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Reviews for The Wedding - COMPLETE

By : LaBibliographe

From angelnomiko on January 23, 2007
wow that was hot .. please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel
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From BUCKYKATTGIRL on January 20, 2007
Awesome! Totally awesome! I would pick Luscius Lucius over Crookshanks any night! I also really like the touch of vulnerability in Lucius about the children issue! Update soon!
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From DB1 on January 20, 2007
@3 Why leave it there???? That was mean!!! Please update soon!!!!!
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From firewall on January 19, 2007
I love the way they are dancing around the sex issue...time for a tango, methinks.
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From on January 19, 2007
I think that these developments really raise the bar with anticipation and a real chance at love between the two of them. I think it will be one of those ever evolving things that form out of their shared children and very healthy sexual appetites. I do think it is funny that she will explain to her cat why he is sleeping alone. I really like your writing style and your command over both of their internal voices. I completely cracked up at their sexual anticipation and know that the next chapter is going to be great. Please update soon!
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From ShilohDarke on January 19, 2007
Oh goodness! talk about tension that can be sliced with a butterknife! And what an interesting discussion the two of them have just had! How cool! Hermione wants babies! And it sounds like she wants lots of them!!! But how will Lucius cope with learning how to be an attentive father??? Oh, and I mean, HECK! They havben't even had the sex yet!!!

More... Now! I need the next chapter! Okay, so I need to write on some of my own stories, I know... But still!!!

SD
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From Sampdoria on January 19, 2007
Great story, I hope the next chapter is hot and comming soon!!!
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From Lyndie578 on January 19, 2007
Ch.3 was really good in demonstrating how their relationship is likely to evolve--a little, no--A LOT, of give and take. So they are going to try for little Granger-Malfoys, squee!! Thanks for the new chapter!
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From on January 19, 2007
Oh wow! I can't wait until the next chapter! I hoping the lemons will be "rough and sensuously erotic" just like what Hermione is dreaming of. lol Your stories are always so much fun!!!
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From wicraven on January 19, 2007
I love this story, please post again soon. Thanks.
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From daynajones on January 19, 2007
I hardly ever read het, I'm a pure H/D shipper, but was curious so decided to give this a go. And wow! This is so much fun, love it so far, need more very badly!! please?
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From angelnomiko on January 19, 2007
wow that was gerat ... now luciusi now she does want kids and will have the kids he wanted that narcissa would not give him .. please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel
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From Rumpelyssa on January 19, 2007
La Bibliographe: Do you NEED to ask? You know you're fantastic with this pairing that I love you, in fact you inspired me to carry on with I Y G D T T W T fic. Wow, the UST in that fic was amazing.

Also going back to the Ginny/Severus pairing:- Thanks to both you and Shiloh I now have a new ship! At least in this fic Harry's dead, I just don't like Harry and Ginny being alive in fics and being with other people... at least Severus is the much better option than Draco... In fact I have actually started a Ginny/Severus fic of my own, please check it out, it's called She's So Much Like You.

I can't wait for the lemons and now I am going on my knees begging you to put in some Snape/Ginny lemons in this story to, please? Pwetty, pwetty, pwetty, pwease?
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From DarkLady on January 19, 2007
I am really enjoying this story so far. Anything where Lucius is a seductor :D hrmm I am not big on Sev with anyone but Hermione mainly because I ampart of a Die!Ginny fan listing *giggles* anyway I would love for you to post your fic over at our new archive http://grangerenchanted.com/enchant it is perfect!
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From tootie on January 19, 2007
You are an amazing author. I envy your ability to write in a style that moves freely almost like a melody of a song. I get stuck with "he said", "she said" paragraphs. I have the story playing in my head like a movie but unable to get the story down to my fingers.
I have enjoyed your other stories and am looking forward to the next chapter of lemons. I love your Snape's sense of humor almost as if he is the straight man/comic relief to your Lucius.
Thank you also for your timely updates. So here's bowing to your creative genius and nimble fingers.
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