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Reviews for A Pound of Flesh

By : PennilynNovus
  • From lemonade8 on April 10, 2010
    wait... I thought that Draco and Hermione obliviated each other when Draco was found guilty, then they were captured... I'm so confused! But I like a happy ending, so I won't complain. Lovely story, thank you!
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  • From newtothis on March 30, 2010
    i like Ron and i hate Draco.

    but i like your story

    you tried the ron and hermoine and had them fall apart, but bit by bit you had them come together as friends, that will allways be there for each other.

    as for draco you took your time and made them have a real contection, so at the end i like him

    that show some real talant.
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  • From VeraRozalsky on March 19, 2010
    On a recommendation from the reviewer who signs herself tenoh27, I read 'Pound of Flesh' over two weeks ago, and from the first chapter I was hooked. Excellent plotting--particularly the use of dream and nightmare to hint that the memory charm went both ways, so that it felt like no surprise, just a horrible revelation, when we found out who had done the deed. What was interesting about this piece was how the plot structure worked so well with the memory charm scene. There's no point in writing HP fanfiction if you don't play about with some of the magical technology, and this story did not disappoint in that regard. You made masterful use of Draco's amnesiac alter ego to point out the way he might have been without the upbringing he got... which is very much one of my own themes, so it was interesting to see it played out another way. The story definitely foregrounded the romance, but the background work did not feel like mere backdrop. It could well be edited differently and be a noirish detective thriller.

    Oh yes, and it's 180,000 words long and it ate my Sunday afternoon. But that's OK, because it really was candy--the first four chapters were absolutely the most splendid, addictive setup I have seen in a while, and I have been returning in the spirit of industrial espionage to see how you did it.

    Magic. Sheer magic.

    As writer and reviewer alike, I
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  • From BittyBlueEyes on March 07, 2010
    Wow... that was one of the best fanfics I've ever read. ^^ I just couldn't stop reading. The plot was so original, so complete and well thought out. The emotions and reactions were very realistic and so detailed. The writing style... absolutely incredible. I'm am seriously in awe and jealous of your talent! The descriptions, metaphors, and attention to detail... I was completely consumed by this story; absorbed in their world and emotionally enthralled by each step they took and each piece of their history that was revealed. This fanfic was phenomenal. Thank you!
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  • From Serranna on January 20, 2010
    Your story was recommended to me to me the other day and I just got through an unbelievably hot chapter one. Yum!

    Although, I was secretly hoping that he'd known exactly who she was the whole time.

    I love when boys are wicked!!!
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  • From swissmiss on December 15, 2009
    OMG. that was one of the most amazing draco hermione stories i've ever read. i am kicking myself right now for not reading this sooner. the only reason i didn't was because the title left me uncertain, but now i feel like an idiot. SO AMAZING. MAJOR KUDOS TO YOU.
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  • From fan8225 on November 19, 2009
    This story is wonderful. You are truly a gifted writer! Thanks for posting (and finishing) this great fic!
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  • From becka8199 on November 17, 2009
    Very good! I enjoyed til the end! =)
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  • From SynneR on September 29, 2009
    so the BEST ending!!!!!!! omg i cried a lil
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  • From jaceni50 on September 28, 2009
    I loved this story! Great way to end things and wow. I really thought you did a great job and even though I wasn't there in the beginning of your writing proccess I give you my support in the end. :)Loved IT!!!
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  • From Chibionna on September 28, 2009
    Thank you so much for writing that phenomenal story. I loved every word of it. I am a member of your LJ group already and will be keeping an eye out for more of your stories for sure. You are officially one of my favorite authors. Your writing is beautiful and lyrical, like the poems of old. Again, thank you for sharing and granting us a trip into your world.
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  • From From56to62 on September 27, 2009
    Oooo, i just realized that the last lines to the story parallel the last lines in the first chapter hahahah only cause i went back and re read the first chap because that's just what i dooooo. Bravo, you should feel very accomplished, i greatly greatly loved this story and I was one of the lucky people that only had to wait for the last dozen chapters or so to come out :) lol Thanks for writting it!
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 27, 2009
    Just wanted to say thanks for this fic. It was well written and quite the journey.
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  • From Silent Pluto on September 27, 2009
    oh man that was a great story! Wow, I just loved it!
    You are remarkable, kudos!!! ^_^
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  • From margaritama on September 27, 2009
    beautifully written ending....tender, sweet, rich and real.
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