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By : KarenaEliz
  • From ANON - Andrian on June 24, 2003
    wicked you! leave me melting in a puddle once more...and I am all alone...

    Really enjoyed it!!
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  • From ANON - TeaRoses on June 24, 2003
    I love this! I love it! It's hot, it'eat,eat, it's romantic, it's... yeah. Usually I'm more subdued when I review things. I can't wait for a new chapter and meanwhile I'm going to read it again... oh yeah, and I need to read Order of the Pheonix when my husband is finished with it. I don't think it's going to have any hot sex scenes though, darn.
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  • From ANON - BakaChan on June 23, 2003
    "I" Umbrige is a bitch....sigh... but alas I can't make full comments on her or the book cuz so many have yet to read it.
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  • From ANON - Morwen Snape on June 23, 2003
    Arrgh!! I forgot to tell you that I went to the site and cheat. I . I mean.... voted for you. While there I read NUMEROUS S/H stories and only stopped because OotP came out. Loved it!! Took me a good 10 hours to finish, though. It was kinda long. And for any of you that happen to read my review, for some odd reason, it is nothing like her other books. It is very dark, and not as much humor (although Fred and George's pranks were great). For those of you who have read the books Umbridge is the only fictional character I have ever hated/lothed/despised, take your pick. All people who hate her say "I," all who don't whats wrong with you? Well back to the point at hand, Love the fiction can't wait for more. *g*

    Hoping I haven't given too much away,
    ~Morwen Snape
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  • From ANON - Morwen Snape on June 23, 2003
    I just read chapters 16 and 17. They were great! I didn't find one mistake (granted I wasn't looking that hard but, oh well). Who knew that Hermione was such a feisty girlnk wnk wink. I can't wait for the next chapters. Oh and sense you have two full time betas I think that I will stop giving you corrections, cause I am sure that they will do a great job.
    Oh, and I did it again. I tried to skip the spoilers and I caught "coming down the drive" and "mother" and I had to go and read it, curse you.
    I think a good pairing would be Sirius/Remus, my other favorite pairing. But only if it MWPP era because when people write post Hogwarts stories they seem to be boring. They ususally consist of Sirius running from dementors and Remus feeling down cause he is a werewolf. BOOOOORING. But when peolpe do sto stories they get into a lot of trouble and have fun adventures. (that should be the other way round). Please don't do a Harry/Hermione or Harry/Ginny because then I will have to boycott your work and I don't want to do that. (I hate Harry/Hermione or Ginny parings. YUCK!!)

    Waiting patiently for the next installment,
    ~Morwen Snape
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  • From ANON - GrrArrg on June 23, 2003
    Sorry for the delay iviewviewing but I didn't think anything would be happening online for a few days what with Order of the pheonix being released, and then of course I had to read it twice (yes I'm obsessive I know this!) But look TWO fab new chapters you really do spoil us you know, things aominoming along nicely thank you, Hermione is a bit of a bitch isn't she!! Of course I love her like that and now that things are settling down between them I'm betting there's a big row on the horizon! In answer to your question I would love a Ginny/Lupin pairing please as I am becoming quite fond of these two together, there are a few v.good fics about them but I would love to see your spin on them (I have a bit of a soft spot for Lupin). Anyway I'm all yours again now until bo com comes out!!
    GrrArrg
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  • From ANON - Inge on June 23, 2003
    You go girl !!!
    Lovely chapter (saw a little preview on IM a few weeks ago remember :) )
    The flowers... mmm I wish I was here LOL *blush*
    He is such a sensual man in this story - very realistic btw :D
    I hope you updaton !on !!
    ow and eu, thx for no cliffie in the preview
    I'm updating tomorrow btw ;o)

    Hugssssssssssss
    Inge

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  • From ANON - Pearle on June 23, 2003
    Great, as usual. I look for an update every time I link to the web. I really like your take on Snape. As for the sterile issue with Snape, the result of too many curses?
    A resolvable issue? I had to take a break from a marathon work load before I attend a conference this week and read your updates. I look forward to having many chrs trs to read when I return. But an update Mon or Tues would make my day (I definitely need a life or an update to the one I have). More please.

    Stop reading your reviews, write, post. Go.

    Pearle
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  • From ANON - Amelia on June 22, 2003
    Yay! Happy chapter! *snickers* Hope she hops to it and gets dressed before his mum comes into view! I'd write more, but it's very late here and I have work tomorrow. Brilliant as usual, can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - violet on June 22, 2003
    I can't remember if I've reviewed any chapters yet or not, but I've been following this fic, and I must say, it's fabulous. I think that you've stayed true to character for both Severus and Hermione, all the while straying from the all-too-regular fanon pigeonholes of a more sexually explorative(read: promiscuous) Hermione and an emotionally wounded(read: desperate) Snape. The writing style if great, and you are an excellent writer of tasteful smut. for your question of future fic pairings, I think that Ginny/Remus are a great pairing, and for Ron, Lavender is an obvious fanon choice, and not a bad one, but Lune Lovegood, from the fifth book, struck me as oddly perfect for Ron- completely strange, yes, but absolutely honest(essential, since he's clueless about typical girl behaviour in da) an) and unwaveringly loyal. Plus, it's a weird enough pairing that it would make good plot fodder(Ron getting over being embarassed of "loony" Luna, etc.). Anyway, that's my two cents, and I will read anything that you post on aff.net
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  • From ANON - Silver Midnight on June 22, 2003
    i love the two new chappies. as to the ron thing, Ive heard its him they kill in the next book. And im totally for a draco/harry anyways. I love those two, almost as much as hermione/severus.
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  • From ANON - Seraphina on June 22, 2003
    Two chapters of sheer bliss, thank you so much. Chap 17 was very sexy; the garden, the flowers, the scents, the sun and Severus, what more could a girl want.:0)) I loved your preview, what is Snape's mum going to make of Hermione? I suppose that depends on how many clothes she's got on when they meet!! Looking forward to those introductions being made in the next chappie.
    BTW Black Velvet by Alayna Miles just suited them down to the ground, very slow, sultry and Southern.
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  • From ANON - Lace on June 22, 2003
    Okay, I've just spent the last 28 hours reading Order of the Phoenix...nonstop...a great one but not what I expected at all. There's some very interesting new characters tho that would be fantastic for a pairing up. I won't give away any details just in case, but with a name like Nymphadora Tonks...how can you go wrong?!?! BTW...I love the song Black Velvet too LOL!
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  • From ANON - QueenC on June 22, 2003
    Wow. I just adored these two chapters! Lol, and to think that I had flowers VERY similar to the one used in that last chapter growing outside my window my entire childhood. lmfao (I'm from Georgia, just so you know hehe)

    Lol, I love the preview. I swear, I almost had a vision of Severus as an actual teenager...considering he told Hermione he felt like one, then started the typical 'crap, my mother's home!'.

    And, while, as a writer, I know how good it feels to finally see an end in sight with a fic, as a reader I feel I must say: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! I am SO not ready for this fic to end! *sniffs*

    Anywho. As always, great chapters hun. I can't wait until Hermione meets the 'rents. Hehe
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  • From ANON - Stacey on June 22, 2003
    This was great! Does Hermione get dressed in time? When will he tell her that he loves her? I can't wait for the next chapter.
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