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Reviews for Saving your life

By : lilmisblack
  • From phoenixrhapsodyv3 on January 27, 2009
    This in the end? I don't believe it. I can't believe it. I have been reading your story since... about August of 2007. This is the end. I feel like I've survived the war. I just feel numb and saddened by the loss. I--I shall reflect on this story often, and... seriously, write a story of your own, and e-mail me and I will buy your book. You are a fantastic writer and if you have a beta... they are fantastic too. Thank you for this! Thank you so much! I shall now get on the ball and hustle to add more to my story as well. You inspire me, lilmisblack. Thank you.
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  • From randc9394 on January 27, 2009
    I have so enjoyed this story. I could really feel the emotion that Hermione was experiencing. It has been so frustrating to be in love with Snape. Thank you for having a happy ending. It really makes all the frustration and struggle worth it. Such is life.
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on January 27, 2009
    That was a great, interesting, original and fun angsty story. Congratulations on completing it. And, thank you for sharing it with us. HG4eva
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  • From LadyDisdain on January 27, 2009
    Mmmm I read the first three chapters and I'm not quite sure what to think of it. It seems a bit weird, since you mostly tell the story and there are a lot of holes in it. Okay on to the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - m3phista on January 12, 2009
    Hey, wow, your fanfiction was fantastic!!
    I have read a few dozens but yours is the best for sure!!

    The way u describe the character's acting is so authentic compared to the books!
    Wow - really - less writers achieve that around here alas.

    Damn I liked 'your' Severus! Thats exactly how he is in the books, his comments,
    his mimic, his all over behaviour. - I bet J.K. would be proud ;-)

    (Though sometimes I wonder what she would think of us pple here at adultfanfiction
    'using' her characters for those wicked stories here ;-) )

    And I liked that you could build up a complex story around Snape and Hermione,
    which let to a constant up and down of their relationship, tension rising and falling,
    thats how it should be! It never went boring! You got it, you should be an author!!
    The corruption and blackmails made one also sometimes unsure whether to trust a character
    (like Draco) or not - really, really entertaining! I couldn't get away from reading!

    I still havent read the seventh book to the end but I fear Severus will die, allthough for the side of light and fullfill the role a long misunderstood hero..... i will see, dont want him dead, lol - but if, then your story has a much better ending by far!

    I'd love to read more SS/HG-fic of you! That would be great entertainment :D

    I believe you are a native speaker, your English is perfect! Mine not, whish I could write like you.

    If you like to answer my review, I added my e-mail-adress.

    Greetings,
    m3phista
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  • From jlclark on December 29, 2008
    WOW!! That was really excellent! I have been reading this non-stop for two days because I got so wrapped up in it that I could not stop. This is my first SS/HG fic and thanks to this story it will not be my last; I absolutely loved it. The plot was extremely original and clearly shows your writing ability as does your development of the characters; it was just right, you gave enough to paint a vivid picture of what everyone thought and yet did not go overbroad. Your scenes of intimacy between S/H were so incredibly hot and yet passionate; they were by far some of the best scenes I have ever read, especially in chapter 25! I hope you can post the epilogue soon as I am already dying to know the details of how their life ended up. Thanks for the excellent story and I look forward to reading more of your work:)
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  • From ANON - avosa on December 09, 2008
    Yay! they both lived...i was so stressed, worrying one of them would die. I can't wait to read the epiloge. :D I hope draco is ok too. :} Hee hee i know your pen name is "lil miss black" but for some reason whenever i read it i think "limp bisket"... no offense or anything lol, i just can't help it ;P. I loved your story, every bit of it. thanks for sticking to it and finishing it, you really should write your own books. Good luck with finals!
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  • From nastygrl on December 06, 2008
    That was such a long, satisfying chapter! Great job, weaving in and out of the battle, lots of action, but I didn't get lost in it. The ending was fantastic! I can't wait to read the next parts.

    Excellent chapter!
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  • From erisah on December 06, 2008
    I absolutely loved this. Beautiful work.
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  • From ANON - makaem on December 04, 2008
    Fabulous.
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on December 04, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From catysmom1028 on December 04, 2008
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From ismene5 on December 04, 2008
    First of all I want to thank you for this wonderful amazing story. I really enjoyed it and I'm very sad its over.
    It's a real treasure.

    I was so afraid Severus or Hermione wouldn't survive the war.
    Now I'm very happy about the ending.
    This chapter was so exciting. You are a fantastic writer!
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  • From TriniMinx on December 04, 2008
    Ahhhhhhhhh, chpt. 64 -- so good!
    I can't wait for your epilogue!!!
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  • From SorceressFujin on December 04, 2008
    Excellent!!! Very much looking forward to the epilogue!
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