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By : KarenaEliz

From ANON - Alia on June 15, 2003
Hmm, I think I am the only one who can actually proclaim "Karena Elizabeth is the Goddess of all Smutty Goodness" considering I am the only one who has read the smutty goodness, but just so everyone knows, I consider the statement t Yo You know, its a good thing that I don't put my e-mail up here, or else I'd probably have people sending me everything from death threats to bribes in order to get their hands on that outline! :) And about your comment about the other Alia, thank you very much but I don't swing that way! Hmmph! Really, would I be reading HG/SS smut! Hehe! But I did use your reviewing space, so I guess you are entitled to comment!

Ok, on to the actual chapter, I think my fav part in that one had to be the description of the dress. Did I already tell you that? For some reason I have this sense of deja written! Anyway, that was truely a piece of creative genius (yes, shameless flattery so you will write more and send me more chapters)! And of course, the dog pissing contest comment definitly made me laugh! Just so perfect for those too.

~Alia (the beta)
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From ANON - fervesco on June 15, 2003
Once again, absolutely wonderful! And quite humorous too! I am so glad SS seems to be finally getting over his arrogance!

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From ANON - Silverose on June 13, 2003
Please please update soon!!! I have been checking everyday for a mmonth you aren't giving up are u?!? I love this story!
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From ANON - Aranel on June 12, 2003
Oh, come on, already. Let them screw!!!!

No, really, I still love the story; you're still doing a great job, etc. etc. I am eagerly waiting for the next installment.

Hope RL gives you a break soon.

Love,
Aranel
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From ANON - AprilGrey on June 11, 2003
Great story! I esp. loved the raven driven mail exchange and the help she is getting from both Draco and Sirius. It's nice to see them as good guys. Looking forward to the next update.

April
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From ANON - Anon on June 11, 2003
hey you are takeing to long to update!!
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From ANON - Potions Mistress on June 11, 2003
I sat here and read the entire story, well, all that you have right now, that is! I love it! I love the way they keep going back and forth between being together and not. This story is immaculently written, and I can't wait until you update again. What sort of business have u and your friend started, if you don't mind me asking. I like the Harry/Draco pairing, even though i don't usually like slash. I also love the previews you put in here. It makes a person stay up an extra hour to read all that you've posted!! Poor raven (from several chapters ago) Is he okay? When do we get to see some smut?!?! *whines* i wanted to see some before i went to bed!! *sobs uncontrollably* I have no one that will love me, the least you people could do is give me my daily dosage of smut before i go to bed!! LOL. And i thought the mattress dancing comment was hious.ous. I mean, i have never tried it, but i'm sure it would be fun. *smirks*. yes, i am a poor little girl (not really little, i'm almost 18) and i'm lonely! Anyhow, i can't wait until HP and the Order of the Pheonix comes out!! Update soon!!
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From ANON - BakaChan on June 06, 2003
ARRGGG...... MORE MORE MORE MORE...... Sigh....I know and yet I havent had time to update my own story....sigh....hey it took me 2 days to read these chapters...

But it is really really good!

Keep it up!

