I love to follow their road to a "happily ever after" though, and would love to see more of Severus and Ginny too!
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  • From on February 04, 2007
    I like how she as able to see his point of view and understand how her actions and his punishment may have lasting cuts on his person. I also liked how you ended the chapter with her alone, which shows that Lucius may not have the control in the external world, but in the manor and their relationship he holds most of the power. Again, wonderful new chapter and advancements made through sex play. Sometimes writers use sex as just a physical thing, but your writing style shows that the action has a rippling effect on the interpersonal relationship of the couple, which is far more realistic that Whore!Hermione and Master!Lucius. Thank you for making your story, rooted in the magical world, more realistic than most other works of fan fiction. Kudos to you!
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  • From wicraven on February 04, 2007
    Great post, love the story, can't wait until you post again, so please post again soon. Thanks
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