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Reviews for Harry Potter and The Secret Keeper (BP2)

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From Angelsfear on March 27, 2007
*exhales* I honestly had to hold my breath for the first half of that O_O lol but I LOVE the way they killed Lucius and stupefied/bound McNair, Crabbe and Goyle. That scene was fantastic! It gave me shivers from the way they reacted in such perfect unison and everything *awe* it was just amazing! And I also love how Draco's the new Lord of the Manor hehehe that makes me squee! This chapter was awesome and SOOOO worth all the knots in my stomach from before lol I love it! Is there going to be a sequel to this story as well? I certainly hope so :)
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From JanusEris on March 27, 2007
I normally don't log in to review, but I just had to after this marvellous chapters. You took us on quite a ride there. For a moment I thought it was all going to hell, but Draco saved the day :)
If Harry had transferred the bond to Lucius, or even just cancelled it, it would have been the worst thing he could do! Lucius never promised he would stop others (like Voldemort) from harming Harry, and he could have ordered Draco to tell him the secret of Grimmauld, since Draco promised to do everything he was able to do. Good that the bastard is dead.
I really hope that Lucius was wrong, and the bond can't be transferred or broken that easily, because who would prevent others from trying it? What if the deatheaters escape and try, or tell Voldi!
I read there are only two chapters left, which is - I hate to say it - quite alright with me, since I won't have internet access after this month. But despite this, I hope you write another sequel, I'm sure to read it when I'm online again in a few months!
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From daynajones on March 27, 2007
Those last 3 chapters just blew me away........ I can't even think of anything resembling thoughtful commentary to write it was just

THAT GOOD. Can't wait for the last.
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From Angelsfear on March 26, 2007
NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!! NO HARRY DON'T!!! AHHHHH DON'T DO IT! IT'S A TRAP IT'S A TRAP! Ok I don't really know but DON'T DO IT! AHHH Order Draco to kill Lucius, I like that idea, good plan *dies* NUUUUUU I need to know what happens! They HAVE to be alright!!! X_X Pleaaaaaaaaaaaaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee be okkk by the enddd *sob*
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From LupinsLady on March 26, 2007
I am addicted to this story...I can't wait to see how it ends. Lucius is such a bastard, hope Harry kills him.
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From Snarrylover on March 26, 2007
ch 42:

Oh my f*****g god!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! dito what 'graballz' said. nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

that sick sick sick fuck!!!!!!!!!!! im gonna kill him and revel in his guts and blood. bastard. please post the 3rd part soon. please. i gotta know if my babies are gonna be ok *sniffle-tear*
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From LycheeTea on March 26, 2007
Oh Lucius is horrible, gosh I hate him. I hope he dies a slow painful death! Poor Draco, poor Harry, I hope this all works out for them.
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From ANON - Anon on March 26, 2007
Well...I just read the last chapter you posted and you almost made me throw up. You are a very good writer. I have been following this story since Bound Prince. Love it.
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From Angelsfear on March 25, 2007
NOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!! *Smites Lucius* DIE EVIL BASTARD DIE!!! I'm soooo sad now for two reasons: 1) I don't want bad things to happen to Harry and Draco and Lucius is just a bastard!! *sob more* and 2) I JUST realized that there are only three more chapters!! X_X This is almost over, how is that possible??? *dies* want more but I don't want it to end! Ahh
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From graballz on March 25, 2007
Chapter 41--oh fuck oh fuck oh fuck...I read the other reviews.....this is bad and I'm tearing up already...

Normal so far....talking about food....SHITE THE ANTICIPATION IS DRIVING ME NUTTERS!!!! OH FUCK BAD BAD BAD BAD *hyperventilating*

OH FUCK OH FUCK OH FUCK NONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONO SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT REMUS, HERMIONE, SOMEONE WHERE THE FUCK ARE YOU PEOPLE!!!!!!?!?!?!?!?!?!??!?!?!

DRACO!!!!! NO, THEY CAN'T DO ANYTHING BAD TO DRACO!!!! MY BABY IS FRAGILE!!!!!

OH GOD OH GOD OH GOD NO NOT HIM ANYONE BUT HIM!!!!!! FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK *crying and can't breathe* can't...see....computer...screen...to...read....crying too hard! LUCIUS NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO I'LL KILL YOU, YOU FUCKING BASTARD!!!!!!

OH GOD YOU'RE KILLING ME HERE!!!!! *dying slowly* HARRY DRACO HARRY DRACO HARRY DRACO!!!!!!!! MY BABIES!!!!! IT'LL BE OKAY!!!!! IT HAS TO BE!!!!!

Oh. My. God. Okay, they're together...good good...OH FUCK BAD BAD BAD BAD BAD

*screaming in anxiety* NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO HOW COULD YOU LEAVE IT LIKE THAT/??????????????????????????? WHAT'S GOING TO HAPPEN???????????????????????????????????////

(Yami has it right = *implodes violently*)
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From Jan on March 25, 2007
Oh Gods, no...Draco can't do this. If and that's a big 'IF' Lucius let's Harry go, Draco will be dead my next morn. Well in any case I can't wait till your next update.
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From Snarrylover on March 25, 2007
NO!!!!!!!!!!!!! omg. nooooooooooooooo!!!!
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From YamiBakura on March 25, 2007
Chapter 41

*implodes violently*
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From shevien on March 24, 2007
just finished reading the first instalment,i must say this is a Brilliant fic.
about to start reading the sequel(and trying not to peek ahead). i won't review again (cause really, this is almost done).
just commending you both on a wonderfully written fic and *sniff* i will miss it when it's over.

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From Angelsfear on March 24, 2007
awwwwwwwwwww I'm crying! *sob* that was so sad and so sweet all at the same time! *sniff* Draco can't hurt himself no more.... nu uh, not good. I luff Harry so much too....they both just steal aways all my emotions X_X Can't wait for the next chapter!
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