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Reviews for A Pound of Flesh

By : PennilynNovus
  • From mag7ical on April 14, 2009
    wow, I just read this story beginning to end and I am hooked. The twist of Hermione being the obliviator was amazing. I totally did not expect that. Now I can't wait for Draco to finally get his memories back. Damien's sweet but I like snarky Draco. I think it should be a happy ending. He obviously won't be happy at first. But I think he'll understand that she did it to save his life. (I hope). Pls, update soon!!
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  • From kazfeist on April 14, 2009
    He should get pissed off and leave her, and then come to the wizarding world and find her. So a mixture of the two. I mean, after all, he's gonna be mad she humiliated him, but after he gets over that, he'll see she really did try to do what was best for him. So two chapters...the one where he blows up and the one where he and she get back together. :D
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on April 14, 2009
    Happy happy happy happy happy happy happy

    But, that's just my vote. lol I am REALLY glad you updated, even though you made me tear up throughout most of that chapter. Merlin, I ached for both of them. That was brilliantly done. Thank you. Looking forward to the next chapter with anticipation and trepidation. Fingers crossed!

    Thanks,
    HG4eva
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  • From KellyJCR on April 14, 2009
    You are killing me with this. I am in tears and its all your fault. I was hoping she would get around to telling the the whole truth but alas we have to wait. I was quite pleased with this chapter even if you werent. Hermione being who she is would obviously be devestated with what she had done. Especially because she now knows she is the reason for his misery. Love him or not she is not the type of person to put someone in a situation that would cause them distress and unending sadness. I would think the ending would be very angsty however with this I need it to be happy all the same. I have really fallen in love with "Damien" and want them both to be happy although there needs to be a bit of drama after she spills the story to him.. Please get back to us soon I am to curious how this all plays out. Well done!!!
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  • From dragongirl on April 14, 2009
    OMG OMG OMG this was wonderfull very sweet this was a mesmorizing goodbye... Simply brilliant.. I can't wait on what is coming next, please do not make us wait to long.. :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 14, 2009
    I wanted to say a lot here but all I can manage at the moment is how amazed I am that you've created a moment in time that is so perfectly beautiful and yet so devastingly painful for them too. Can I just put you on pause now and have that moment forever too? I really don't want them to have that tomorrow. Hmmm, I'm off to find tissues. :( Wonderful, magical stuff, my dear.
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  • From mlui on April 14, 2009
    This chapter was so sad and bittersweet. I hope Draco will eventually forgive Hermione. And I wonder if he's going to say anything about her asking to be called Hermione, and her calling him Draco. He didn't seem like he noticed, but he's done that before...so, I'm not sure if it's in his subconscious this time or not. I don't mind both angst and a happy ending, but please, it has to be happy!!! I terribly dislike sad/tragic endings. It really gets me depressed...but I'm avidly awaiting the next chapter. The next chapter isn't the last is it?
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  • From LadyDisdain on April 14, 2009
    Woow wonderful chapter once again! I've been hooked to your story when you just started it and I found it back a few weeks ago. It's brilliant,. your writing style., foreshadowing., perfect! The only thing I have to say is: HAPPY ENDING PLX...couldn't bear if this was a sad or unhappy ending., Please please please make it end happy., can't wait for the next update dearie!!
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  • From Jaynie on April 14, 2009
    I think you should be sold on that last chapter because it was great. I love reading your updates. My heart was aching for them the entire time; they've grown on me so much. I can't wait to see what comes of Hermione's confession. I can't wait for the next chapter!

    As for the ending. I've always been a sucker for a happy one. Draco deserves to find true love, especially after all he's been through. I don't think I could stand them not ending up together.
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  • From mosaic on April 14, 2009
    finally an update! wow, so sad. i'm voting for a happy ending. they've been going through so much pain here for the last while, i'd say they deserve some happiness.
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  • From rox4787 on April 14, 2009
    love it cant wait to read more please please please please please update soon and i think there should be a happy ending well i will like to see a happy ending
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  • From margaritama on April 14, 2009
    Oh Penni: this was so beautiful I was in tears. I'm so sad and frightened for both of them. I missed this story and forgot how much until I saw the new chapter. Lord, I'm praying for a Draco/Hermione together ending please please please. I don't think they could survive without each other.

    Dear lord, you're scaring the hell out of me with not knowing what will happen. S'cuse me, I need some tissue.
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  • From wreckless2612 on April 14, 2009
    Happy ending! I love these characters too muchh!!
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  • From Rosamund on April 14, 2009
    Awesome, awesome, awesome! Please! I vote for an overall happy ending despite how Draco will react when a. tells him and b. he remembers. Not sure if both will be a storm (or not). Please update soon! come on, next chapter (NOT last!)
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  • From classsic on April 14, 2009
    You've already made me cry more times than I can count. Please please please give me my happy ending.

    I'm all teary-eyed once more. That was amazing. I'm so disappointed that hermione couldn't stop him. I love Draco's insecurities. It always wrenches my heart. Sigh.

    I cannot wait until the next chapter!
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