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Reviews for If Only I Could Help

By : regina88
  • From ANON - KyKy. on January 14, 2007
    Diminish*
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  • From ANON - KyKy. on January 14, 2007
    Wicked awesome. Continue it, eh?
    You're a brilliant writer, don't let your gifts dimish with time.
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  • From ANON - SusanDara on January 13, 2007
    This is a beautiful story; thanks for writing such a powerful vision of Draco and the effects of his choices. Well written, paced, designed and drafted.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 12, 2007
    beautiful.
    it would be even better if it kept going :)
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  • From ANON - KayJay on January 12, 2007
    I think that it is beautifully written and I wish it was longer than a one-shot :-)
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  • From ANON - sticky on January 12, 2007
    This is very bittersweet. That's why I like it so much. My only complaint is that it's a one-shot. I'm sure I'm not the first (or the last) reviewer to say that in regard to this story. That's just proof that you should continue. But like you said: It is what is. What a shame too. A waste of a perfectly good plot...
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  • From ANON - Jenn on January 12, 2007
    This was brutal to read because the pain was palpable. You showed his pain, not just told us about it; the hardest part was not even feeling his pain through his own words (because that's just teen angst). Instead, we felt his pain through Hermione's empathy and man, that killed.

    Very well done and I would personally love to see you develop this into a full-scale fic.
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  • From ANON - skye on January 12, 2007
    I don't know if it was because this was my first read of the day, or if I would have needed a tissue anyway, but that was a very emotional piece. I do hope that you consider a Draco-point-of-view chapter. I'm torn between trying to believe Draco is sitting there trying to mentally repare himself and contiplating suicide by drowning in the lake. Skye
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  • From ANON - Melissa on January 12, 2007
    very good! One can definately see the pain on both of their parts and Hermione's struggle to help... Good job!
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  • From ANON - meg on January 12, 2007
    I like. very touching, more please.
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  • From ANON - jw021 on January 12, 2007
    This should definitely not be a one-shot. Write more...please!! :)
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  • From ANON - sheedy on January 12, 2007
    Very nice. Short but sweet.
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