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Reviews for Make It Right

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  • From EmmaSmith on January 31, 2008
    update soon please!


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  • From serenagold on January 08, 2008
    Yay! More updates!


    I love this story.
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  • From ANON - jaz on October 25, 2007
    OH she is good!! i lov it!! i hope that they work it out i lov your tom!!
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  • From ANON - Ana on October 22, 2007
    like it, you're doing a great job with the interaction between tom and lilith. tom's relationship to cassander came as a surprise though and to be honest i wouldn't mind if you got rid of him. but that's just me:)



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  • From dragon37 on June 26, 2007
    The last chapter was really good. Eagerly awaiting the next.
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  • From sheherazade on June 26, 2007
    Not fair! I want to be in Corsica.

    Tom's interaction with Lily is so cute. I wonder if the older Lily remembers anything about her 'pretty' second Daddy? Still haven't got a clue how this is going to pan out - keep writing! Even on holiday!
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  • From misslala on June 25, 2007
    Boy I hope that was Lilith that was shocked by his magic and not someone else. lol
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  • From satine1313 on June 19, 2007
    The only story with Harry/Fenrir I found so far is Corroption by Pagan Strega http://pagan-strega.livejournal.com/
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  • From misslala on June 19, 2007
    Welp I guess Lilith isn't going anywhere! LOL Not with glittering green eyes to meet her at the door :P
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  • From sheherazade on June 16, 2007
    Ha ha, Dumbledork - I've never heard that one before. Tom is taking such an interest in Lily, it's quite touching. I always think it must have served his dark purposes very well that he was so good-looking - as you say, people are oddly more inclined to trust attractive men. Oh dear - Keith is going to go postal now, isn't he? I hope he gets what's coming to him.
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  • From sheherazade on June 15, 2007
    Ooh, interesting! How is Tom going to justify associating with a Muggle to his snobby Slytherin friends? Has he got something nasty brewing? Is Lilith right to trust him? Many questions...looking forward to the answers.
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  • From EmmaSmith on June 14, 2007
    Can wait to read the next chapter. Is Tom going to ask about her hand?

    Emma
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  • From misslala on June 14, 2007
    Ok, so now we are caught up! :) I am glad you went back and took your time with things, the story is opening up more and we are getting to know the characters. :) I look forward to the need chapter!
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  • From dragon37 on June 13, 2007
    I love it. I lost it for awhile, while I switched out my computers, but I'm glad I found it again. I really think that there should be happy ending. Keith should really be fucked over. I'm desperately awaiting the next chapter.


    Jeannette
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  • From serenagold on June 12, 2007
    Excellent story! Its interesting to see a Voldemorte before he became, I guess, what everyone expected of him? It will also be interesting to see how you generationally tie him back to Harry, grandfather to grandson. I look forward to your next chapter! LillithXTom =
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