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Reviews for The Wedding - COMPLETE

By : LaBibliographe
  • From CoCoM on August 15, 2008
    The whole "Barbie Queue" thing is freaking cracking me up! Poor Lucius; just a bit out of the loop, isn't he? :-P
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  • From CoCoM on August 14, 2008
    It really is so endearing how sensitive Lucius is. How Hermione calling him "my love" seems to confuse him so much is adorable. God, I love him even more!
    Yah for Hermione's master plan for The Toothbrush! LOL!
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  • From CoCoM on August 14, 2008
    I can't wait to see what Hermione does with her new freedom.....hehe
    I can totally relate to her getting snippy when she is hungry. I am exactly the same way!
    I was cracking up over the "twin babymakers" line. LMAO!
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  • From CoCoM on August 14, 2008
    I know some people disagree but I quite like Severus and Ginny together. Perhaps not my number one pairing but it works. And this chapter was pretty darn hot! Are we going to see another appearance of the stronger cream for Lucius and Hermione in the future?...hmmm....*hotflash*
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  • From CoCoM on August 14, 2008
    I am definitely liking our couple in all of these wet situatons....hmm, that could go several ways, couldn't it? :-P LOL! Great chapter. Excalibur indeed! *drools*
    I am guessing Hermione is going to get pregnant soon....
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  • From CoCoM on August 13, 2008
    LMAO! Three bottles of wine later....That was hilarious! I love Ginny. Great girl time chapter. I am guessing eventually we will find out about the reverse spanking, right???
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  • From CoCoM on August 12, 2008
    So, I have tried to leave several reviews for previous chapters but some reason, it was not working. Therefore, I have taken notes to help me remember what I wanted to say (are you impressed??LOL)
    I know everyone has replied now about the Lu-shush vs. Loo-see-us question but I would just like to add that I say the latter and the other day someone laughed at me saying "That's not how it is pronounced!" Well, whatever jerk, it is actually! Haha. I feel somewhat vindicated now.
    Anyway....
    The chapter with the initial spanking from Lucius with the image of him in a dinner suit, draped across the sofa with the hair loose....guh. Yummy.
    I was gasping and then laughing so hard about the skanky woman with the dragon tatoos and I would have done the same in Hermione's position.
    Unlike some other reviewers, I don't have a problem with the Severus/Ginny combination and I think it works okay.
    The chapter with the intial foray into anal sex was-Whoa! The cuffs and then him telling Hermione that the more she struggled it felt better for him and definitely the bit where his hair was falling over her shoulder...It may be utterly depraved and sick of me but I was fanning myself and getting a bit uncomfortable...in a good way!
    THENNN....the following chapter where she breaks out her little purple friend....if the hot flashes weren't enough from the previous chapter, I went up in absolute flames during this one. For some reason, I found this to be one of the hottest things you have ever written and that I have ever read. It was so erotic. That mental picture....oh yes. When he is telling her to do it harder and the description of his "low timbre"....let us not forget his wet hair flinging over his back...Oh my word..In a hot flash right now just reliving it. And when he says "If it comes in black, get me one." !!!!! LMAO! Funniest bit though was the "Ouch, ouch, the pain is unbelievable." Uh huh, sure it is.
    Lucius agreeing to go with Hermione dancing so that there is a possibility she will use the little black friend on him was cracking me up! He is so devious-and I love it! Also, loved the descriptn of his "cool, contained look". If you haven't already noticed, I am a mite obsessed with the hair, loose and tied back...or in any capacity really. And then the outfit at the nightclub: tight breeches and high boots on a man get me going EVERY time!
    So, needless to say, I am thoroughly enjoying this fic!!!!

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  • From CoCoM on August 11, 2008
    Well, that was a bit anticlimatic...all the spanking and then...nothing! She wakes up alone in her own bed?? I am confused. *sigh* I guess I can understand that Lucius needed to gain the upper hand, etc, etc. But stil....
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  • From CoCoM on August 11, 2008
    Poor Lucius! I can't believe that Hermione really didn't give him much of a thought in three months. (BTW, I am laughing as I type this-not quite sure why as it really isn't funny but those two crazy kids crack me up!)
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  • From CoCoM on August 11, 2008
    VERY nice. I especially liked the line about Lucius being the "personification of a romance novel rake"- HOW true is that?! Awesome.
    Also, when she brought up Draco and how well-endowed he must be and then Lucius told her she couldn't touch "it"...I chuckled, a lot, during this chapter.
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  • From CoCoM on August 11, 2008
    Malfoy/Granger babies: Yah!....as long as they can get up to some naughtiness before and after the birth! It was somewhat sad in a sweet sort of way how Lucius was wondering what was wrong with him that no one wanted to bear his children. Aww, poor Lucius!-I would totally volunteer for that hardship, if I had to. *sigh*
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  • From CoCoM on August 11, 2008
    This is a really good start! I am intrigued by this as it revs up after Lucius and Hermione getting married (whereas most fics go through the whole process of them finding out they have to get married,etc). I was laughing so hard at Lucius going "I NEED to be your lover!" Looking forward to all of the kinkiness that is (hopefully) yet to come. hehe
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  • From ANON - D on August 03, 2008
    hi!

    loved the story!


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  • From ANON - GP on July 26, 2008
    Oh, I love this story and I'm sad to see its end. I originally found Lucius to be an unlikeable character, but after reading the end chapters and looking back at him, I can see that was just his way to deal with things. I love the depth the characters have in your stories.
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  • From ANON - GuiltyPleasure on July 23, 2008
    "Multiple orgasms, subtle signs of arousal instead of blatant ones, sometimes it just wasn
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