Click Here!

Reviews for Still The One

By : KarenaEliz
  • From ANON - Morwen Snape on July 09, 2003
    I didn't really understand your last comment to me on the replies, but thanks.
    Draco is such a blunt person. No tact. "How's it going Severus? So Hermione's having your child?" GAH! I really think that is was good for Severus to know though. I can't wait till the next chappie to see how Severus confronts Hermy. I didn't think that Sev would react so calmly to the fact that Hermy didn't tell him about the baby. He blows up about little things, but when she holds back a GIANT secret he's like "AWW, I wonder what the baby's room will look like?" Seems a little OOC for your story. But who am I to judge, I'm not a writer (but I play one on T.V.).
    Sirius is so pathetically cute in the way he loves Hermoine, it makes me sad. *comforts Sirius in an indecent manner* And I love the white picket fence and 2.6 children thing. "Meet our children, Sirius Jr., Annalese, and Sco....," That is hilarious.
    That was a evil preview of your next story. I knew that they (Hermy and Sev) were going to get together and have a wonderful life, but I wanted to wait till the end of the story. *hits herself for reading preview*

    Reeling in pain from the blows to head,
    Morwen Snape
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Lady Aidil on July 09, 2003
    As I enjoyed the previuos chapter-lemonny and arng(mng(many people dream about having sex intercourse in public place even so they aren`t so courageous to make dreams come true-this "Goodbay" of Hermiona was gorgoeus for me-I like this idea)as a pure entertaintment,now the last chapter left me sad and uneasy.First,when I`d read "really evil" preview-I thought-"I have to shoot this woman-she did it again"-put Sirius around Hermiona as the healer of her broken heart,yet I found out such a wonderful,subtle description of disinterested love you wrote,the portrait of Sirius-as a loving,warm,devoted man-my heart was immediatly melted and anger disappeared-this side of him,doesn`t matter-kept in character or OOC-had changed my mind and made it up,I`m around to like him-what`s very unexpected for me,indeed-it means that your skills as a writer are marvellous-you convinced me at the end.I`m very glad that Severus knows about Hermiona`s pregnancy and circumstancies they were involved-I see you gave up developing of infidelity plot-I think too the story would be darker and more difficult to end happily nonetheless I`m curious what way you tried to lead,using this matter.I want to admit Draco is sometimes very straightforward and merciless performing "the voice of common sense" yet this time I enjoyed and admired the way he had treated Snape.It`s rather funny and a little odd that such an adult man as Severus needs to take a very young one`s advice,besides his former student. Who is more experienced in this relationship?-Draco,no doubt! I hope the happy end you`ve considered-will include the reconcilation of Severus andmionmiona.I don`t want to see Sirius with her despite the fact I`m looking at him more friendly.Severus as the father-in-the-future-lovely thing watching him how he would deal with this challenge in his life!Many hugs for my beloved author!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Charma1023 on July 09, 2003
    Lets hope Draco can work his magic on Severus! *crosses fingers* Wonderful chapter, poor Hermione, this must be re har hard for her. I think you are writing everybody's reactions really well, they are very realistic. But I'm not sure how many tugs my heart can take. My heart ached as I read about Severus and how he couldn't sleep back in his bed, and how his home felt empty now. I hope you are able to update again soon, I just love this story.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - wingweaver on July 08, 2003
    sweet story, its really, good, you dont see many where Severus is fertile. Can you let me know when you update again, cause I dont have an account on aff, so I have no way of knowing if you've updated or not.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - aprilgrey on July 08, 2003
    I've been behind in my reading, and the good news is that I got to read a couple of chapters all at once! Lots of fun! I'm having a great time with story and am looking forward to the next.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Beth Hunts on July 08, 2003
    I Love your story, Great job of keeping Snape in Character, so many authors make him to soft. Yours is of tof the Few I wait for updates with anticion.ion. Thanks for the preview of the new story. THANKS AGAIN for the GREAT STORY.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Catherine on July 08, 2003
    Hey! Great chapter, Severus better get his act together, and Sirus better back off. Here is my email adress. Last time i reviewed i frogot to give it to you:P Ohhh im still slightly depressed...oh thats just not right...oh well being the goddess of fiction you are it will be all good....now update update now dont keep us waiting:) *Huge Grin*

    Catherine
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Inge on July 08, 2003
    ok, no more previews, evil ending, cliffie size of a huge building... LOL
    I m watching my language now :)
    but ow boy love the chapter !! that's one thing I can tell you :)
    Looking forward to the end

    Hugs
    Inge
    Report Review

  • From ANON - ChevyBaby on July 08, 2003
    This story is excellent! I can't wait for the next chapter :o)


    Report Review

  • From ANON - Alia on July 08, 2003
    Ok, its really late, and I couldn't sleep, and you still only have 299 reviews, so, what the hell?

    HAHA, I AM REVIEWER NUMBER 300!!!!!!!!!!!!

    (why can't I make the letters bigger *pout*)

    Ok, that was fun! Way to go! 300 reviews is amazing...I averaged it, its 14.285714285714285714 per chapter!

    ~Amy :)

    Report Review

  • From ANON - Stacey on July 07, 2003
    This was really good. I'll be sad when it's over but at least there's still 2 more chapters left. T!e next story that you are planning sounds promising. I can't wait to start reading it!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - GrrArrg on July 07, 2003
    Hi hon, Well Sev took the news a lot better than I expected, I thought he would deny it and rant and rave for a bit first, but I'm glad he didn't, those two are entirely too hot headed for their own good and one of them needs to start being a bit sensible!! Quite sad we are on the home stretch now but looking forward to a sloppy weepy happy ending (please, I've got my tissues and everything!) I'm liking the preview of the new story very much, I take it that its kind of following on from Still the one but on a different thread, good stuff all round!!
    GrrArrg

    P.s hope you got a good seat for the fireworks on friday!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - BakaChan on July 07, 2003
    ahhhh yes verrry satisfying....more more more more....lol

    oooohhh see I would have to see more of that next story to help with a title.....
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Seraphina on July 07, 2003
    Now, listen very carefully, Severus; just do exactly as Draco and Karena Elizabeth tell you and everything will be alright....

    Great chapter. Have to say, I felt very sorry for Sirius *sniffle*, but I'm afraid I felt sorrier for Severus *double sniffle*. Hermione and he need one another.

    Excellent preview for your new fic, I'll definately keep a lookout for that. Your Neville is a complete arse and I long to see him get his come uppance and for Remus and Ginny to find happiness...and good sex;0)


    Report Review

  • From ANON - Rei on July 07, 2003
    OMG! I love this fic! Please update soon!! And I know that Hermione is going through her "mood swing stage"....but I hope that there are some fluffy HG/SS moments in the next chapter. Enough with the angst! *smiles*
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!