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Reviews for The Wedding - COMPLETE

By : LaBibliographe
  • From on February 01, 2007
    "The XY chromosome combination always overrode all other stimuli for a chance at sports, even in the wizarding world." Can I tell you how much I adore that line, because it is written with the utmost truth in mind? I also like that their relationship is evolving beyond just the sheets and into a deeper more mature relationship. I am glad that Hermione made a concession, since it will do more good in the long run to have her concede over silly things -- I just wonder how their warming up will go over. Love it as always, you never cease to amaze me with your depths as a writer.
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  • From Lyndie578 on February 01, 2007
    Chap. 6--using Quidditch was a nice way to help them get to know each other a little bit better, and a great way to allow Lucius to let his hair down. Hermione made a brilliant turn by asking if she could go with him to the game; Lucius is a man who needs to feel as though he's in charge. Great turn. Thanks for the wonderful chapter. I feel as though there is so much more promise for them now.
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  • From ancientgirl on February 01, 2007
    I'm enjoying your story so far. There are so few really good Lucius/Hermione stories that go beyond rape and torture, so its a breath of fresh air to find some interesting ones. I'm looking forward to more. I'm also wondering if we will see any glimpses into Severus and Ginny's relationship.
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  • From wildrose on February 01, 2007
    Lovely quidditch match, was a wonder they actually kept their attention to the game...tut tut men and sport...anywayz...lovely warm up in the shower...if the hot waters not enough I'm sure Lucius can think of something else to heat up his little wife...
    Course Lucius' sense of humour is a bit off putting, but never mind ^.^
    Can't wait for more
    kiss
    Ophelia

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  • From Rumpelyssa on February 01, 2007
    You seriously don't have to ask. I love this story. I can't wait for the next chapter... I was a little disappointed that Hermione and Ginny didn't have girl talk about their husbands in the bedroom.
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  • From DB1 on February 01, 2007
    @6. Y stop it just b4 the good parts???? Please update soon

    *DB*
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  • From angelnomiko on February 01, 2007
    wow. im glad the had a great date ... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

    angel
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  • From Citten on January 30, 2007
    well i am so happy to have an update! YEAH!!! well it will take some time before they get out all of the kinks and get to something even remotely even soil well i truely look forward to watch and read you do so just make sure it is nice and long, love! :)
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  • From wicraven on January 30, 2007
    Great story...keep up the great work, and please post again soon...Thanks.
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  • From InfernalParadise on January 29, 2007
    Definitely a twist in the road
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  • From on January 28, 2007
    Hey! Great chapter! While I realize they are fighting now, I know it won't last for very long. I don't think those two can keep their hands off each other. lol

    Anyway, I love your story! Please update soon!
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  • From on January 28, 2007
    What a schmuck Lucius is! I think Hermione should under pay him for that remark alone! Just give him a knut and tell him to try harder next time ... what a way to deflate that ego. Anyhow, keep up the great writing, I love it and am so happy that this is going to be a long story.
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  • From InfernalParadise on January 28, 2007
    As for chapter four: Why don
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  • From Rumpelyssa on January 28, 2007
    You must heed the call of the muse La Bibliographe... I loved this chapter. Emotions running high in all directions.

    Poor Hermione; she did say sorry!

    I want to slap Lucius good and hard for that!

    I should be heeding the call of my muse but he's a troublesome thing in the form of Lucius as well, and he's being a bit sulky at the moment.
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  • From DB1 on January 28, 2007
    @5. great chapter. can't wait for more!!!

    *DB*
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