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Reviews for This Thing We Had

By : Extraho
  • From dragon37 on February 21, 2007
    I like it, but why did he tell her to go home to get rest, then tell her he wanted a divorce?

    Well I'm off to read another chapter.
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  • From jaimelee on February 20, 2007
    Awesome story! Can you please email me when you update? I can't wait to see where this goes. Is Narsicca alive or dead?
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 16, 2007
    As much as I'm enjoying this, I'm having such a problem believing it. Canon-wise, (and yes, every fanfic is ooc, no matter what the author tries to convey) Molly is so dearly in love with Arthur, and Lucius Malfoy is so far away from their beliefs. Molly is a large, matronly woman who dotes over her children and husband like no other (Except maybe Petunia)and it's hard to picture her doing anything but, or looking like a sexy minx. Now add that with red headed Weasleys turning blond with grey eyes. I think one or two of these variables would be believable, but the whole package strains my imaging as I read.

    Please don't take this as a flame, it is entirely my own opinion, and as I said, I am one of your many readers (You have a load of hits on this, I'm shocked no one else is taking the time to gift you a review) and I like it, and I want you continue. I guess I'm hoping for more of an explanation as to why this is occuring and see your point of view on these two come to a head. Straying way too far into OOC land makes it more and more unbelievable, and we want to believe, trust me. Thanks for writing, do not let this discourage you in any way. I am no fantastic writer myself (I only write porn for pities sake) so take it as you wish.

    Nunny
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 14, 2007
    lol tomato head. Let's see... grey eyes, blond hair... Ohmy! Eagerly awaiting another chapter, I just can't guess on my own!
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