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Reviews for Christmas Surprise

By : DarkHufflepuff
  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on August 10, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on August 21, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From Poppins on February 15, 2007
    Noooooo! Please update soon:)
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  • From ANON - FFire on February 13, 2007
    I'm *so* enjoying this and can't wait for the next installment. I don't usually read dark fic/drabbles unless in the right kind of mood. Now I'm in the mood :}
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  • From ANON - harryotter on February 12, 2007
    I enjoyed your work and look forward to reading something else by you.
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  • From ANON - ~*~Tasha~*~ on February 11, 2007
    I keep wondering who "he" is. I had a theory, but then your death list killed that theory because he was one of the dead. Now, I have another idea, which seems plausible, but I'm really curious if I'm right. I won't say here in reviews because I don't want to give any ideas away. I hope that you continue this one.
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  • From ANON - mayaxiong on February 10, 2007
    Great start!! I'd like to see some more, very dark but there's nothing wrong with that, keep up the good work !
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  • From ANON - Becky on February 10, 2007
    Oh my! Excellent beginning.....Who is this Mysterious new Dark Lord who is torturing them? Please Tell me Severus and Hermione will be alright!!! Can't wait for more!!! Hurry soon please!!!! Well done!

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  • From ANON - sinbad on February 10, 2007
    Your story is quite interesting. However, some gaping questions are in here who is doing the attacks and why. How did this start, is there a method to finding his victims? These question will probably be answered in the next chapter or two. Is this your first story? Feel free to contact me I am working on my first story as well it is very hard work, so feel free to comeiorate (sp?) with me if you want. I hope to see updates soon. This is quite a good start. Just fill up some plot holes and you are good to go! Cheers on your story. I will review as I see updates.
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  • From redwhatude on February 10, 2007
    Definitely felt the tension and stress that the characters were feeling. Great start!
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  • From skydancer on February 10, 2007
    ...wow.... could it be..? naw, how about....no,never mind.....maybe..nope....ohohohoh!!!! I know!!!!.....*ahhhh!!!* *gurgle*....*snap*.

    very edge of seat, had to force myself to slow down while reading!!!
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  • From ccrawley on February 10, 2007
    Is an interesting story. However, felt very choppy and all over the place. I did like what was written, I would just like to see more transition. I look forward to the next chapter.
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