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Reviews for Harry Potter and The Secret Keeper (BP2)

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From Angelsfear on March 21, 2007
I love how Fred and George have done almost everything! hahaha That was even better than the truth or dare game X_X Can't wait for more!
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From Angelsfear on March 20, 2007
Lucius should die. He and Snape both. They deserve each other. Yeah. That's how I see it. Harry should get them both and tie them up in incriminating positions and then just kill them. I would help lol. I like the way Harry reacted to that and he better get to kill Lucius! lol I can't wait for more and I'm just going to cuddle Draco now... in my mind hahahaha X_X
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From Angelsfear on March 20, 2007
*droooool* if this was hot before its on fire now O_O THAT was fantastic! I love the sneering-Draco :D and Fred and George make everything sexier hahaha LOVE IT! Moreeeeeessss
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From graballz on March 20, 2007
Daft Fear has a brilliant plan!!! YES DEATH TO SNAPE!!!!! (Wanna team up and go have some fun? haha We can kill two assholes at once and hit Lucius too! Man, I'm gonna enjoy that! *growls*)

Chapter 35--HAHAHAHAHAHA Oh, good! Some humor to help me along!!! I know the power is in Harry's cock! We all know that!!! BAH HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA Oh shit and that was before Fred and George showed up???? Oh, dude, we're all fucked now! First I died from fear, and was resurrected, only to die from laughing now!!! BRILLIANT!

OH FUCKING SHITE HAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHA Draco.............Ron.........*laughing like a maniac while trying not to break the laptop as I roll around the bed in hysterics*

Oh god! Another round of hot sex??? THESE BOYS ARE STALLIONS!!!! IT'S FUCKING GREAT! OH FUCK I think *pant pant* can't think Draco shirt.....ripping.......*incoherent whimper*

GAHHHHH I CAN'T THINK PAST THE POINT OF NOT BEING ABLE TO THINK Draco's dirty talk..............fucking hottest thing! *panting and whimpering and whining and crying* AND IT'S SO FUCKING HOTTTTT!!!

quivering....whimpering.....absent of thought jello...........

**We interrupt this regularly scheduled review because the reviewer has to go to....take care of a couple of things. Reviewing will resume upon the posting of the next chapter. Thank you for your understanding.**
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From graballz on March 20, 2007
Somehow I missed the "Chapter 34" memo, so now I get to review two at a time! YAY!

Chapter 34--OH FUCK! NO, babies, don't leave the house!!! Something BAD will happen! Okay, new clues...

FUCK YOU, SNAPE! OH SHIT! HOW DARE YOU, YOU GREASY GIT! "Potter's whore?" I FUCKING HATE YOU! BITCH!

OH NO YES GO HARRY! Oh shit, they're being watched??? *whimper* Lucius? I'LL PROTECT YOU, BABIES! LET ME AT THAT LOWLIFE!

*relief* I'm sagging with relief. If the bed wasn't under me, I'd be on the floor....I'm a puddle......oh HONEY! You can fall apart! Harry's right there! He'll hold you and keep you safe and help you! PUMPKIN! (wow, that's the first time anyone's ever elicited THAT pet name for Draco from me in a review, I do believe!)

*squeal* Good boy, Harry! That's right, just hold my baby! Er, your baby....our cute as hell, little blonde baby! OH FUCK! How the HELL do you segwey so seamlessly from "falling apart" to FUCKING HOT SEX!!!!!!

I'm not complaining but GOD DAMN I love it! *gasp whimper* Delectable torture! this is the BEST kind of torture!!!! LRIGT! (I think that was supposed to be "alright") 4 FINGERS FUCK I CAN'T TYPE ANYMORE My brain is in a mush of sex on the floor! OH FUCK! Harry's whimper is my undoing!!!!!! OH GOD

I've been put through the wringer, and I still have another chapter to read!!!!! FUCKING LOVE IT!
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From LycheeTea on March 19, 2007
Their so sweet! Damn Snape for making Harry feel bad, I'm glad that their inseperable too... lol
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From crazycheryl on March 18, 2007
Please can't wait, want more must have. Will do movie marathon until. Must read more! It really is as go as a published book. Please don't quit it would be a waste of tallent.
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From Snarrylover on March 18, 2007
ch34:

gods. im totally on the edge of my seat now that lucius is back. im so scared for draco and i dont even want to think what would happen to him if his father got a hold of him. that sick fick

cant wait for more, cheers!

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From Angelsfear on March 17, 2007
I think Snape should just die. Yep. I think that's a brilliant plan. Death to Snape. That's my new slogan hahaha. Hot scene afterwards though, but I'm still worried about Harry and Draco! *whimpers* need moreee X_X
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From Snarrylover on March 17, 2007
omg! omg! omg! omg! omg!omg! omg! omg! omg! omg! omg! omg!omg! omg!
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From Angelsfear on March 17, 2007
Oooh I'm so excited to find out more! I felt so bad for Draco though... Harry will protect him! hehe I love it!
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From yume1122 on March 17, 2007
Here we go. here comes the build to the climax. ^_^
i'm waiting in rapt attention for Draco's confession of all that's been done to him. ^_~
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From graballz on March 17, 2007
Chapter 33--OH FUCK! I'LL KILL YOU, LUCIUS!!!!!! YOU MISERABLE WRETCH!!!!!! *whimper* It tore me up inside to watch Draco be so terrified of his father! what happened?? (I think I can guess, but I wanna hear it from you)

MUST HAVE NEXT CHAPTER!!!! Please?
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From Angelsfear on March 16, 2007
Yay horcrux is defeated! Boo poor Draco gots hurted! I was torn between feeling triumphant and feeling scared to death the whole way through haha It was awesome and FINALLY Ron is GETTING SOME hahaha sorta. At least he might not bother Harry and Draco so much now! Loved it, can't wait for more!
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From graballz on March 16, 2007
Chapter 32--OH SHIT!!! FUCK THAT WAS A (nice) SURPRISE!!! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH

Is it a pubic hair???? OH BARF! GOD WHAT AM I THINKING??? EWWWWWWWWWWW

*whimper* DRACO!!!! OH NO, DRACO! Mmmmm "touch me" Sorry, I know Draco's in pain and all.......GOD I'M INSATIABLE!

Uh oh......UH OH Angry magic??? Should they let Draco go to sleep??? OH YAY NO SLEEP! JUST BLOODY GOOD SEX ALRIGHT SEX AND HORCRUXES! ME LIKEY! hahahahahahaha Harry's wand *giggle*

And I LOVE the fact that sex is the answer to EVERYTHING! It is just as it should be with Harry and Draco! Awwwwwwwwwwww Draco's always right! and I LOVED the interchange between them at the end!!! SO SWEET
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