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Reviews for A Pound of Flesh

By : PennilynNovus
  • From Alli525 on April 18, 2009
    You had trouble with this chapter? It was AMAZING. Especially that line "though around them, bodies undulated and the world went on." So beautiful and wistful.
    I can't wait to get the next chapter!!
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  • From Qedesha on April 17, 2009
    you are not 100% sold on it?... well....I definitely am...I absolutely loved this chapter, maybe more than any other previous one... I wept while reading it. really. it was so beautiful and sweet but painfull and bitter at the same time... like, e.g., Scarlett and Rhett on Charleston beach after almost drowning... I am preying for happy end.... let Draco be angry, but let him also realize that just night before viewing the memories he claimed to love her and looked like he ment it seriously... and Hermione should also get something nice, especially as she deems herself undeserving of love...(please, have mercy...with us and them both...)
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  • From margotlefaye on April 15, 2009
    Fabulous chapter. I'm so relieved to hear that you've got most of the next part written because I might expire from sheer impatience if I have to wait too long. (Although, still, please take your time and make sure you are happy with it before you post.) I know what my preference for the ending would be, with Draco initially devastated but eventually forgiving Hermione. In other words, yes, happy, but not instant all-is-forgiven fluff. Instead, a realistic working through of the issues that need to be worked through (including his legal status). Whatever you do I'm sure will be well worth reading.
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  • From elruefaerie on April 15, 2009
    WONDERFUL story! I love how extensive your vocabulary is too. The descriptions and explanations are very well written! I can't wait to read the ending (and I'll vote for the happy ending while I'm here :D)
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  • From SynneR on April 15, 2009
    NNNNO!
    YOU CAN'T MAKE THIS A SAD ENDING
    I love them too much!
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  • From MegNutz on April 14, 2009
    OMG!!!! I swear to god I did a happy dance when I saw that you updated. I LOVE this chapter. I was listening to the song "fall for you" by Secondhand Serenade just on a whim when reading this. that song and this chapter combined had me in tears!!!!crying like a baby I swear lol *sigh* well I can't wait for the next chapter you don't even know and I hope that it is soon!!!! much luv to you and your amazing writing skills
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  • From SeayKat on April 14, 2009
    HAPPY ENDING HAPPY ENDING HAPPY ENDING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From HighViscosity on April 14, 2009
    I was totally freaked by the first chapter, and decided not to continue on... how could any good story start with Draco Malfoy as a stripper, right?
    But... you updated, and I was bored... and HOLY GOD IT WAS FANTASTIC! The story. I mean, wow! With it being Hermione-- holy crap plot twist I hadn't expected, and yet it was so completely obvious and amazing and I'm going to end this sentence now.

    Basically, please update soon, and as for the ending-- I couldn't care less, as long as it's not unrealistically sappy. Because, woah... yeah!
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  • From GreyLakes on April 14, 2009
    Aww, I really want them to be together, but I might agree to a dash of angst as well;)
    I have to admit that I don't really want this story to end... Will you be doing a sequel to it?
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  • From nmos on April 14, 2009
    greatt updatee. i don't know why you weren't happy with that chapter.
    i can't wait until your next one.
    also, maybe angst and eventually a happy ending?

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  • From Lenler on April 14, 2009
    Hello
    i think this story is great and this chapter was very sweet.
    I can
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  • From HermioneMalfoFan on April 14, 2009
    You simply CANNOT have an angsty ending to that! They deserve to be happy! Pretty, pretty please? Oh, I know, I am very much one of the daysies and butterflies kind of girl - but hey, when real life sucks, at least in fanfiction it can be good, right?

    I LOVE your story, I really do. I know that I didn't review a lot (shame on me), but it's really really great. This chapter was heart-wrenching. I can immagine it was hard to write, but you did a fabulous job!
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  • From elladee on April 14, 2009
    Great chapter, I really enjoyed it. Their interaction was so sweet and tender in this chapter, I'm afraid to see how things will change after the truth comes out! I most deeeeefinitely want a happy ending for these two. I think an angsty conclusion to this story would just kill me!! :( I'm glad to hear that the next chapter is well underway, I look forward to reading it!!
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  • From RyGirl824 on April 14, 2009
    OH! This chapter was amazing! You actually had me crying. I can't imagine how Hermione must feel, the poor dear. And having to worry about how Damien/Draco is going to react...
    Pleeeeease update as soooooooon as you can!
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  • From Eilisbelle on April 14, 2009
    I want an angsty-happy ending. Great chapter!!! So can't wait to read 'Tomorrow'!!!
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