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Reviews for Saving Miss Granger (Small Edit)

By : Ms_Figg
  • From ANON - Andrea on July 27, 2007
    HAHAHA. that was so funny. the list of minerva and albus to keep snape from coming. then the tongue. that was hillarious. i love your writing, but i have to leave before i finish the story :( oh well i will read it eventually.
    Andy
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  • From TifLaw on July 01, 2007
    Just read the whole thing, loved it all the way to the end. Though I wonder if Harry and Lucius ever managed to work something out... Great Story.
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  • From ANON - Kluless3 on June 28, 2007
    Wonderful! I really enjoyed reading such a different story. It kept me up all night wanting to see what happened. Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - TiffANY on June 08, 2007
    Hi

    I just wanted to say I love this story!

    I have finished it and I would like to congratulate you
    on such a FANTASTIC story!

    I really enjoyed how you put Severus; very very sexy and
    likes to be in charge.

    It is sooooooooooooooooooooooooo hott!

    Anyway thank you once again for putting up this AMAZING story

    I love your writing techniques

    And I cannot wait to read more of your stories

    Maybe you could do one about Harry and Hermione or Hermione
    and Draco or even Hermione and Ron!

    I don
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  • From Darkless on May 11, 2007
    Damn woman! I've been smirking and laughing all the way through this story, then you end it with such fluff I'm melting. *shakes head* I don't know how you do it, but you just keep on doing it.

    Very original plot (for a PWP, hehe) tons of starting smut and lots of character development, with great diologue and interaction. This turned out to be so much more than a smex filled ride around the block, it was more like a road trip from coast to coast! I love a good, long story. 'Tis much more satisfying than short little oneshots. Thanks for providing such tittlating diversion from the hum-drum bores of everyday life. Go you!
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  • From Darkless on May 11, 2007
    ROFLMAO!!

    I'm having the greatest time reading this. It's so funny, pervy and wrong! LOL

    I just wanted to let you know of a small bit that you might want to change in chapter 13.

    "When Ron finally arrived at the flat, the first thing he did was grab Susan roughly, kiss her passionately, then threw her over his shoulder and headed straight for the bedroom."

    While that's a very passionate thing for Ron to do, 'over the shoulder' is not something you do to a 5 months pregnant woman, or any number of months along, capice?

    I took one look at that and went, "Huh??" A simple mistake, yes, but one I really think you need to fix. Just have him pick her up bridal style, that's more romantic and less cavemanish.

    Well, back to the story. WHOOOhoOOooOOoo!
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  • From monamourange on May 10, 2007
    I'd have to say that I thoroughly enjoyed this story! I thought it was fantastic! Sanpe was just so seductive and sexy, I just wanted to jump on him the entire story! You did a really great job with this! Keep up the great work!!
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  • From Ms_Figg on May 09, 2007
    Bonza87: Thank you for the supportive review. About Marcus' ancestor, it wasn't so much that she was adventurous, but because she was a sacrifical "village virgin" lol. Who was also a healer. The dragon was injured and she healed him. Now, it wouldn't have been sporting to eat her after that, would it? As far as how they got together is a matter of conjecture, but I think Marcus got his telescoping abilities honestly. lol. Actually you can read about that ancestor in a story called "The Ghost and Lady Snape." Thanks again for your support. ***
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  • From Bonza87 on May 08, 2007
    Well Ms Figg, unfortunatey I fell asleep last night before I had the chance to finish reading your brilliant fic, and then I had to shoot off to work (a pain, but entirely nessecary.) so basically, I had to wait all day to finish what I started, and I do hate waiting :P

    However, I'm glad I did. This is a brilliant fic that certainly doesn't have the correct amount of reviews for the effort involved in writing it. come on people, where's you compassion for a fellow writer?!

    Anyway, enough mindless babble, onto my review.

    The cause of this whole, wonderful journey was a very clever idea, Hermione Granger, Spells Mistress, falling on her own sword (and those of a few others lol.), so to speak. In my opinion it's one of the more well thought out plot devices, rather than the usual standard of blackmail that seems to abound in fic writing.

    I was impressed that you deviated from the obvious of having Harry and Ron jumping in while they had the chance, and quite liked the way you did it too.

    A part dragon as well? my my, one of his ancestors was an adventurous type weren't they? lol. Good job on keeping Hagrid and Firenze helping out without actually going the distance. I was happy when you made Hagrid appear ashamed at having succumb to his body, after all, he's watched Hermione grow up, and it wouldn't have been right.

    I absolutely loved your gay vampires! I have a friend who is just like the hairdresser in your story (sorry, forgot the name.) it was almost uncanny :)

    Severus cut a very dashing figure in this story, and I loved it. Very suave. Plus the dancing and duelling scenes were excellent.

    Hermione was delectable, I can't find any other words to express how much I liked her character in this.

    Anyway my dear, I think I may leave my review there for now. Thankyou for a wonderful read, and best wishes for any future fiction endevours.

    Regards,

    Bonza87
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  • From Bonza87 on May 07, 2007
    Ms Figg, I was trying my very best to wait until the end of this fic to review, as I prefer to leave an in-depth comment. However your Tango scene was just too much! You have to be a dancer, I've never read such a true account of the passion felt during that particular dance. I only wish I could lead as well as Severus seemed to, but I try :)

    Incredible work, I adore your writing style, and casting Severus as a man who likes the chase was a fantastic move on your part. He's so suave, nothing like the greasy potions master from J.K Rowling's works!

    I will most certainly continue reading until the end. When I first began reading I assumed it would continue in the same lemony vein as the first few chapters, I stand pleasantly corrected.

    Maybe you could revise your author's note in the first chapter so that those looking for a more serious read know they can find one :)

    I'm sure the rest of this fic will be an absolute pleasure

    Regards,

    Bonza87
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  • From DB1 on April 21, 2007
    @31. OMG awesome story I love it!! its amazing. Is there going to be a sequel?? I hope so. Keep writing!!! I love all your stories!!!!

    *DB*

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  • From JoanitheUniqueBeing on April 06, 2007
    Amazing story.......now i need to find my boyfriend......
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  • From ANON - hellkat75 on March 07, 2007
    That was incredible. I couldn't stop reading and I should have been in bed a couple of hours ago. Well done! I'm not usually a fan of HG/SS but this was really really good!
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on February 17, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From SweetGinnyWeasley on February 14, 2007
    I loved it; I would like to see Harry and Lucius' story unfold now. LOL! 10/10
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