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Reviews for A Pound of Flesh

By : PennilynNovus
  • From dragongirl on July 26, 2009
    Ok 1st no tissue alerts, this was so heartbroken that I need almost a box of tissues... Could you please send me a note to my email ishtar2012@aol.com on this alternative ending for livejournal. Again this was simply amazing.
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  • From margaritama on July 26, 2009
    That was BRILLIANT - wow, I could taste the tension, regret, love, anger, desperation....UGH! WONDERFUL. Draco is so lost and she's so connected to him. She wants to help him but doesn't know how, the truth is he needs to help himself. He needs to find himself. Can't wait for more and to see what you mean by alternate ending.
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  • From trixiedust on July 26, 2009
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    Alternate ending? Oh no, that sounds like they aren't going to be together?
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  • From Robs on July 26, 2009
    Noooooo! He can't leave! Not after that! I thought they were getting back together! Oh the agony! I'm glad Draco let her explain, but he can't leave her! Not now! I can't wait to see what happens next. Look forward to the next chapter!
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  • From WesleyY7 on July 26, 2009
    This last chapter broke my heart. I love how you showed both sets of friends being there for Draco and Hermione. Tom, taking care of drunk Draco. The Weasleys trying to cheer Hermione up. But that final scene brought tears to my eyes.
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  • From MegNutz on July 26, 2009
    omg no!!!!!!! seriously I think the more chapters u write the more I cry lol only two more chapters to go???? too short lol well that was another great chapter and worth the wait and can't wait for the next one even if it means its getting closer to the end :(
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  • From WitchHazel on July 13, 2009
    I'm loving this story, I do hope you finish it.
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  • From stargazer37373 on July 13, 2009
    Oh, and your story is brilliant, by the way. I'm not an author, so I don't have any particulars, but altogether, it is incredible so far. Please update soon. I'd hate to have to guess how this ends.

    -Pixie
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  • From stargazer37373 on July 13, 2009
    I have been waiting MONTHS for you to update this story. Literally. And, I never review stories, but I created an account on this website, even though I am not a writer, to tell you to UPDATE ALREADY! PLEASE. Or don't start stories that you aren't going to finish. It is INCREDIBLY aggrevating.

    -Pixie
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  • From AvivaAria on July 12, 2009
    PLEASE up date soon, this is such a great story.
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  • From Bellafidelis on July 05, 2009
    I just starting reading this because it sounded like a sure bet for some grade A smut, and now I'm addicted and checking for updates more than I should. This idea is so creative, and you've worked so much deeper meaning into this fic that I could not have foreseen from the summary, that I was tearing up when Hermione revealed herself. I love your exploration of Draco Malfoy in such a strange and unlikely 'what-if' situation, and I'm dying to see how he'll handle choosing between identities. Favorite part: Draco's chant/prayer before each show. I love how you didn't let us know what he was saying at first, and then when we do find out, it's so poignant and revealing. Poor Draco. I LOVE LOVE LOVE your fic, and I'm hoping for more! -Bella
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  • From GoodGirlsBadBoys on June 09, 2009
    I have been addicted to this story from the start. The wicked intentions, the tantalizing sex scenes and the well written and presented story. I commend you for taking us on this emotional journey of love, loss and fear. But now I must beg.... PLEASE GIVE US A HAPPY ENDING! I know you plan to end soon, and I'm sure you've already written your ending. I have written three stories that I plan to upload one day, when I am done, so I understand a writer's desire to end on their own terms. But I would be remiss if I didn't ask. They have both suffered so much, and have loved each other dearly. It actually hurts that they can't find a chance to heal and grow together.

    See how good a writer you are, I am sad for fictional characters in a fictional scenerio to the point of begging a stranger to give them joy. ;-) Well done!
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  • From LadyDisdain on June 06, 2009
    Wooow,. wonderful new chapter! i'm glad you updated again., I adore your story., You go girl!
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  • From MegNutz on June 06, 2009
    first all I wanted to say that was another GREAT chapter...even if the wait for it was a lil bit long lol. however it was worth the wait....but then again all of ur chapters are:D trust me it makes my day when I see a new chapter is up from u. can't wait for the next one and hope its soon!!! LOVE LOVE LOVE this story but then again i've porbably already said that in other reviews lol keep up the good work!!!
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  • From margotlefaye on June 06, 2009
    Wow. The hits keep coming for both of them, don't they? Great chapter. Of course.
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