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Reviews for A Forbidden Fruit

By : lorettcopeland
  • From ANON - ~ Monique ~ on March 04, 2007
    You, Lorett, are one amazing writer, you know that?

    It was sexy, funny, witty, descriptive, and just plain _awesome_. The flirting was adorable/sexy, and the teasing set up the perfect mood for "let me cook you dinner" to come into play. The "Adam"/"Eve" + "Malfoy"/"Granger" was very cool [fabulous consistency]. "I am a well read man" + "I only indulge in the very best" = Smexy. Thank you for painting that gray-eyed, deep-voiced picture for me. *le sigh*

    I think I'm going to just go read it one more time...*^.^*

    ["...Ah yes, so you can catch the bigger fish to fly.
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  • From Ravensblood on March 04, 2007
    Ooh goody, you updated!!!
    Keep it coming! No flashbacks or filler, mind. Just good, straight, forward-ever onward. Action action action!!!
    Love how you paint the pictures of what's going on. Your voice is distinct and vibrant. I am also very pleased with how you tied your lovers into the same circle, so they could see what is right in front of them. And, boy, isn't Hermione just stubborn and... English enough to deny the butterflies! You can't escape... the butterflies! Silly girl. Draco is just too scrupmcious, too like the forbidden fruit himself.
    I look forward to your next installment.

    -Gwyn
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  • From wickienchen on March 04, 2007
    gods, i like it very much. you're a so great writer! i'm really looking forward to the next chapter.
    love, vic
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  • From ANON - Nosfiss on March 04, 2007
    Totally delicious! I like the plot and specially how you added those wicca things in the begining. Lovely all in all, please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Liz(tink) on March 04, 2007
    I likies.... good intro and flirting.... nice
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  • From ANON - slytherinprincess113 on March 04, 2007
    Oh, you are wicked!! I love it. You have a bloody fantastic gift. Can't wait for the next chappie.
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  • From gijenn2331 on March 04, 2007
    Yum! I read your first chappie and meant to review, but you know how it goes. :)
    This is an awesome story and very unique--keep up the good work!!


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  • From ANON - AMAZED on February 28, 2007
    I can't wait for a new chapter. Hoping hoping hoping that the rest of the story can match up to the beginning. plz email notice of a new chapter!
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  • From ANON - jes on February 15, 2007
    i'm intrigued!!! i can't wait for the next installment! i've read your other fic i believe, It Had To Be You, and i enjoyed that as well, so i'm sure this one will be just as fun! happy writing! :)
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  • From ANON - -B- on February 14, 2007
    a very interesting start
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  • From ANON - nonentity on February 12, 2007
    love it! very nice characterization of Hermione and Ginny.
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  • From Ravensblood on February 12, 2007
    Come on, now! Who's the figure? Is it Draco? What did the snails write? TELL MEEEEEEE....
    Oh, yeah. Good story and all that. I'm impressed with the level of research you've gone into with this one.
    Update soon! I'm hooked!
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  • From ANON - winterwater on February 12, 2007
    I have read your "It had to be you" fic....and I absolutely loved it, just like with this fic! OMG please update soon! I can't wait...what did they see???
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  • From ANON - Liz on February 12, 2007
    I love your stories! Great beginning to this one
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  • From ANON - Mac on February 12, 2007
    Another one of your stories is always welcome .. I love them. BUT you better finish "It Had To Be You" please please finish. I'm dying here.

    Mac
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