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Reviews for Never A Memory

By : Dotowe
  • From ANON - SP777 [2nd response] on February 18, 2008
    OH! Before I forget..and I did.

    I loved how you tackled the aspects of Religion in a world governed by Wizardry and
    Magic. I was wondering who would have the NERVE to actually try to blend those two worlds together AND actually make it work.

    You are the FIRST author to do that.

    A small few have mentioned it or gave Religion 1 or 2 pages, but YOU made it a focus without it being shoved down anyone's throat and gave an unknown Priest a major part to play and respect for what it was he had to do.

    Hopefully, another author follows in your footsteps and take what you did to another level.

    You go Gurl!!!


    Keep it up,
    SP777

    'nuff said...
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  • From ANON - SP777 on February 18, 2008
    Epilogue or not, I think you ended the story beautifully. BUT, if you do have something more to say, I say make it short and sweet...just a thought.

    Personally I'm glad you wrote that Draco Malfoy FINALLY got the recognition he deserved, even if he doesn't think he does. It proves that he IS a better man AND
    a better Malfoy than his father.

    Another thing I liked is the maturity you showed with the three young men, Draco Malfoy, Harry Potter and Ronald Weasley. Definitely, R. Weasley, because TOO many stories show him as a young, hard-headed prat who blows up at the drop of a hat the minute it's revealed that Harry is seeing Draco. I think only a couple of stories
    have shown Ron DOES have the intelligence to TRY to give H & D's relationship some type of understanding or even have Ron & Draco working together to get out of a situation or to help Harry out in a situation.

    *sigh* I wish I had been around when you was cranking this baby out, but I hope you stick around in this section, because I see you as another author to look out for.


    Best of Luck to you...
    SP777
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  • From ANON - SP777 on February 17, 2008
    Well, I finally caught up...it took me awhile to have the nerve
    to read ANOTHER excessive multi-chapter story, after all I've been
    in this section for a year and I've PRACTICALLY read almostevery story
    from pg. 212 [when I first started] to now...

    I see I have another story to add to my list.

    One thing I didn't understand is that you translated the Mandarin language Draco
    used, but you never translate what the Priest Alt says...

    Can you do that?

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  • From ANON - Paige Taylor on February 03, 2008
    I dissapear for 2 weeks and sooooo much happens!!!!!! Wow it was wonderful!!!!! Now i just have to wait for the epilogue, then burst out crying when i read it because its over!!! That and i know that your epilogue to this stor will be 300 times better that the one JK gave us in DH! But bless her anyway for giving us the wonderful world of harry potter to manipulate and bend to our desires! lol! ;)
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  • From ANON - Timothy the Paperclip on January 26, 2008
    I've got say I right. That was the 7th book replacement I have ever read. Not many Harry Potter fanfictions are quite like this. I love it to bits. I might start crying if I wasn't in such a bad mood. But your story cheered me up. The ending was brilliant. And I hope to see more of you around somewhere.
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  • From ANON - gage on January 25, 2008
    NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! I don't want it to ennnnnnnnndddddddddddd.
    god I was so hooked on this story and I am so sad that it had to end. that being said, it was a great story and ending. Alas, all great things must come to an end.

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  • From on January 25, 2008
    wow.
    that was a fantastic story.
    your a great writer.
    and considering this was your first HP fanfic you did exellently :]
    ill be sure to read everything else you write !
    x
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  • From ANON - Carmila on January 24, 2008
    Bravo *claps*. This story has been amazing. I really like your style. It almost made me cry there at the end. Good choice on the lyrics.
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  • From bananasforyou on January 24, 2008
    it was fantastic ending thanks!
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  • From QueenB on January 23, 2008
    CH. 59 The scene in the cafe was amusing but I saw it as signs that Draco is getting old...oops, I mean mature. After all, only the mature complain about the natural exuberance of the young. :P

    Ha! The ending was surprising...and surprisingly funny. Draco isn't often taken by surprise and he must have been entirely gobsmacked at finding himself being so honored. That kiss at the end was so perfect and right; I could almost hear the trumpets and violins playing.

    Thanks for a ripping epic. I was surprised to see that this is your only HP story but I'm certain there will be more in the future.
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  • From ANON - Melha Seraphim on January 23, 2008
    Lol. I'm glad you enjoy my reviews. Since I stopped writing fanfics I just review others >_>.

    I'm sad to see your fic done, but I loved it all. Beginning to End. And thank you for basically leaving the themes in it open to some interpretation. I don't always like having something crammed down my throat...except this really tasty cake one time. It had sprinkle frosting. Oh! And I loved how you added in 'the new slytherian prince'. I enjoyed seeing how people treated Draco after the exorcism. The mixture of 'awe and eww, and the phhft yeah rights.' Also so very grateful that not everything was sunshine rainbows and puppies with Harry and Draco's relationship. They've been through a lot, together and separately. It kinda bugs me in fics when they just are all "lalala I have my one true love everythings good~" Ya know? Fluff should stay in marshmallows.

    I hope to see more of your writing in the future!


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  • From ANON - MeLaiya on January 23, 2008
    aaaahhh, I so did not see this coming. I loved this, Ill always keep an eye out for your work. *Mwah!!!*
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  • From Mylor on January 23, 2008
    bravo! ;-)
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  • From alleycat88 on January 22, 2008
    Ah that would have been amusing to see my name in a fic! I know what you are talking about too dont wory love! I know the whole story behind the name.....soooo.....*cracks whip* My epilogue?! MWAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Don't lie you like it! You want me to whip you! MWAHAHAHAHAHA! anyway I loved this chapter! I like how you made Draco smell...I had heard that before. that people who have been blessed with God's grace smell like that! Or that the smell lingers around where God visited them! thats too cool! I am so sad to see this over. It seems like just yesterday you started it and now its over....It was an excellent fic and I applaud you on it! thank you so much!
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  • From thrnbrooke on January 22, 2008
    I don't want this to end!!! OMG!!! That was beautiful! (Sorry about my absence! I got behind on my reading due to family and the holidays. They wouldn't let me near my computer!) I am sooo going to miss this story! One day... one day you should write a one shot to show them sometime in the future. How are they? What are they doing? I sooo don't want to say goodbye to this story!!! I want a chapter 60 and 61 and so on and so forth.... *sniff*
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