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Reviews for A Pound of Flesh

By : PennilynNovus
  • From Phoenix2000 on February 20, 2009
    Great chappie!!! And I was right. Very good. I'm very anxious to see what happens next. I like how you made Draco so vunerable but also keeping his typical 'Malfoy' qualities as well.
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  • From nmos on February 20, 2009
    excellent update!
    seriously.
    good job.
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  • From elladee on February 20, 2009
    Thanks for this explanation chapter!!! Now I'm so much more anxious to find out how Draco is going to react once the memory charm is reversed (since Hermione can reverse it, correct?)... I'm so afraid that the person he's become will disappear, and he'll revert back to the old Draco and absolutely loathe Hermione for hiding him amongst Muggles. Especially since she left him there for so long! Draco is like the kid whose parent forgot to pick him up after school... times 1000. haha

    I hope the next chapter will be posted soon~!!
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  • From mlui on February 20, 2009
    I wouldn't say "I knew it" per se, but I was really hoping for it not to be Hermione. Really. I just know she'll beat herself up and, well, I hope their relationship will still stand afterwards (if she releases his memory). But didn't she try to reverse the memory charm before and it didn't work? I'm glad Hermione (and we, as readers) know and great chapter! I'm looking forward to your next update! =)
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 20, 2009
    This and indeed the first chapters are my favourites, the first because it was so damn hot and raunchy and this one because it showed me just how amazing Hermione really is and I truly hope, when Damien is Draco again he realises what she did for him and what it cost her to do it. The story of how it all came to be was perfectly executed. Brilliant job!! :)
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  • From kazfeist on February 20, 2009
    Yup, you're right! But the previous chapter gave the biggest hint. I can understand now why you wrote before about Hermione's dread of him finding out the truth. Three years! Can't wait for the rest of the story. :D
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  • From Rosamund on February 19, 2009
    For my own pleasure of the latest chapter, just had to go reread "Jane" meeting Dearborn and then Malfoy's recollection of what he said about her. Oh, it just fit even more so :) Brilliant tie in to what happened back then. LOVED IT!!!
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  • From Rosamund on February 19, 2009
    That was quite the way to celebrate numero dos anniversay! I adored it! Reading it from Hermione's perspective was even more than I could ask for, so happy that it turned out that way. And the interactions with Dearborn were incredible and somewhat a surprise, although we knew he would figure in somehow. Absolutely fabulous chapter! But now...what will she do next?

    Thank you so much for posting during this exhaustive week of academic writing!

    Oh, and loved Draco smelling her and such. I still don't think he hated her...there must have been some feelings locked away, especially for him to trust her and not anyone else from the Order or Harry world

    ~Avanell
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  • From pickles87 on February 19, 2009
    I had a feeling it was her.
    With her job at the Ministry.
    Glad to know that Dearborn was taking care of young malfoy.
    waiting for more.
    next chapter will she tell him dearborn or malfoy
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  • From classsic on February 19, 2009
    Wow. I never would've guessed that Hermione would be the person to do all of this. It's so shocking. I have to say that I had to keep stopping myself from reading in one go for fear that I would start bawling. Poor Draco! I can't believe that Hermione had to get a job for him there as her last resort. I have to say that this was very clever of her... Great plan... even she didn't suspect herself. I can't wait for the next chapter!!! I want to know what Hermione thinks of all the memories she just uncovered. Great chapter as always. :D
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  • From Eilisbelle on February 19, 2009
    We finally know!!! Awesome chapter PN!!
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  • From queenizzy on February 19, 2009
    I really enjoy this story. You have a real knack for mystery writing. I was following this story on Colored Grey, but the site seems to have gone away. Hope you can update soon.
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  • From Auraki on January 29, 2009
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  • From caseyjarryn on January 25, 2009
    I only just got around to reviewing the last few chapters!!
    Loved them, this story keeps getting better!
    Cant wait for more!

    Casey
    xoxo
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  • From Phoenix2000 on January 22, 2009
    Love it! Love it! Love it! I think I know where you are going with this but I won't say anything - don't want to spoil it for anyone else. Keep up the good writing. I love how you are writing draco's character, I actually feel bad for him - poor baby!!
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