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Reviews for Songbird

By : ShinigamiClara
  • From Leentjef on February 05, 2007
    thi was very very very good keep going and post
    soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon
    bye bye
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  • From In2Deep on February 04, 2007
    humm... i wonder how this will turn out? will Harry still sing at the club? up-dates soon please
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  • From Seph7 on February 04, 2007
    Update! Update!! Can't wait for the naughty bits!!
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  • From BlueMoonRising on February 03, 2007
    Pity you can't mark favorite stories on this website, this would definitely be on my list.
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  • From Enemywithin7 on February 03, 2007
    A most excellent chapter and I can't wait to see what happens next! Keep up the very good work!!~Sophia
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  • From In2Deep on February 03, 2007
    Yea! thanks for clearing that up for me... at first i thought that it was based after Hogwarts.... I wonder what Snape will do next? up-dates soon please!
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  • From sanda on February 03, 2007
    good chapter
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  • From sharalunison on February 03, 2007
    I really appreciate how you've managed to keep your Harry and Snape in character. They're still JKR's Harry and Snape, but yours now as well.

    I don't know if that makes sense. ^^;

    I really enjoyed reading what you have up so far. It needs a little editing, but once you find a beta I'm sure that will get cleaned up. ^_^ Have fun and take your time!

    Thanks!
    Shara
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  • From Leentjef on February 03, 2007
    VERY VERY VERY GOOD KEEP GOING AND POST SOON
    BYE BYE
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  • From on February 03, 2007
    Ho ho ho...!
    Is his new home going to be with, perchance, a certain snarky potions Professor?
    Will both Harry and said potions Professor, then be forced to begrudgingly accept the less-than-favorable conditions, seeing as all other options are, obviously, impossible?
    Wheeee! I don't know why this story makes me so excited and happy, but it does!
    Maybe because I haven't read a good Snarry in a while...
    At any rate, I do hope that, once the story really gets going, you start making the chapters a little longer. My personal opinion is that 3000 - 3500 words makes a good solid chapter. 1000 - 2000 is a little short, 5000 range is really nice for the reader, but a little hard to put out, 7000 and up gets a little long (unless it's really lemony, you can never have enough lemons!)

    Ooh... and btw I noticed you were asking for a beta in your first chapter... I've never beta'd before... but I feel like my grammar and language skills are above average (and I'm humble too! :P), and I can certainly offer my opinion on ideas or whatever also. So if you still need one, just drop me a line on my email!

    And if not, that's fine too. I'll probably just keep giving you unsolicited advice when I review!
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  • From Snarrylover on February 02, 2007
    very nice. please do continue this fic im really enjoying it (and im drooling all over severus... and harry in a dress *eyes glaze over*). cheers!
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  • From on February 02, 2007
    heh heh
    You explained that pretty well
    This story just makes me smile and smile.
    Oh my god, please hurry up and write more.
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  • From vyator on February 02, 2007
    So cool! Loving it, can't wait to read more!
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  • From sanda on February 02, 2007
    I like it, bye
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  • From In2Deep on February 02, 2007
    6:02 AM.... wow your up-early! hope that i can do that one of these days! but an intresting explination! does Harry only work durning the summers or is he out of school now? and why should he be staying at the Dursleys if hes out of school? the time line is a little confusing? could you maybe put it in order for me? hope that you up-dates soon!
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