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By : aldis1986
  • From angelnomiko on February 06, 2007
    wow that was great ... and mione is right they will be shocked and maybe out for is blood ... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

    angel
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  • From Catium on January 31, 2007
    Hey Crazy Angel Loving your story. Can't wait for chapter 3. See you around!!!
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  • From shelagh on January 31, 2007
    No problem drop me an e-mail sheedy021065@yahoo.com and I'll walk you through it.
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  • From angelnomiko on January 30, 2007
    awww that was great ... i love it and im glad mione was not hurt by his words and that he was sorry ... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

    angel
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  • From TMaria on January 30, 2007
    i like it!!
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  • From angelnomiko on January 30, 2007
    wow that was a great start ... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

    angel

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  • From char6785 on January 29, 2007
    a very good start to a story that could be more exciting as it gets going, keep writing
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  • From shelagh on January 29, 2007
    Great idea! Your fic is good but you need to break up your paragraphs a little. A good beta can whip it into shape in no time. If you need one look at the links at the bottom of the page and join the beta group. They are a very helpful bunch. Keep up the great work.
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  • From skydancer on January 29, 2007
    hi, interesting start, a little shakey on some grammer (plane not plain) and the chances of hotels and plane flights were a little to convienient.
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  • From Emmylovedraco on January 29, 2007
    I like it update soon please,
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