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By : TMaria
  • From TheEnchantedQuill on May 16, 2007
    Well ShellBell you have so done it again! You've written a kick ass awesome chapter that was definitely the cats meow for me. Not because of the SMUT either! It was because it was mushy...it was a breaking point for Draco...a new step in the relationship. You know I love your chappies and I obsessively read them lol...I aint here for the smut! However there are some who are and if they don't like your pace then :P to them. I think a story is indeed supposed to be a story...not hard core smut, and I think you are doing a superb job of telling that story luv! Your story is super awesome and I have been addicted to it, and it my fix, since I first read the summary. Just keep doing what you're doing and ignore everybody that razzes you about the smut! Ya jerks!

    -Leslie
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  • From ANON - Sessh's Sango on May 16, 2007
    Great job so far! And by the way, I'm kind of impatient for the smut, but a good storyline makes it all the better. Your writing style is still fantastic (and it's inspiring me to try to write better quality stories. Yay you!) and I hope to see a lot more chapters. Keep up the good work!
    Christi
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  • From ANON - andrea on May 16, 2007
    just excellent keep on writing!

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  • From Pumkin on May 16, 2007
    thanks for the update. your doing an awesome job. keep up the good work. i like the way your doing the story. if people don't like it they don't have to reed it. hope you have a good trip. update as soon as you can.
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  • From aloveablegimp on May 16, 2007
    This story is not about the smut... otherwise that would be a PWP, which your story so is not. I love your story and how you take care to truly get to know the characters and their mindset. I love your plot and I am enjoying the ride! To the others who are anxious for the smut... well... just ignore them and their whorish acting. If they cannot sit through a story without the characters going at it like bunnies then why are they reading a great fanfiction with a plot? I love your story and I look forward to your update!

    Love and a Peace,
    Kates
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  • From butterfly22503 on May 16, 2007
    That was hot! I like when they go slow, especially when Hermione is a virgin because it makes it more real. I love this fic and can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - andrelei on May 16, 2007
    hi!

    i stumbled upon your fic just today, around 1 in the afternoon to be axact. now it's quarter to midnight, just finished chapter 28. boy, can you write. ^_^ kudos.

    you mentioned that you also posted this in FF dot net and got replies that they were getting bored because the sex was too long to come... well, just goes to show some people are shallow, maybe they should look for a PWP fic if they're just looking for sex.

    i like the fact that you go into detail about the characters thoughts and feelings making it a more interesting read. also, you're really good with cliffhangers! XDDD

    you mentioned earlier that you're making a shift in the story when it reaches chapter 30... i just can't imagine what else could you do with the story... so that's one thing i'm really looking forward to.

    have a good vacation and will be waiting for your next chapter. ^_^

    PS:
    this is the first time to leave a review a fic here in AFF. ^^

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  • From wickienchen on May 16, 2007
    i think it's good, that it's not about sex in the first place... if i wanted to read that, i would have chosen a pwp.
    it's good, that you develop the story and the characters, you make them seam alive...
    of course i am curious about the first time of those two, but they had a lot of 'first times' yet: first time speaking with each other, first time not getting into a fight, first time kissing, first time ...
    i'm looking forward to the next chap, but in the meantime relax and don't get burnt by the sun *gg*
    vic
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  • From ANON - Gemma on May 16, 2007
    I am absolutly loving this story!! I joined the Hermione/Draco ship pretty late, and this was the 1st story i came across. going back to the chapters where Hermione was pregnant, she's lucky it lasted in that amount of time!! This last chapter though, wow, wasn't expecting it, and i'm actually glad it didn't happen sooner, its one way of putting a reader off, no matter how much they complain about there's no action. if they want action theres pleanty of sites on the internet.
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  • From ANON - Line on May 16, 2007
    I Love your story, it's the best I've read in a very long time, the story is NOT boring because of the "missing" sex. The story is perfekt. Tell those people, that if they want sex so bad, then they should turn off their computer and go out and have some and leave the story for us who love it.

    line
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  • From catysmom1028 on May 16, 2007
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From dragon37 on May 16, 2007
    I love to read a story line with the smut. So if you feel that you have to take your time with the sex parts, thats good. I find it difficult myself to actually put a story to the sex. So I say, if whoever is complaining about your plot, and the lack of smut, I say, tell them to try and write a good story like yours, and see how they do. I really do hate it when people try to bring down the authors. Yeah sure it's a site for smut, but most of us read it for the story lines too. So just tell the other people to kiss your a@#.
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  • From Extraho on May 16, 2007
    this story is too good to be boring, but this chapter was delightful though.
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  • From JaynaM on May 16, 2007
    You are the BEST!!!!!!! I loved this chapter!! More soon

    Jayna
    xxx
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  • From ANON - Lisi on May 16, 2007
    I want to tell you that I'm enjoying your story a lot, it's very well written and I'm loving it. I'll be witing for the next chepter, yoar doing a wonderful job! ah!. and enjoy your holidays!
    Hugs and kisses
    Lisi
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