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Reviews for Harry Potter and The Secret Keeper (BP2)

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  • From graballz on March 24, 2007
    Chapter 40--Oh fuck! I just realized something! Draco's outside of the house, and so he's vulnerable!!! GOOD THING Harry's with him!!! Are there any bastards on Mungo's staff that would turn him in???? Actually, that might be doing him a favor because it'll bring Lucius and then HARRY CAN BEAK THE FUCK OUT OF HIM AND KILL HIM!

    Draco, you can recover from this!!! You have to!!!!! (Okay, going to read the chapter now!)

    Talking good......anger bad! Uh oh, c'mon, Harry! Fine line between being loving and supportive and sensitive...and letting him know that it's NOT okay to do that!!! Easy, babies!

    OH YES! Harry, crying....YES BABY! DRACO REACHED OUT TO HIM!!!!! YES YES YES YAY CATHARSIS!!!!!

    I don't like it when they hurt (this much! haha) but this is good for them!!! and I love how they're holding each other and crying!!!! (Have I said lately that, given the plot twists, this is exactly how I picture these scenes playing out??? YES)

    OH SHIT!! Are you telling me that there's some sort of blood bond between Draco and Lucius that Harry's going to have to break in order for Draco to be okay??? HARRY CAN DO IT!!!!

    Oh, shit! Draco's passing out!! FUCK

    You said it!!! They fit! Perfectly! Together!

    *sigh* Perfect chapter! Can't wait for more!

    (and I'm still going to kill the fuck out of Lucius...)
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  • From graballz on March 24, 2007
    Chapter 39--Lucius is SO dead. Please fucking kill him. Hard. And painfully.

    OH SHIT!!! DRACO NONOONONONONONONONONONONONOONONONONONON PLEASE NO! PLEASE NO!!!!!! HARRY!!!!!!! HARRY, WHAT'S GOING ON????

    YES good boy!!! GO HARRY! TRUST YOUR INSTINCTS!!!!! YES HE FOUND HIM!!!! STOP HIM!!!!!!! DRACO, MY BABY!!!!

    Oh, Draco, honey!!!! *sad sigh* But Harry will take care of you!
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  • From graballz on March 24, 2007
    Chapter 38--oh shit!! Caught by Remus?? Good thing he's so cool! YOU'RE COOL, REMUS!! THANKS FOR TAKING CARE OF MY BABIES!!!

    GOD! Why can't Draco curse like that during sex?????? FUUUUUUUCKSONOFABITCH One word (that's not even supposed to be remotely connected to it) and I'm so turned on again!

    OH FUCK!!!! GODDAMNYOU, YOU STUPID FUCKING BASTARD, WHY HOW DO YOU RUIN EVERYTHIGN??!!!!!!!!!

    Daft Fear...we gotta go now. NOW, I tell you! Lucius HAS to die right FUCKING now! We can deal with Snape tomorrow, but Lucius is just ASKING for it!

    haha Harry made the quotation marks in the air! I love it! Good boy, Harry! Talk to him! OH HARRY!!! IT'S GOING TO BE OKAY, BABY!!!! JUST KEEP LOVING HIM!!!!!! He'll break the cycle! It's a normal reaction, and Draco's been taught that his whole life!!! Just be paient with him, Harry-love, and FUCKING KILL LUCIUS!
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  • From graballz on March 24, 2007
    Somehow the posting of Chapters 36-40 escaped my notice, but I am now coherent enough to read Ch 36 after Ch 35 left my brain on the floor in a puddle.

    Chapter 36--Yay! Sweet aftermath! *gasp* WHAT DID LUCIUS DO????? DEATH TO LUCIUS!

    He needs to talk about this! GOOD BOY, HARRY! FUCK! Which chapter was that "truth or dare" conversation in? I know it's not the "Daring Truth" chapter, but if anyone remembers which chapter that conversation was in, please email me! (graballz@gmail.com)

    NO DRACO NO BABY NO! YOU ARE NOT A WHORE!!!! YOU'RE NOT!!!! I LOVE YOU!!! HARRY LOVES YOU!!! UNCONDITIONALLY!!!!! The abused child's syndrome!!! *whimper* Harry will be able to make him understand, right?

    The whole "protection" element is breaking my heart!!!! HARRY WILL PROTECT YOU, DRACO!!!!

    YES YES YES HOLD THAT BLONDE BABY!!!!! I'M SO RELIEVED!!! YAY HARRY! YES YES YES FUCKING YES KILL THAT GODDAMN CHILD MOLESTING BASTARD!!!!!!!

