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By : KarenaEliz
  • From ANON - Catherine on June 20, 2003
    Heya Honey! Wonderful Story, I'm really enjoying it, nice to see that its not to soppy and not to angsty...
    I can't give critizsm not even constructive coz im not that great myself so i try to keep out of it.
    Anyway, you better post soon, i wanna know whats wrong with my Sevvie...i think i know...is he incapable of having children? That would suck, i always thought a child was do such wonders for the man. Ah well its your story and your doing a better job than i could so ill leave you to it:P
    Write write write:P
    Catherine
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  • From ANON - GrrArrg on June 20, 2003
    Hi hon
    Fab new chapter.That Hermione is a firecracker isn't she? I love the way she introduces Severus to her parents!! I wish I had the power to minteinterlocking rooms like that, it would have saved a lot of uncomfortable situations in my youth if I could have freshened up before coming home looking like I had been shagged through a hedge backwards!! I am going to dark sarcasm (one of my faves too) now to give you a lovely big vote, no bribing needed although two chapters together is making me very excited!!
    GrrArrg
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  • From ANON - SnapesAngel (Inge) on June 20, 2003
    Ok this is the point where I'm almost giving in and say pleaaaaaaaaaaaaaaase stop the torture with the previews... But then again I won't :-pp
    As you said - It's pay back time *evil grin*
    About the story: I love it !!! The fact Hermione's father was very friendly with Severus made me feel happy :) (I guess my dad would jump out of his seat when I would introduce him to my lover and show up with Severus :) )
    So hun, keep up the good work, just love it :) *HUGS*
    Talk to you soon

    Hugs
    SnapesAngel
    ps: did I forget to mention: UPDATE SOON PLEASE Sna
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  • From ANON - Pammy on June 20, 2003
    Hilarious parts with Hermione and her mother. And I almost fell over when she first introduced Severus to her parents...strolling for a whore?! Too, too funny. Excellent chapter all around.
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  • From ANON - Potions Mistress on June 19, 2003
    ok, there are 25 hours and 45 minutes till OOTP!!!!!! YAY! Liked this chapter! What's wrong with Severus?? I can't go vote 4 ur story today i think, but i promise i'll do it sunday night!! Bye
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  • From ANON - Seraphina on June 19, 2003
    Ah, sweet, sweet conflict! Just think of the wonderful making up that will take place. The interplay with Hermione and her mum was just top, and soo funny. What I'm curious about is if Snape can't have children, or just thinks he can't have children?! I have my suspicions about t but but I'm probably completely off beam. I shall wait and see what the great goddess of story provides ;0)
    Anyway, thanks for another great chappie, I'm off to Dark Sarcasm now to register my vote.
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  • From ANON - morwen snape on June 19, 2003
    Thank you for metioning me in your end credits. *is humbled* I love this chapter esp. the line where Snape says that he is more nervous than when he went up against Voldermort, *grins* nice touch. And snogging in the movies, can't get enough of that. WOOHOO. B mus must say that I am held in suspence at why Snape is infertile. I have my theories, but I can wait. You will tell us why he is infertile won't you?

    You have done well in this chapter padowan; I havn't picked out any glaring errors (those are the only ones I can pick out and I am sure that you have corrected them).

    P.S. Oh, I think that you are absolutly horrible in putting in spoilers. I try to scroll through them as fast as I can but then I end up picking out the juicy bits and have to go back and read it. *grins*

    Looking ard ard to next chappie,
    ~Morwen
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  • From ANON - QueenC on June 19, 2003
    I came, I read, I went and voted. Lol.

    As far as I'm concerned, you deserve to be at THE TOP of that list. This fic is simply amazing. I just loved this part, especiallyrmiormione and her mother arguing while Severus has to brave THE TALK. LOL. And, so I'm assuming he can't have kids? Or thinks he can't? Something along those lines? Hmm. Well, as a mother, I can say that, while kids are the greatest gift we could ever receive, it doesn't necessarily make or break a relationship. I mean, hello? Do they HAVE adoption agencies in the wizarding world? lmfao.

    Great part hun. Now...about those double chapters... ;)
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  • From ANON - Pearle on June 19, 2003
    Great as always. This story definitely leaves me wanting more. I voted at Darksarcasm, unfortunately it will only let you vote once (I tried!). More.............please?!?!?!?!?!?
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  • From ANON - Emmaleigh on June 19, 2003
    Wow... just like real life. Nobody says what they're really thinking and what they're really feeling. Sigh STO goodness. You got my vote baby! You roxs like soxs in a box!
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  • From ANON - Alia on June 19, 2003
    Everyone go vote for Karena...you know you want to! Make her feel all good and warm about her story! Trust me, she puts lots of work into it! She just wants to make it known to more people! *gets teary eyed* (Do people actually read other reviews, or am I writing this for nothing? I know I am curious about what other people say!)

    Ok, enough with the sweet talk. Hehe, the lines bet Her Hermione and her mother crack me up every time I read them. Definitely my fav part of the chapter.

    ~Alia
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  • From ANON - Stacey on June 19, 2003
    As always this was a great chapter. I can't wait to read more. You are the best!
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  • From ANON - GrrArrg on June 17, 2003
    GOOD GOD WOMAN!!!!!! What are you trying to do, kill me?
    First of all Snape as Darcy!!
    My two favourite fantasy figures from literature (oh come on, eone one loves a bastard, even before they were played by Alan Rickman and Colin Firth on screen,though admitedly that helps the image!!) Thanks for that!!
    And second, smutty goodness!!!
    Yay, mattress dancing ahoy!
    I have just finished the second of two days of twelve hour shifts and look at my lovely reward! so thanks for that too!
    Bf cof course they can't stay happy like that, because we need more passionate fighting, which leads to passionate making up!!
    I've said it before and I'll say it again, YOU ROCK!!! more soon please
    GrrArrg

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  • From ANON - Morwen Snape on June 17, 2003
    I came into your story half way and wanted to read all that I could of it before I reviewed. This is great! I love Severus/Hermione stories. I love that you made it so hard for them to get together, because lets face it, it would be hard to startelatelationship with Severus. (That wonderful bastard). *gets on flaming box* I just have one complaint, and it may be an oversite by me, WHAT THE HELL DOES SIRIUS TEACH?! I didn't even know that he was a teacher at the school until the chapter when they go to London. I'm like what castle? Sirius lives in a castle? He's a teacher?! I need to know, now! *steps off of flaming box* Sorry but it has been buggin. B. But other than that (well and a few grammatical/spelling errors) this is a great story. I can't wait for the rest of the chapters. *is really sorry for yelling at you* :'(
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  • From ANON - SnapesAngel aka Inge on June 17, 2003
    Karena!!!

    You are the smutgodess :joyejoyed this chapter - Severus just sooooooooooooo male, I can imagine him in the white shirt., black hair mmmmmmmmm ok (gotta snap out of it now lol)!!!!!!! ow and as for the preview :p you are evil, but then again it looks like we are learning things from eachother LOL (at least I m learning from you *eg*)
    I have my chapters ready to typ so.. It's pay back time indeed :-pp
    but, Love ya hun reallllly do :))
    Update soon please !!!
    Hugs
    Inge
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