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From ANON - Lady Aidil on June 04, 2003
I had some hard days so I`ve missed my favourite fic,but now find double entertainment reading two chapters.The title of the previous chapter is very proper-she was great performing angel-like nursing of Severus,outstright from pages of the adviser book "Taking Care of The Very Inebriated Wizards"-she almost could be the author!I`m not such a patient person especially with the drn crn creatures.Tha last chapter is magnent!ent!Snape behaves unbearably-his answer for Hermiona`s question about dancing was both rude and repulsive.How could he be such a insensitive,stubborn and tactless twit,if he regarded himself as a clever,bright man?It`s the well-done feature-kept in the cannon charr-her-he has a dragon`s ass skin in all relationships with the other people.This is the reason he deserves a hard treatment and I hope he`ll get it.Somebody must learn him to display feelings in a proper way and doesn`t let him be a dog in the manger-his jealousy is riddiculus,considering the fact that he is simply doing nothing for making things better.Hermiona would be the best teacher of the normal common people`s life,in my opinion.I afraid that her love and faithfulness should be extremely strong as well as her personality and resistance to mockery and cruelty showing by Severus on regular basis.I think these features are the utterly insecure maarmoarmor of defence against all unpredictable insults, because it seems Snape`s world is full of enemies both real and fictitious,without any warm feelings. Unlike Severus -Sirius is becoming the most protective and indulgent person in Hermiona`s circle.His will of support and coming help even for the good of love affair between Hermiona and Severus might occur the geniune challenge or plainly danger for Snape if he still maintained the attitude of control freak.I know-Snape is an uneasy,scared man,it might have been a humiliation for him,beeing found senselessly drunken by the woman he loves,that made him too much vulnerable,so he was so perplexed with the unability to express himself.I`m curios what will happen on the ball and what role Mr Kalet will play in the future,besides I want to see the Sirus` help.I imagine you could involve a lot of funny staff in these situations.
I`m only a reviewer,the one of many but I could imagine what the writer may feel-the act of creation includes both blissful and pain,the work is like beloved child,carefully treated,fed with the author`s feelings and hope,"sweat and blood"-so as you exposed it for readers` eyes you would feel vulnerably even naked,waiting for answers-"blesses or flames?"victory or defeat? I`ve never sent flames-if I didn`t like fic I`d have my own volition to read or not to read,without hurting anybody.If I found joy in reading I`d very willingly sing the praises,because the worse thing I too often find out is when the writer gives up and doesn`t end fic I`m used to.Congratulations for finding your beta.Very hot regards for one of my goddesses of Snape`s fics!Be still so marvellous and update soon,I would read this story even as it were hundreds chapters long!
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From ANON - Inge on June 04, 2003
Heya,

I'm soooooooooo sorry that I didn't review anymore *blush* But then again here I am :)
Just love your story, but hej, I ve allready told you that a 1000000000000 times if I had the chance
Keep up the good writing and don't let any stupid remarks and reviews bring you down... YOU ARE GREAT !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

See ya

Hugs
Inge
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From ANON - Greenie on June 04, 2003
*claps* Much better - I couldn't find half as many mistakes. Hope you got my email.

Yes, I did like the story, honestly I did. I enjoy fanfiction for itself, however the story I cannot read is the story I am likely to really flame. As it was, it was jusme lme light constructive critisism - you obviously don't like the mistakes any more than I do, so I hope it was helpful. See email for listing *grin*

I do want the next chapter (you manage to find the most amusing closing lines for your spoilers, you tease) and I'd also like to say sorry if you're afraid to write now. You have good writing skills, and a nice handle on thot aot and especially the characters (your Snape! As I said, and others have pointed out - SO Alan Rickman *drool*)

We all make the occsasional typo and grammar error, me most of all. Just thought I should let you kno som someone else could read it over *congratulates Alia on a good job*

Can't wait to see them dancing... *gets all fluttery and excited*

~Greenie
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From ANON - breastlady on June 04, 2003
Oh my god! I am choking on the anticipation! It took me 45 minutes to get to the story again tonight. (I guess
I guess everyone was trying to read at the same time.) I was on chapter 9 when I had to stop last night, now I
dieing that there isn't any more yet! I love your style. You are a great writer. Every time I consider writing some
myself, I read something this well done and I a sure I could never live up to your example. If this is your
first fic, I am your fan for life. Write more naughty stuff, please. I love maiden Hermione learns the joys of
passion from Severus stories.

Breastlady
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From ANON - kendra on June 03, 2003
I came, I saw, I read
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From ANON - Emmaleigh on June 03, 2003
You're story is not TRASH!!! Girl please! I love it and pox on the house of anyone who doesn't.
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From ANON - Alia on June 03, 2003
Much better!!! Aren't you glad ughtught it? No unnecessary flames! :)

To the other Alia - Whoa, I've never met someone whose name is actually Alia! I it it as a internet name (which follows that it's not my real name), taken from Frank Herbert's Dune books. Thats so cool!

~Alia
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