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By : KarenaEliz

From ANON - Alia on June 22, 2003
Huh? Book changes what? *panics* Arrgh! Get online!!! I need someone to talk to about OotP anyway!

Now, chapter 17, sooo hot! You know, I have too many fav chapters in this story. Its so hard to rank them! *whines* But that ones definitely up there. Who woulda though, just a flower!

~Alia :)
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From ANON - Emmaleigh on June 22, 2003
Thanks for updating. I finished OoP yesterday... Cannon has seriously changed. I live in the south and have Gardenia bushs in my front yard it's good to see someone use flowers in a story. Gardenia, fig, and musk are my three most favorite smells. They are so erotic. I liked the chapters. Keep up the good work. You're wonderful.
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From ANON - BakaChan on June 22, 2003
ahh Yes I was one that was lost in the abyss of the new book...sigh...it is sooooooooo good! Anyway! YUM! on all chapters.....YEA! I relly like the teaser...sigh can we have it now pleeeeeeeeeeeease???????

Sigh.....

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From ANON - Lara on June 22, 2003
Hi, I started this story just today, and I `ve finished jst a second ago! Wow! You really do a good job. Oh, by the way, I love the song "Black velvet" and I think it suits the couple perfectly. Keep going! This is gorgeous. Greetz Lara
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From ANON - MoD on June 22, 2003
Well I haven't been able to read lately but this was a welcome surprise! This stroy is really flowing, I just love it. What is this Dark sarcasim?
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From ANON - Pammy on June 22, 2003
Hermione, you hothouse flower you! Nice scene. Eager to see how Severus mother takes to much younger Hermione.
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From ANON - Spoonie on June 22, 2003
ack! u must continue!!!!!!!!!! fast!
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From ANON - Raven on June 21, 2003
hahahaha... great... hahaha.... no comment...
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From ANON - Silver Midnight on June 21, 2003
omg! I absolutely love your story. reading it has made my day better (I found out this morning I have strep throat). I love the way you have presented your characters. Their in character enough to make the story easy to read but OOC enough to make it intresting- if that makes any sense at all. The settings and descriptions make it easy to keep up with whats currently going on, even though the story is very long. I began to skip the previews at the ends of the chapters, because i find the cliffhanger-ish in the magnitude of their evil propertys to much to deal with. Post again soon.

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From ANON - Sinayah on June 21, 2003
Lovely work, well written! I'm not usually a S/H reader but I quickly got caught up in this fic. I hope to see more of it soon.

Happy Writing,

Sinayah =)
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From ANON - Lady Aidil on June 21, 2003
You are incredible!I`ve simply got a headache because of realization how much I missed during the week-long break(I was in superb place taking the exhausting proffesional course,unfortunately without access to Internet)You are my really Goddess of Fics not only of smut and lemon,besides the quickiest updating writer I`ve ever seen.These three chapters I just finished after I`ve printed them(I`m an old-fashioned reader -prefer rather paper pages than computer screen despite I work with several comps` screens every day)are all gorgoeus,so I`m not astonished that you are so highly rated in ranks and get so many reviews.The dialogues between Snape and Hermiona are always marvellous -in chpt.13 I enjoyed the last part most of all because of greatly funny Hermiona`s statements about"boys"fighting like stupid dogs.I like Snape`s features with some bastard`s behaviours-he shouldn`t be fluffy even if he were in love.But ,of course,chpt.14 is my favourite-the last dance of the day-such a romantic (and a little nasty)situation-and this costume of Mr.Darcy-do you like Jane Austen`s books?I have to admit that several years ago I was convicted I didn`t admire them but now I read all and have found the very interesting world to explore,sometimes similar to Wizards World of HP.The costume fits Severus since he is the ancient man even more than the another male wizards.The sweetiest part of your fic is the beatiful love scene-both delightful and arousing,yet I suspect after previews that it is only short intermezzo and you are going to complicate their relationship even more than in previous chapters-I nearly can imagine your devilish smile-if Snape thought he`d got the point would be prepared for surprises and hard experiences despite their reconciliation.I expect the complications by reason of the misundertanding of intentions after the conversation about pregnancy -do you suggest that Severus is sterile and couldn`t conceive children,maybe as the result of his past,receiving of dangerous spells for example?It would be great difficulty if Hermiona couldn`t really bear this fact(I hope she could)The dinner with Hermiona`s parents-such a lovely and funny piece of social observations-Hermiona`s mother as the impatient grandma-in-the-future and very observant and clever father-I like him so much.The dialogue between Hermiona and her parents-especially hilarious introducing of Severus-I couldn`t help laughing-she is incredibly wonderful as she`s angry,so acerbic and cute-far more Slytherin she should be expected but with Gryffindors` bravado-I love the spicy hints you`re developing in small scenes like this one.I`ve forgotten to write that I wasn`t the fan of relationship between Harry and Draco-not at all-however I`d met some fics including this plot,but yet I find out that like them as a pairing and as the Hermiona`s advicers regarding the love affairs-sounds a little odd for me but I accept.The diversities of opinions following the differencies of experience could be very interesting and fruitful.I`m curious if you like the magic gadgets(not Inspector Gadget-thank you very much!)-my favourite in HP world is Polyjuice Potion-I enjoy possibilities of this item`s usage in love connections as well as the Invisible Cloak and brooms-they involves swirls of imagination.I like to observe the changes of Snape`s love ability-the paths of love are very narrow and tortuous for him,he`s insecure man despite his brilliant mind and inteligence-he hadn`t have got any lessons of warm and good feelings,only of cruelty.violence and mistrust-thi the the long and difficult way to normal life-so all of us-his fans-wish him to achieve. I want to ask you-are you one of these fans who can`t imagine Snape as a father or one of them they enjoy fanfics with Severus as a loving parent?Because I`m still not able to decide which option is more suitable.Regards for my beloved author with great request-promise you will certainly finish your work despite new HP book.(I`m waiting for my book from Amazon.).
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From ANON - OzRatbag2 on June 20, 2003
I'm so glad you reviewed my ficlet the other day, otherwise I may not have stumbled upon your story.

I love the interaction of Severus and hermione - the anger, entendres and wit is very well done and not trite or contrived.

The smut is well done too - realistic, without reverting to the overused and erk - 'throbbing manhood' motif of many smut fics.

I'll be interested to see where you lead the characters and how you tie that into either a happy or hateful ending.

I have my copy of OoTP, which I picked up this morning - I'm planning a long, lazy afternoon.
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From ANON - Anna Marie on June 20, 2003
I just love story! Wonderful plot and I just can't wait to see what happens. And by the way I'm off to Dark Sacarsm to give you a well deserved 10!!!!!!

I can't wait to read more.
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From ANON - Amelia on June 20, 2003
Hullo, Sweet!

Great fun this chapter, love the interraction with her mum. *snickers* Reminds me of every conversation I have with my Grams. I really enjoy how you give distinctive personalities to your bit player characters. Can't wait for the next chappie!

BTW - consider yourself voted for. I'm on my way over there right now. :-)
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From ANON - Lace on June 20, 2003
Omg! I haven't been so engrossed in a story since...hell...NEVER! And I've certainly never spent 2 days reading thru all the chapters like my life depended upon it. It's a good thing my hnd ond owns the company or my asuld uld be fired for spending all that time reading when I should have been working. This is absolutely fantastic! I can't wait for the next installment...but wait I shall with feverish fantasies as to what Severus and Hermionie are going to get up to next. You really have a wicked sense of humor that is great to read. BTW...congrats on your business!
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