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By : PennilynNovus
  • From nym on November 24, 2008
    Wow! I do love your story. Im so intrigued Lol. I'm a very picky reader and I dont really review much, even though i should, i know what its like wanting peoples feedback. But what you've written is so fantastic that I just had to review. The characterisation of both Hermione and Damien/Draco is very good. I feel so sorry for Hermione, I want her to tell him, but I know that in doing so she might lose the little piece of happiness that she has. For some reason I have this idea in my head that someone will beat her in telling him who he is. Like his identity will be found out and then be arrested by the MLE before she can do anything about it. It would just make the situation even harder to explain for her. Lol thats so mean (Sorry I'm on a sugar high and I've had little sleep). You can tell by the way you have written it that you've really thought about each aspect of the plot and how you intend for the story to play out. I like how Draco even though he doesnt know who he is, has parts of his core being leaching through Damien. Like his believe that he is magical. I cant remember exactly when I thought it, but I have this sneaking suspicion that the person behind Dracos loss of memory is Hermione herself. Although she hasnt finished her investigation, it just seems that from what you have written the only two powerful enough to create a memory charm that strong is a)Snape and b)Hermione. Something tells me that it isn't Snape. The only thing that doesn't make sense about that would be placing a memory charm on herself, but time will tell. I'm probably completely wrong but I thought i might put my two cents in Lol. I'm really looking forward to where you take the story, I'm hoping that in the end they will still be together and are excepted by Harry and Ron, whether they have a spat when he finds out and dont talk for awhile, or they have a spat then have really good make-up sex (Lol, Hermione would definately enjoy that) I am looking forward to whatever you come up with.

    Anxiously waiting
    Nym :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 19, 2008
    Oh dear, I want her to tell him, really I do and yet I want her happiness to last (which it can't this way, I know). Waiting anxiously to see what will happen next.
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  • From Qedesha on November 19, 2008
    oh and i forgot to say so the first time...but i think it was Tonks who hid him..that theory makes most sense to me at least...andromeda hadnt had to know...and tonks might have hid him elsewhere....OR andromeda might be skilled enough occlumen to hide lying from hermione...
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  • From Qedesha on November 19, 2008
    even though i read APOF since sth like 10th chapter, this is my first time reviewing...shame, i know...well, i just wan to tell, that i really REALLY love this story...it;s one of the best slashfics i ever read (and boy, did i read many...). well, i am very much looking forward to how does this turn out...and i;m (equally much) hoping for happy ending...or happy enough to let them stay together (after all maybe)...i say, let them have a row, let Draco be angry (as he has right to be)...but let them make up at the end...pleeease. i dont think i really care anymore about whether they find out who was it that brought him to the club....just let them be together...:)
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  • From kazfeist on November 19, 2008
    Penny, you're getting us closer and closer to the mystery's solution. I like that you've sort of been able to keep it in canon. Can't wait for the rest. :D
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on November 18, 2008
    Hi there. I haven't reviewed in a while and I do apologize, as I have never missed an update and tend to smile like an idiot when I see one. Anyway, I am still in love with this story, and I can't wait to see what your favorite part is. I am so sad for them, though. The truth is going to hurt everyone so badly. :-( And, poor Hermione. She's making it worse and worse by the day. She was so class last time. Why didn't she just blurt it out for goodness sakes. Rip the band-aid off! Now, when the truth comes out it will probably be from someone else and he will feel more betrayed than he would have before. Sigh...Yep, sad for both of them.

    But, REALLY happy you updated. :-) And, please do so again soon, okay? Thank you!! HG4eva
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  • From on November 18, 2008
    Well, I chose to post my theory here, so if I am right I will not spoil it for the others on the list serve. I think that Hermione was the one who hid Draco. I think they had a relationship during the war and she saved him, but oblivated herself for his safety and the guilt of her own betrayal. She never would imagine herself going to a strip club, so out of sight, out of mind, but fate had other plans for them. This is a spin off from one of the Alias storylines, so I could be way off base, but that is my vote. Why else would Damien think of a girl named Hermione and be drawn to a look a like? Cheers and keep up the great work!
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  • From LadyVoldemort87 on November 18, 2008
    I haven't reviewed in a while, but I'm just dropping a line to say I absolutely love this story, your writing is brilliant, as is the plot and sheer originality of your writing.

    Well done on creating such a fantastic fic.

    ~LadyVoldemort87~
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  • From dragonsgirl on November 18, 2008
    Ahhhhh! You are such a tease! lol everytime I see you've updated I get so excited about whether she's going to tell him yet!!! I love love love this story! But you tease! lol make me wait again for another update!
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  • From nmos on November 18, 2008
    great update
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  • From nonentity on November 18, 2008
    btw, that was such a sweet, sweet sex scene. My heart practically melted.

    That line about the lightning on his face niggling the edge of her memory was such a tease though . . .
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  • From nonentity on November 18, 2008
    The whole Tonks and Andromeda and grave thing is fascinating. Poor bewildered Draco. He's so sweet and Hermione's so in love.
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  • From Eilisbelle on November 18, 2008
    glad we're finally getting to the meat of the plot!!! Can't wait to see what happens next!!!
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  • From Rosamund on November 18, 2008
    Awesome, awesome, awesome...was Andromeda the one? Oh, I have so many more questions but must travel to the Bay Area tonight :) Thank you for posting!!! I need to reread later tonight...had to "rush" through in my excitement and trying to get ready. Thank goodness I'm packed!!!
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  • From Rosamund on November 18, 2008
    Ha! I beat your post...now on to read :)
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