    Chapter 37--Yay! Hugging and kissing and teasing!!! That's so right!! Especially after something traumatic like that, the best thing you can do is just continue on with life as normally as possible, and it'll get better!

    *gasp* Oh yay, another game!!! *slight feeling of trepidation mixed with anticipation* Hopefully the most-recently-revealed secrets won't come up and hopefully it'll lead to some hot gay teen sex!

    WHAT??? Draco....threesome??? MUST HAVE BACKSTORY ON THAT!!!! MUST HAVE!!!

    OH GOD!!! HARRY WAS THE ONLY ONE WHO DRANK??!??!?!?!?!!? THAT'S FUCKING HYSTERICAL!!!!

    EWWWWW Gross, Ron!!! OH FUCK, HERE COMES THE FOREPLAY!!!!! FUCKING Firewhiskey??? Awesome! *gasp* Harry just grabbed himself in front of the room???? Okay, I know they're all drunk, but DAMN! (Why can't I find a guy like Harry and Draco?? Actually, make that TWO guys! I want one of each! haha) Oh, wait, no he grabbed Draco!!! Fucking hott as hell, but can't say I'm surprised!!!! haha

    I'm guessing that Ron (and maybe Hermione?) left the room...probably to go fuck each other....can't blame them......and Fred and George are probably right there....watching.....and going at it themselves!!!! SO HOTT!

    LMAO I love the one-word dialogue!!!!! SO TRUE!!!! Drunk and fucked....mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm!
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  • From Jan on March 24, 2007
    AH! That was a very intense and sweet chapter. Please update soon.
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  • From ForgottenPrincess on March 24, 2007
    ah it's almost over. I am kinda sad. I hate endings...esspecially when something so good has to end. you should forever write sequels...or equally as good stories. *smiles and looks hopeful*
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  • From ForgottenPrincess on March 24, 2007
    (chap 36) its like this one chapter was a turning point. It went from being a good story with wonderful sex scenes. To an entire diffrent calaber of work. The woundless blade was a wonderful touch, and i especially enjoyed how draco draged it across his skin as he told harry all between him and his father. Then about how Pansy as well, only for him to explain that is was ultimatly for "their lord". I wonder if at the end of the chapter Harry really understands. But for Draco it was like he was going to be doing it anyways to keep his father from beating him, whats the diffrence if he does it five time then if he does it ten times, he would get things he wants and affection from a father that is obviously distant and he craves or rather craved affection for. Mayhap the speration from his father is what gave Draco time to see his relationship with his father in a diffrent light, time to step back from your own issues and see them in a diffrent light. It also makes sense now why Draco is alway so instant on being Harry's (for a moment i wanted to write Harries.....) to be owned by someone so pure and good would absolve him from his past sins. Or maybe i think to deeply into it. But i like to see it that way:).
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  • From LycheeTea on March 24, 2007
    Great update! I'm glad to know what Dracco's thinking, and cross my fingers he won't do it again... and wow four more chapters to go... I almost don't want this to end...
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  • From Angelsfear on March 23, 2007
    NOO DRACO! DON'T HURT YOURSELF! *sobs* Poor Harry, I want to hug him, he's so lost and scared! This is all Lucius Malfoy's fault!!! *kills him* there it's all ok now!! Dracoo.... *sob* need to know what happens next! X_X
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  • From Jan on March 23, 2007
    What the bloody hell was he thinking? OMG! I need chapter 40 asap, please. ^_^
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  • From YamiBakura on March 23, 2007
    Chapter 39

    OMG DRACO!! TT__TT I loved his freakout there. What'll happen next?
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  • From soloflamelady on March 23, 2007
    Oh you have no idea how much I love this story. I love the character and they way the interact. The sex is just to hot and I feel so bad for Draco make it better soon. I have to tell you everyone thinks I am crazy in this house because one minute I am laughing out loud and the next minute I am in tears. Keep up the good work I just don't want it to end.
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  • From Jan on March 22, 2007
    OMG! I feel so bad for them both. Please update soon. I must have the next chapter updated ASAP.^_^
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  • From Angelsfear on March 22, 2007
    noooooooo! awwww I'm crying! I hate it when things like this happen!! I want to hug them both! *sniffle* Love Lupin though, he makes me squee. *sniffles more* next chapterr! please? ^_^
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  • From YamiBakura on March 22, 2007
    Chapter 38

    This is where I want Harry to fuck Draco once more (yano, for the road and all that) and then take off and crusade against Lucius. ... ... Is that going to happen? We need more updates! I'd love to see Harry off him, especially with Draco acting all weird and stuff.
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