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Reviews for Swallow

By : AkitoSouma
  • From ANON - arien on June 29, 2007
    give me more!!! please, do continue..i give you my happy review that i thought draco was the cutest in your story than all the previous...!
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  • From ForgottenPrincess on June 25, 2007
    i like it. it's sad because you see a lot of stories under this category that are good but for some reason they never continue...i hope continue this one. i likeyour writing style.
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  • From DarianRose on June 19, 2007
    Aww, this chapter was so cute! I'm looking foreward to more ^_^
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  • From NihilEtNemo on May 23, 2007
    I hope you continue this story ^^ It looks so promising~
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  • From ANON - Mike on April 12, 2007
    DEFINATELY continue this story. I read "Crazed" and I must say that you are a very talented writer! Usually when I come to this site, I'm met with (to put it bluntly) half-assed attempts at story telling. Punctuation, grammer, and sentence structure is often over looked for the sake of illustrating a dirty sex scene-- but you manage not only to write properly, but to construct beautiful metaphors. Your write beautifully even if the topics are a little, shall we say, risque. I enjoyed BOTH stories immensely, and desperately wish that you continue with your writing endeavors. I will read ANYTHING you write.
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  • From ANON - yoblossom on April 07, 2007
    It's a good start and I really hope you'll post more. Draco trying to talk is just so adorable.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 04, 2007
    please add another chapter with smut ;)
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  • From ANON - Nagini on April 04, 2007
    your fic is one of the best i ever read, and i mean it, i really hope that you will continued this fic. sorry for the bad english, that is not my mother tongue.
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  • From heaven56 on April 03, 2007
    I live the the whole Lucius thing. He keeps away from his son. But he knows he wants to be with him. Very nice.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 22, 2007
    Ah! That was a fucking awesome fic. I loved it. Continue it please!
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  • From ANON - Jien on March 20, 2007
    dude, you should update soon, i'm kept in suspense on what's gonna happen next =>.
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  • From ulla on March 19, 2007
    Will Draco be three years old throughout the entire story, or will he age as the story progresses?

    Great descriptions and characterization so far. I'm looking forward to more.
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  • From ANON - Kuro on March 05, 2007
    interesting chapter... I love Malfoy-cest and to see it blossom instead of rushing to the smut is quite pleasant. Keep up the good work!!
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  • From Heksy on February 26, 2007
    Taking the risk of this becoming more than a one-shot, I have to say
    the story moved me.
    Can you not write another story about this, with the use of all the warnings etc and leave this one like it is?
    It's just that I'm seeing those type of stories everywhere and it would be nice to have one just like this one.

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  • From jessie352 on February 25, 2007
    Aww. that was so sad. *tear* it makes me want to cry.
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