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Reviews for Make It Right

By : Extraho
  • From sheherazade on June 10, 2007
    Tom's certainly got a different take on his past than the one we hear from Dumbledore, hasn't he? Interesting. And lol at Hitler being English and friend of the Riddles. I want a bird like that to do my shopping - cool idea! So I'm wondering how this is going to pan out - I'm guessing not Happy Ever After?
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  • From sheherazade on June 05, 2007
    This was a great chapter! It explained really well why Lilith is still drawn to Tom despite the rape and I like the dialogue between the two girls. Also, you draw Keith so vividly - he turns my stomach! Fab work - I hope your exams went well & you have more time to spend on your writing now.
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  • From misslala on June 04, 2007
    Well that was interesting. :) I am glad to see you updating again. :) Look forward to more.
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  • From Emmylovedraco on May 15, 2007
    Please update soon I love it.
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  • From jetuke on May 08, 2007
    Just love it. Hope Tom is good and the bad husband gets what he deserves. UPDATE SOON
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  • From jetuke on May 07, 2007
    What a great story, though I don't really understand why he raped her in the first place, but who cares. I love this story and can't wait for more. Update soon please! You rule!
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  • From misslala on May 04, 2007
    Hrm this is taking an interesting direction. I am interested to see where it goes.
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  • From sheherazade on May 04, 2007
    Very interesting - poor old Lilith, though, that her marriage is so awful she can be friendly with her rapist! An intriguing idea; I'm curious to see how this develops. I've never read a loved-up Voldemort before, lol. I've been to Crystal Palace and you describe it really well.
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  • From misslala on May 03, 2007
    I would be interested if Tom comes to dinner and Keith finds out that Lily is Tom's daughter. Though I think it is believeable that she would want to be with him again...strange psychological mess, hehe. I like it, I am so glad you are continuing this. I am really enjoying how it flows now and the story comes to life in the minds eye. :) Great job! I patiently await your update.
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  • From sheherazade on April 25, 2007
    Oh, I'm pleased to see this up again...I wondered where it had gone. Next chapter, then, chop chop! (Claps hands impatiently).
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  • From dragon37 on April 24, 2007
    Well if Tom is the 'bad guy' then the little couldn't have been taken by the death eaters. I can't wait to see. So when is Tom going to remember lillith? And when is he going to kill the pig?
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  • From misslala on April 10, 2007
    You are fleshing out the story a lot more now and that is wonderful! It makes me want to keep reading to find out what's next...lovely! Keep up the good work!
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  • From dragon37 on March 20, 2007
    I liked how you had it the first time,the almost instant recognition. I also like how you rewrote the story.
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  • From misslala on March 20, 2007
    I just know it running a lot more smoothly together. And it makes for a much better read!
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  • From misslala on March 14, 2007
    YES! Ok, that's what I'm talking about! Much better, we have background information, we have Lilith being pleasured over and over by her rapist and it was enjoyable! I am so proud of you, you have made this something that can reach leaps and bounds and I am so glad you have come back. Hope your trip went well! Can't wait for the updates.
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