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Reviews for Acting on a Dream

By : metatron
  • From ccino49 on March 14, 2007
    Wow. What a story. I'm not usualy one for slash, even thogh I do read it from time to time. But you got some style with your wrinting. Keep it up.
    ccino
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  • From metatron on February 16, 2007
    Hi Seph7: I'm glad you enjoyed the story. This was my first foray into writing a M/M HP fanfiction. I love Snape. But I have two limitations writing slash...the first is I'm a hetrosexual female, and really have a problem believing I can realistically portray what goes on between two men attracted to each other. I really think the best I could do would be to write a female perspective and change the pronoun to "he" which I sincerely believe does not come close to the dynamic. The second limitation is knowing how much Snape dislikes Harry, despite protecting him. I don't think I could write a story where his dislike realistically changes...much of it due to the first limitation, not knowing how two men in love truly are. So I wasn't trying to write a "refreshing" story as much as I was trying to write within my limitations. I could see Snape being vindictive and taking advantage of Harry's attraction to get "a bit of his own back." And so that's what I wrote. Very glad you enjoyed it however, and your comments were most appreciated as all comments have been. Thank you so much, all of you.


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  • From AngelLovePhoenix on February 14, 2007
    Great Story! Loved it!!
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  • From Seph7 on February 02, 2007
    Wow! It was actually rather refreshing not to have Snape return his affections! I'm not into the whole domination thing myself, but seeing Snape dominate someone is actually really hot! Though personally, having a huge cock make me gag is such a passion killer!!! hehe!!
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  • From on January 23, 2007
    Mmmm... Very nice.
    Very realistic.
    I feel like the realism of this story was the best part.
    The hate, the vengance, etc.
    Very very good.
    I suppose Harry wasn't very realistic, but I feel like this story was more about Snape than it was Harry.
    Anyway, I'm very impressed, I look forward to seeing more Harry/Snape fics from you.
    Perhaps with a different sort of Snape, or a different sort of Harry.
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  • From KarenLioncourt on January 23, 2007
    I dont think you should give up at all! (and I know you havent since I've already discovered your other story) I liked this, except that I too wanted Snape to kiss him... I know it wouldnt have been realistic, but still... *sighs* Oh well, I'll survive.


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  • From metatron on January 23, 2007
    How about Harry, Hermione and Snape?
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  • From MidnightLilly on January 23, 2007
    That story was hot, I'd like to see fanarts of this fic.
    Write more=) I'd like to see Harry,Snape and a woman.
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  • From Enemywithin7 on January 23, 2007
    A well-written story. Please continue with your fics! I'm very interested in reading more of your stories. I like the strong emotions between Snape and Harry in this fic. Most excellent work!!~Sophia
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  • From metatron on January 23, 2007
    Took that stuff out, Aragon-san.
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  • From Aragonsan on January 23, 2007
    It's pretty hot and I can see this hateful!Snape-version, glorying in having an outlet for the frustrations and problems Potter jr. himself caused him for years, not to mention the satisfaction in humiliating his arrogant childhood-bullies son and godson.... And have Potter even begging him for it, wanting and getting off on it!

    But I think sometimes you just go way over the top in terms of vulgarity and juvenile behaviour and it cheapens your tale imo: the farting or Snape using "piece of dung" sound rather OOC - Snape's insults for instance are normaly aimed at Harry's behaviour, lack of intellect (or unwillingness to use what brain he possesses) and parentage.
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  • From Enemywithin7 on January 22, 2007
    A very different turn and I wonder what's going to happen next. Keep up the very good work!!~Sophia
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  • From Snarrylover on January 21, 2007
    update now!!!!!!!! sorry about that. i do love my kinky dirty BDSM snarry fics but ive never read a snarry fic along this plot line. please do continue *offers virutal cookie ^_^*. cheers!
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  • From Enemywithin7 on January 21, 2007
    A very interesting start and I can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the very good work!!~Sophia
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  • From metatron on January 21, 2007
    It's going to be a short pwp.
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