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By : KarenaEliz
  • From ANON - Aranel on May 23, 2003
    Just like Hermione in the preview, I'm crying out "more! more!" Love the raven-mail. I can't wait for chapter 10, so get busy...

    Aranel
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  • From ANON - Seraphina on May 22, 2003
    I was crying with laughter all through Ch 9. Severus' raven was brilliant, a bit like tizarizarding version of text messaging. I'm looking forward to the next chapter and I can't wait to read the chapter you took your teaser from.
    Thanks for such a great read.
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  • From ANON - Keshu on May 22, 2003
    OOh... I want more! Bloody good!

    *applauds wildly*
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  • From ANON - Inge on May 22, 2003
    Wonderful story hun !! Just love it :m rem rem reading on both whispers and here :D
    The letters were lovely..
    Hope to speak to you soon on msn or something...

    thanks again for your inspiration

    xxx
    Inge
    aka SnapesAngel
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  • From ANON - Lady Aidil on May 22, 2003
    I`m glad you load the next chapter so soon and thank you for pleasure of reading.Hadn`t this poor raven got exhausted and tired?I think it was annoyed-those two stupid people-shouldn`t they nestle in a neaty nest instead of writing such boring tirades so long?I like ravens,particuliary as the one of opportunities to be an animagus form of Severus if this theory came true.Regarding to the story-such an ancient and sophisticated idea-a romance in letters- I love the little lovers`games with a fluid passage from the acerbic,funny mood to more romantic,however full of innuendos.They were teasing each other in way I admire.She is brilliant in this game,considering her age-more impressing than the old sarcastic guy with rather dry sense of humour,if he had it anyway.In all relationships between Hermione and Snape I`d like take her side as a woman at sex-war which the end of universe wouldn`t stop.I laughed loud indeed,she challenged him to a duell of teasing and seducing as well,theds wds were their swords-I was compelled to read this lovely chapter over and over again in order to enjoy all hints.I like the differences between their writing styles-he is more sophisticated and stiff in opposition to her,being more open and light.I`m not astonished you were enjoing your work.The apology for Black`s insults-I`d been giggling before I was aware of being in public net cafe.And the remarks about married men-both hilarious and true,alas.I can`t help telling you the saying I found in the anniversary card from my husband:"An ideal wife is the one who possesses an ideal husband"and the other one:"When a man makes a woman his wife is the highest complement he can pay her and usually the last". I think Severus would agree,he`s a little chauvinistic sometimes,isn`t he ?I want more and more to read!Wave your wand and update soon!Regards.
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  • From ANON - Marianne on May 21, 2003
    LOL.. you nearly died writting... i nearly died of laughter readin it.... LOL Very good keep up the fantabulous work!!!
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  • From ANON - GrrArrg on May 21, 2003
    OH MY GOD!!!What a fantastic fic! I just stumbled upon it and read ch1 through ch9. I am sitting here at 1.46 in the morning with a stupid smile plastered on my face. You are undeniably the queen of unresolved sexual tension and I am having to control myself from shouting at the computer screen "Just take her will you?" But seriously I am enjoying the story a lot more because of them not getting it on straight away.However that little teaser tells me I'm ready for the smut now!! i promise I will review whenever I can from now on if you promise to keep writing (a nice novel length story if you don't mind!) you rock!!
    GrrArrg
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  • From ANON - Pearle on May 21, 2003
    Very funny chapter! It is too bad muggles can't send messages back and forth so quickly. I like the birds attitude at the end. Next ter ter please.

    Pearle
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  • From ANON - fervesco on May 21, 2003
    Wow! This is absolutely brill! It's so sensuous, yet light hearted, and funny. Definitely a pleasure to read! You have obviously spent quite some time plotting this and taken care in your writing (quite refreshing!). THANK YOU!
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  • From ANON - Amelia on May 21, 2003
    *shivers* You and your evil bloody previews!

    Delightful chapter! That poor Raven! Not that he didn't get ol' Sev back in the end. *snickers* Verry entertaining and funny. Nice to see them making some progress!
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  • From ANON - MICHELLE on May 21, 2003
    I LOVE THIS CHAPTER!!!!!!
    ITS SO FUNNY
    YOU REALLY DO HAVE A GREAT GIFT FOR WRITING.

    I HOPE TO SEE MORE SOON


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  • From ANON - giova on May 21, 2003
    Very funny chapter! I was laughing the whole time. As for your preview, what can I say but HOT! I can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - Alia on May 21, 2003
    Ok, so for those who wonder why in the world I would choose Chapter 9, if you think about it, how fun would it be to read the smut if you don't have the backstory leading up to it?

    Now, Karena, my fav part of chapter 9, although it is a small detail, it added so much to the sequence, was the endings to each letter. I loved how they progressed from very formal to more intimate. It just worked so well. And the comment about Severus taking the charm off the raven and locking the door before he went to sleep, well that just cracked me up. I had a picture in my head of Severus Snape cowering under a glaring raven!

    As for the new teaser, *gasp* *fans herself* I can't wait!!!

    ~Alia
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  • From ANON - Red Writing Hood on May 21, 2003
    Oh My! Did I laugh throughout this whole chapter. It was the most funny thing I have read in some time. I loved the Raven...and it's last...uh...offering to Severus as it left. Just TOO funny. I also liked the way the letters went from formal addressing and closing to the more affectionate titles. Very well done...I love this story. I wait breathlessly for the next chapter.

    RWH
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  • From ANON - Stacey on May 21, 2003
    Oh My!!!!! I loved the preview. What chapter was that for? I need more! Please write more!
    BTW Great chapter. It reminded me of Bridget Jones' Diary when Bridget and Daniel send e-mails back and forth to one another.
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