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Reviews for A Pound of Flesh

By : PennilynNovus
  • From Bellavixen on November 11, 2008
    Absolutly love your story!
    Can't wait to see where it goes!
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  • From PotterEntourage on November 11, 2008
    I can't say it enough, this story is just brilliant! Mysterious, sexy, funny, heartbreaking, everything! She was so close to telling him about the magic! ARggggg! He's got to love her after all of this, he's just got to!
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 11, 2008
    Those chapters of serious brilliance just keep coming and we've got at least 12 more chapters to look forward too. What's not to love? Oh I do hope he doesn't hate her when he finds out who he is (even though I'm still undecided as to whether he'll find out for himself or she will tell him). And I was so surprised Ron didn't react violently to seeing the contraception potion in Hermione's cupboard. Yet again, well done. :)
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  • From kazfeist on November 10, 2008
    Really nice update, Penny! I know you're strenghtening Hermione for the inevitable blowup with Draco, but I still feel for her. I like that she's less damaged than before, and I'm still trying to figure out who Obliviated him....did I already guess Hermione herself? :D
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  • From Eilisbelle on November 10, 2008
    Pennilyn; damned good chapter!!! I was on pins and needles when Hermione was about to drop the bomb on Draco, but then, you pulled back!!!! I bet a lot of people are gonna have the same reaction I did!!! Good chapter, and I can't *wait* for the next installment.
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  • From mlui on October 15, 2008
    Great chapter!
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  • From Eilisbelle on October 15, 2008
    Was the school award the important thing to watch out for?? I caught that right away. I really enjoyed how Hermione cast two Unforgivables. I loved how you captured how it would feel to cast one. I felt bad for the girls at the end of the LARP(Live action role play). Can't wait to see what happens next!!
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  • From kazfeist on October 15, 2008
    Sorry, didn't see the school award Horcrux there. So, there are still only six, though. ???
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  • From kazfeist on October 15, 2008
    Loved the battle scene, Penny! As for what happened, the fact that there were only five Horcruxes caught my eye. No mention of Nagini or Harry himself. Also, the fact that Hermione killed and used Crucio. The grave....maybe it was Narcissa, already dead? And Bellatrix is being her with Polyjuice, which could make HER the one who put Draco in the Muggle world..... :D Keep it up, I'm on the edge of my seat. :D
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  • From bananasforyou on October 15, 2008
    just wow.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 14, 2008
    Oh MY Gawd!!! That was absolutely amazing (for want of a better word to describe how I'm feeling right now). I swear, I was right there in the middle of that battle, ghosting Hermione's every move, seeing what she saw, feeling what she felt. You made me feel a part of it and that, to me, is the most positive sign of a truly exceptional writer. I only wish I was half as good. Well done, dear writer, well done!!
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  • From tamtau on October 14, 2008
    I admire every word of this story and absolutely cannot wait for another update. It's getting me through uni. What an amazing job! Thank you so much for the time and effort you spend on this! Update soon?

    Tam
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  • From mlui on September 30, 2008
    Great chapter! I really wish she would tell him though...the longer she waits, the harder it's going to be for both of them to overcome this.
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  • From KellyJCR on September 29, 2008
    I absolutely love this story. I find the pressure Hermione is under to be so real that I can almost feel it. The way you write Draco and her together along with her guilt and his confussion are tragicly beautiful. I can't help but fell something horrible is about to happen. Can't wait for more they way you write this story had really gotten under my skin. Well done!!!
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  • From ColdWaterFairy on September 29, 2008
    A chapter as good as that is worth waiting a month for. I liked the talk Hermione and Tom had. It was very insightful. I'm really looking forward to future chapters.
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