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Reviews for A Pound of Flesh

By : PennilynNovus
  • From Eilisbelle on December 06, 2008
    wicked chapter!!! Can't wait for the next installment!!
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on December 06, 2008
    Please forgive my rant, but I am feeling very "Draco"ish at the moment...

    Her cowardice and self-preservation is just pissing me off! How can she keep doing this to him? She supposedly loves him so much, but she will let him keep suffering and thinking he's losing his mind. She had the chance to tell him when he showed her the book. And, she's had hundreds since. Hell, even Ginny is trying to be helpful and supportive of a relationship she doesn't approve of, but Hermione is too selfish to see anything but her own needs and wants. ARGH!!!!!!!!!!!

    Okay, back to the normal HG4eva...nope, still to ticked with her. Sorry. I want them together. I want him to ultimately forgive her. And, for a long time I understood her thoughts and reasonings. But, now she's just being cruel. And, telling him when he's not coherent doesn't get her out of it, since she immediately made up a story about him being robbed instead of sitting him down and telling him the truth again.

    What is a sign of good writing? When a reader is actually so angry with one of your characters that she wants to enter the story to smack some intelligence into said character. You are that good.

    Thank you. I look forward to the next update.
    (the I promise I am not crazy) HG4eva
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  • From classsic on December 06, 2008
    I want to bang myself against the wall. Ergh. That was really frustrating - but in a good way of course. You will never disappoint me... but the story. Oh my god. I just want it to happen already. haha.

    Poor Draco though! I can't believe he thinks he's going crazy. :( He doesn't have a plausible explaination for what's happening to him and I feel so bad. Hermione was SO CLOSE. ERGGGGH! Please please update soon. I need to know what happens next. :(

    My favorite line:
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 06, 2008
    Bloody hell, I was so sure he was going to remember this time. And what about Dearborn? Is that really a coincedence that Draco started to remember something after Hermione left them alone? I'm getting a little annoyed with Hermione - she had her chance to tell him the truth and she didn't go through with it. I know why she didn't but this is just going to make things so much worse. And I suppose I'm clued in too late to the fact that it might well have been Hermione who obliterated him, hid him and then wiped her own memories. If that's the case, kudos to you for such an amazing plot bunny. :)
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  • From Rosamund on December 06, 2008
    Brilliant...and I am now more sure that Hermione was involved and had HER memory adjusted. ;) can't wait for MORE MORE MORE!!!
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  • From DracoIsMyDarkAngel on November 28, 2008
    aggh god damn you, i love this story a lot every time i read a new update it upsets me more and more that im starting to think that they wont end up together, but surely you wouldnt do that to us? surely it'll have a happy ending? i will truly be devastated if they dont... keep on i really wanna know how it ends!!
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  • From kazfeist on November 27, 2008
    Lord, Penny, you know how to draw out the tension. Can't wait. I hope Hermione's wish comes true, though. :D
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  • From Eilisbelle on November 26, 2008
    you're right!!! We will!!! Still a fabulous chapter though Pennilyn!!
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  • From madeleine on November 26, 2008
    I don't even know what to say really except that this story has absolutely captured me. The plot is unbelievable, very unique and extraordinary. I read all 20 chapters in one sitting, I just couldn't stop myself. You give enough information to keep me/us coming back for more without revealing to much about the outcome. I was actually supposed to read a book tonight for my Swedish class, guess I'll have to do that tomorrow =), but you know what? It was freaking worth it. I'm looking forward to the next installment and it will be the highlight of that day when I realise you've updated.
    /Madeleine
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  • From Qedesha on November 26, 2008
    I know this already got old...but i hope they are going to make it up afterwards...it being the "bludger to head"...and i really dont know how on earth am i going to manage to wait for ten full days...
    what else can i say? the chapter was GREAT (as usual) and the tension along with the open-endness almost unbearable (as usual) and im anxious to know how will it develope (as usual)....
    well, this whole tirade basically means that you are one fantastic author and i love your story...:)
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on November 26, 2008
    As much as I understand her reasoning, I just want to shake her!! She is supposed to be so darn smart, but she can't figure out that every day she doesn't say it is another dagger to the heart she is going to have to take. And, that flash gave me a mini-heart attack! Well done on your part. :-) I am so in love with this story it is simply ridiculous. You should write for the soaps! That is a compliment, by the way. :-)

    Oh, and I have to tell you now, I also wrote about them and the London Eye; different circumstances, but I did. I wrote it about 3 months ago when I got back from a trip to London. lol Just wanted to say how much I enjoy the fact that great minds think alike. ;-)

    Great job and I will be looking for more in 10 days!! HG4eva
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 26, 2008
    Aww that was so beautiful, romantic and sweet. That's going to make it hurt all the more when he finds out the truth. Yeesh!!
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  • From classsic on November 26, 2008
    HAHAHA. Yes, that was definitely such a teasing cookie!!
    But it's okay, the chapter was still worth it even if we didn't get what we wanted :P
    Awesome work as always. It was disappointing to see that Draco didn't realize what he said about the Yule ball, sigh. But I'm super glad that they told each other how they felt. :D

    I can't wait for the next update! They really do make my day. Winning that extra cookie in the beginning of the week was such a treat.
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  • From dragonsgirl on November 26, 2008
    That was amazing!! I honestly couldn't stop grinning when they both confessed! Such an amazing update. Can't wait to see what happens next! Keep up the awesome work!
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  • From Rosamund on November 26, 2008
    Ha! I beat the e-mail alert :) Again! Do I get a cookie? JK...Oh, I almost thought someone like Pansy might see them leaving the restaurant, but of course, the day had to be perfect. and the next chapter alludes to something happening...will someone discover him/them or will some really big memory hit him? Can't wait. OH, and you definitely made up for taking out the I Love You from the rain scene...THIS was actually perfect. ;)
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