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Reviews for A Pound of Flesh

By : PennilynNovus
  • From starrynite45 on April 27, 2009
    It's really intense moment! I never expected him to accept easily...poor Hermione! BTW, I still wanna see happy ending though it seems like it may not happen soon. LOL

    Can't wait for next chap!
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  • From redneckpassion on April 27, 2009
    Aww. I actually cried when I read this.

    Please don't let this be the end for my fave non-real whip. :(
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  • From elladee on April 27, 2009
    Heart-wrenching chapter! I really feel for them both. Although I know how I hope this will end (happily~♥!!), I'm totally clueless about how things will get there or what will happen now, for either of them. But I love your writing and know I'll be riveted by whatever you write next. ;D Looking forward to more of this story, as always~!
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  • From caseyjarryn on April 26, 2009
    wow!! that was great!! loved it!
    but there better be a happy ending once Draco has calmed down, and Hermione explains that she didnt know who did it to him until then!!
    update soon!!
    xoxox
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  • From trixiedust on April 26, 2009
    Well, here comes some good stuff, yes??!!

    To me, I feel bad for Hermoine because he didn't even give her a chance to logically explain it, but obviously you didn't want him to do that, lol, thus why the story unfolded as it did.

    I expect that now Draco is going to try and figure it all out, his money, the family home, etc. Perhaps finding out that he is a wanted man might help him to understand the choices that Hermoine did. Though I tend to see him in court and THEN learning what Hermoine did, the stupid git.

    Congratulations on a well crafted story, I still love the bits about finding her memories and that she herself was the one to do what was done.

    Bravo, I hope the next chappie isn't a month away, but much closer!
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  • From Jaynie on April 26, 2009
    For something two years in the making, it was definitely worth the wait. I loved it!
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  • From dragongirl on April 26, 2009
    That was intense and the frase that you end this chapter was simply a stroke of brilliance.. MORE MORE MORE..... PLEASE
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  • From mlui on April 26, 2009
    His anger and rage is understandabe. I hope everything will turn out okay. Though, I was a bit surprised he didn't ask what's happening in the wizarding world now? I guess he was too upset to ask, but I hope he'll do so later. Great chapter and I can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From MegNutz on April 26, 2009
    OMFG!!!! I hope you know that you had me crying while reading this chapter lol damn it! oh that was sooo worth the wait u don't even know lol can't wait until the next chapter and hope hope hope! it it soon. like I always so you are an amazing writer and that I just love this story!!! keep up the good work!
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  • From Rosamund on April 26, 2009
    Brilliant, brilliant, brilliant. No other words can escape me right now.
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  • From margotlefaye on April 26, 2009
    As harrowing as I expected, and as it should have been. I'm really looking forward to how you resolve things. Draco has his memories, but he's a wanted man. How does he move on from here? Hermione is in love with him, but how can she possibly reconcile that with her job and with, well, everything and everyone else in her life? And, of course, how you are going to resolve their relationship. I'm hoping that when he calms down and remembers that she told him she oblviated herself, he'll relent enough to hear her side of things. Which will still leave all the external issues for them to deal with. Good job. I can't wait for more.
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  • From ochitduzon on April 26, 2009
    Your story is very unique. The first time i read it i got so engrossed in it so much that i was able to finis the chapters in one night! I couldnt believe that it was Hermione all along. You really are a very clever writer! I didnt foresee that this is will be the end of the long search.

    I feel so sorry for Draco and i feel a little anger toward Granger. But love will find a way, right? I know Draco will come around. PLease update soon. the waiting is killing me....
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  • From HighViscosity on April 26, 2009
    Seriously, a few hours ago, I was sitting around wondering if any stories would be updated by the time I got back home... and I asked myself what I wanted updated most, and it was this! So, thanks for excellent timing!

    My one criticism, is that I don't think Hermione should have left without promising she would keep him out of Azkaban or something... that maybe she should have tried to explain basic things before she.. debliviated(?) him...
    Other than that, excellent, very sad. I really liked the part with Pansy, it seemed like such a natural thing for him to suddenly remember.
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  • From Eilisbelle on April 26, 2009
    what a *wicked* chapter!!!! Truly worth the wait!!
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  • From Phoenix2000 on April 22, 2009
    OMG! I thought you did a great job with this chapter. Hermione's heartache really came through. I could actually feel her pain - I even cried! Of course I expect angst once Draco finds out what Hermine did but I also am hoping for a happy ending! Also I hope you explain how Draco will not be sent to Azkaban. After all wasn't that mentioned earlier in the story? Anyway, can't wait for more.
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