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Reviews for Devils and Angels

By : PotionsMistress1
  • From SnarkyB on March 05, 2007
    Right now your story is 'okay.' It could become 'good' if you took the time to clean it up a bit. I also suggest that learn the difference between the words 'your' and 'you're.' You switch them consistently. The AFF.net administrators may delete your story, thinking it was written by someone under age--as the level of your writing suggests to me it was. After all, that's a mistake someone who's been to high / secondary school shouldn't make.
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  • From MidnightLilly on March 03, 2007
    This fic is great you better not stop writing it, or I might spank you.
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  • From Hambares on March 03, 2007
    "tumble down the stairs"??? Oh, I hope you are alright! I fear that Harry will turn his back on Snape, judging by the title of your next part. Please let their be a happy end to this!
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  • From Chinu on March 01, 2007
    Son't stop it there you evil >.< the poot ones... But very well written never the less ^^
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  • From AkumaKawa on February 28, 2007
    Woah..

    So you're going to follow the HBP plot? Even though Sirius is still alive? So did you rise him from his death or did the Ministry thing happen but Sirius wasn't killed?

    And Sev isn't giving Harry enough credit, Harry's enough of a snoop to try to figure things out.

    He might not know until the night that Dumbledore is killed about what was going on, but I am sure he can figure out that Sev was pressured into it.

    I don't think Sev will lose Harry's love.

    Keep up the brilliant work, coolsa.
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  • From Leentjef on February 28, 2007
    wow very very good but als very sad
    i hope that sev doesn't looses harrys love
    keep going and post soon
    bye bye
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  • From Hambares on February 27, 2007
    Such a sad ending to this chapter!
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  • From MidnightLilly on February 27, 2007
    Keep writing=)
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  • From Leentjef on February 25, 2007
    this was very very good keep going and post soon
    bye bye
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  • From Hambares on February 24, 2007
    "As I Walk by Myself" ... hmmm, I am curious. I hope Severus or Harry doesn't have to die for one of them to walk alone!
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  • From AkumaKawa on February 24, 2007
    Wicked.
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  • From MidnightLilly on February 24, 2007
    Keep writing
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  • From AkumaKawa on February 22, 2007
    Poor Harry.

    I hope he doesn't do some noble gesture and try to dump Snape to protect him. That would just break him.

    Keep up the awesome work, coolsa.
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  • From Hambares on February 22, 2007
    Awwwwwww! That was so sweet of Harry!
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  • From MidnightLilly on February 22, 2007
    Poor Severus he probably was totally exahusted. I'm sure Harry at his age would be a monster in the sack.
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