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Reviews for Darkmoon and LIght

By : vbollman
  • From soloflamelady on July 31, 2007
    update update update gotta find out what happens
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  • From lonlyheart on July 29, 2007
    PLEASE UPDATE SOON GREAT STORY SO FAR I LOOK FORWARD TO READ MORE SOON.
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  • From ANON - Alto on July 29, 2007
    Absolutely love your story! Can't wait for Griphook to come back and discuss thing more. Something there seems fishy...
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  • From Vittani on May 29, 2007
    now that was good. I really wanna say more but it is 2:30 in the morning and i need sleep. Update again soon. Please!
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  • From ANON - anna on May 29, 2007
    WOW, that was amazing, I can't wait to read more, I love how Ron took care of Harry and how Draco took the initiative to help out.
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  • From soloflamelady on May 28, 2007
    oh yeah this is sooo good I want more got to find out ron's reaction to all that is going on is he going to be true to form and be a prat or will he understand update soon please
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  • From Selera on May 27, 2007
    Woot now this should get very very interesting. Please post the next chapter soon.
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  • From Vittani on May 24, 2007
    i love this you have got to update this. please. i wanna know what happens on harrys birthday
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 24, 2007
    Quite a nice story, but to be fair not that brilliant. It's been done before and I'm sure it will be done time and again. Abused Harry, Snape turns out to be his father, and somehow I'm sure he will turn out to be Draco's soulmate. And of course the Malfoys are good and they turn out to be Veelas or Vampires or whatever.

    There are some inconsistencies. I believe that you didn't know what to do with them and probably you picked the easy and quick way out.
    Like Dumbledore bashing. First Dumbledore is remorseful, but then turns out that he doesn't really care. At the beginning Harry is mad at him, but later he just isn't. You should pick something and stick to it, because now it is a little confusing, especially if it will turn out that Dumbledore had been stealing Harry's money. Couldn't Fudge steal it? Is Dumbledore evil or isn't he?

    Then there is the part about Harry's abuse. He's been stuck in a hole in a bloody basement for two weeks, but now he's perfectly fine. Has he been asleep all that time? If not, then simple sensory depravation would have at least done a minimum of mental damage, not just destroying his eyesight and weaken his muscles. But then again it didn't even destroy his vision, did it? It's perfectly fine now, even better than ever.

    The kind of abuse you write about is bound to leave some lasting mental not only physical damage, even with all magic at their disposal. But hey, Harry is so damn great that he just has to stay in bed for a few days and everything will be okay.

    Everything is fine and dandy, not even slightest resentment to Severus' grandmother, 'cause she knew who Harry's real parents were. Not even one thought that in some way she was the reason why he had been abused. Because now the whole blood protection doesn't make sense. And consequently his living with the Dursleys and that whole abuse didn't have a reason at all. But then again maybe Lily's magical adoption made it valid, does Dumbledor now Harry's real parentage? I just don't know and after six long chapters you don't answer.

    Then, there's Lucius and his loyalties. He has his doubts about Voldemort, but he lets Harry stay in his home without second thought. No questions how Harry knew about Narcissa's death or that Draco saw it. It's left hanging.

    And of course Draco's change of heart. Years of upbringing, one of his deepest convictions simply gone because Harry yelled at him, no sticking to his preconcieved notions, just as they suddenly became the bestest buds.

    Don't get me wrong, I did enjoy your story and I'm not a big fan of angst, but unfortunately there are some things that don't make sense and maybe the reason for my resentment is that I'd like your story to be the best it could be.

    And I'm sorry for the length of my review but I thought that you deserve better than "hey, great story, please update soon".
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  • From Selera on May 24, 2007
    This is a lovely story. I hope you update soon.
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  • From ANON - furwing_silverclaw on May 23, 2007
    glad to see an update for this one it's one of my favorites and the new chapter was great nice to see draco humbled a bit.
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  • From soloflamelady on May 22, 2007
    I would love to read more on this one as well i like elvish and preggie men. lol keep it up and update soon
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  • From dianahuntresss on March 28, 2007
    Excellent Story I can't wait for you to update!!!!!
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  • From ANON - chloe on March 20, 2007
    this story is so cool
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  • From cameowitch on March 19, 2007
    This has me captivated. When can we expect more? What could I say that would prompt another chapter or few?
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