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Reviews for The Pet Mistress-NEW chapter!

By : HildaMalfoy
  • From ANON - sinbad on February 10, 2007
    I am really looking forward to the next chapter. I always picture the 'good' side winning and while slavery is abhorrent it seems to me that Severus is more Hermione's slave, he just doesn't know it yet.
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  • From angelnomiko on February 10, 2007
    wow .. now mione know that he does not think of her as a slave and that no one is to touch her but him ... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - cearrae on February 09, 2007
    Hi,

    The premise of your story is fine. I just want to know - is English your first language? It is difficult to read if when grammar is so disjointed, but I can forgive if you aren't a native speaker.
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 09, 2007
    agian-
    this is an AMAZING story.
    i am awaiting the next chapter.
    this story is going to be amazing if you keep on writing like this.

    can't wait till the next part!!!
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  • From ANON - Keela on February 06, 2007
    Excellent story!! Some new twists, I love it! Can't wait for more, keep up the good work
    ~K
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 01, 2007
    agian- amazing!!

    i cant wait for more!!
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  • From Rumpelyssa on February 01, 2007
    OOOHHH! I left a review not knowing there was more. But marvellous; and hey, pretty damn good for your first fanfic.
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  • From Rumpelyssa on February 01, 2007
    Interesting start Hilda... I actually heard the sounds and was in the dungeon. I love the way you began this.
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  • From on February 01, 2007
    HAHAHA!
    Severus Snape the minster of magic!
    What an interesting idea!
    In most stories, Snape seems very disinterested in power, but I've always felt like he could/is a little power hungry.
    If the way he treats his students is any idication.
    I'm eager to see how this new development plays out.
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  • From ANON - Rose Evans on February 01, 2007
    I think this is a great story. please let me know when you update.
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  • From angelnomiko on January 31, 2007
    wow .. he is the minister ... and why did they give her the mark ........please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 31, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From wildrose on January 31, 2007
    Absolutely marvellous dark, sexy and sweet Severus all at once. Really good job! Can't wait to know were this goes.
    Love
    Ophelia
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  • From catysmom1028 on January 29, 2007
    Very good start. Can't wait til you write more.
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  • From on January 29, 2007
    HA!
    Professor Lucy! I kinda like that... maybe I should change my screen name.
    ;)
    Well, you should be happy to know that I noticed no glaring grammatical errors this time!
    My tutelage must be paying off.
    Heh!
    Also, I really liked this chapter; your lemon was pretty damn nice.
    Though it kind of weirded me out that they were just in the dungeons... with other people I assume.
    Also, I thought Hermione was a little OOC. I would have expected her to be a little more confused or angry or at least a little inquisitive.
    But all in all good chapter (nice and long eh?)
    Keep it up!
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