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Reviews for Shower Surprises and a game of poker.

By : SarahGranger
  • From DeLongated on October 15, 2007
    oh i really enjoyed your story... the shower scene was absolutely amazing!!! :) i do hope you write/post the next chapter soon!!!! -aj-
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  • From egb67 on September 25, 2007
    Gods...yes..There are a ton of things I can think of. One that comes to mind..Harry transfigures a large glass beaker into a glass dildo/butt plug..and while he and Hermione are making love, he puts in her arse.

    Another thing that you could do is have Hermione do HIM in the arse with some kind of toy...that would get your readers' attention!

    Another thing you could do is have Harry tie her to the bed and tease the life out of her with feathers, etc. before making her/encouraging her to say out loud all of the things that she wants him to do to her body. It would be a little like BD/SM but with no pain...

    another thing you could do, which would be a twist, is have Hermione transfigure or 'grow' a cock on her body and make Harry go down on her, before she does in the arse. That would be an amazing role reversal.
    Then they could switch and she'd have to do the same for him.

    Anyway - those are some of my ideas. Let me know what you think.

    Regards,

    the_scribbler
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  • From lonlyheart on July 29, 2007
    please update soon
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  • From lovette on July 20, 2007
    please continue the story please and thank you

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  • From BrokenSoul265 on July 01, 2007
    I have an idea for Harry and Hermione's Kinky Sex Scene. It involves: Handcuffs, Whip(s), Vibrators/Dildos, and A Little Harry Dom. I'll let you create a story with your imagination.
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  • From Sinkingboat on June 08, 2007
    that was great... how 'bout harry ties hermione down and slowly tortures her with his tongue
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  • From FPSDoug on June 01, 2007
    Awesome, please continue
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  • From SarahGranger on April 23, 2007
    Experiencedsexgod: Good Idea! If you have something written, or would like to give a chapter a try, let me know. I've kinda givin up on the story, but perhaps you could inspire me.
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  • From monkeybutt1612 on April 19, 2007
    to be frank, i simply loved the story. and in answere to your question i do have a possible idea for the second chapter. you could write about the morning after and get a detailed story of what happened with harry and hermione as well as the rest of the group after hermione had closed the door. it could also tell of how both harry and hermione's relationship has progressed as well as another possible sex game among the group. let me know what you think, review the review.
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  • From tcasida on February 14, 2007
    Well done so far. Since you asked for suggestions for Chapter Two... How about have Hermione charm the inside of the canopy of Harry's bed to show them what is going on in the common room? How about making love while they levitate each other? How about Dobby pops in with various foods for their enjoyment? How about after they get naked they disillusion themselves and fly out the window on the Firebolt and have sex while they fly around the castle ...maybe seeing a thing or two (through windows or on balconies)? Just a few suggestions.

    Looking Forward To The Next Chapter
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  • From dragon37 on January 31, 2007
    I thought Harry and Hermione should have done it right there with everyone else. Or at least in a different location in the same room. I really liked the rules they came up for Hermione. I would love to read a second chapter.
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  • From angelnomiko on January 25, 2007
    wow that was great i love it and i cant wait in till next chapter ...please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love read more ... later for now

    angel
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