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Reviews for Overtures

By : jules
  • From WesleyY7 on July 03, 2009
    First off, the opening line (word) to this story was perfect! I loved how you jumped right into the action. I hadn't read the warnings before beginning this story, so I found it very suspenseful as I was worried about the fate of one, or both, memberes of our duo during their imprisonment. Your Lucius was deliciously evil, yet still had love for his wife. The time spent in the cell was interesting. Liked the wandless magic and the exercise regime. And I loved that the two of them grew so close and planned so carefully, they had non verbal signals to clue each other in on what to do. Great story!
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  • From wudelfin on December 22, 2007
    this was a great!!! no continuation!??
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  • From Bambu on January 16, 2007
    Hey, Jules! All of my other daily commitments got shoved aside so I could read your new story. It was terrific. I loved the way they became friends and how they worked together to escape when the time came, and I loved that while Lucius was a bastard, he still loved his wife. It's a clever touch to make him human, and look, you kept Severus alive!!!
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  • From kazfeist on January 16, 2007
    Jules, that was lovely! Two things: "unceremoniously" (you have "unceremonious"), and "closer than Hermione to release" (you have "that"). I particularly like how you wove Muggle medicine into the plot, and the hopeful future for both Narcissa and Severus. The dungeon episode was realistic-feeling, and the action was beautifully drawn, as were your characters. :D
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  • From iamhughpym on January 16, 2007
    Good story. DM/HG stories are difficult to make believable but this well done. Nice dialogue too.
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  • From AshleyZ on January 16, 2007
    I really loved this. It was a great take on what happens after Half Blood Prince. I liked the interweaving of Muggle medicine with Wizard Medicine, we saw a bit of that in OOTP with Arthur and his stitches. Anyway, I thought this was very well written and I enjoyed every second of it. Superb job!
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  • From Chavela25 on January 16, 2007
    *jump ... bounce*

    I saw this on LJ, the link, and just had to read it!

    OMG! Something new and wonderful, and Dramione has been seriously lacking. *bows* Thank you for making it so awesome again!

    I am now... A FAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    So moving and wonderful. I am speechless, just to say, how great this was!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    PEACE♥
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  • From oxcab on January 15, 2007
    wow, ^_^ that was great the best H/D fic i've read ^_^
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